Copy a dictionary and become ambidextrous. If you really trust God you'll take my advice to heart and start. If not, there is always money....hahehhaha... But seriously, not bad. Your mind is like a cup, might as well cause it to overflow. But who am I to tell you what to do to your mind, or life, for that matter. I just see it as if you have an over abundance of god you'll really PHREEstyle. Freedumb<Phreesmart. God is word, and vice versa. It's a one time heaven, pzzz, sleep when dead. Rest, 1
Hey dude if you want to make a real rap song your going to need to tune up the vocals a bit. They are a little bit weak for the song. Otherwise the song is decent.
Intro is to long... should probably cut about 10-15 seconds off the front... good orchestration as the main loop its a lil on the soft side though... Bring the volume up on it a tad if you can. drums are a little on the weak end. Have anything to bring bass / kick up? Lyrics are good! great rythem to em.
the opening and closing rappers lyrics are a lil slower then the other 2 its a little off putting but fine. all in all though great work!
Dam jonny goes in
CalzoneModz 1 year ago
Poser! I this is a ghost face killa mix tape... Good try tho
musicmusic195 2 years ago
Copy a dictionary and become ambidextrous. If you really trust God you'll take my advice to heart and start. If not, there is always money....hahehhaha... But seriously, not bad. Your mind is like a cup, might as well cause it to overflow. But who am I to tell you what to do to your mind, or life, for that matter. I just see it as if you have an over abundance of god you'll really PHREEstyle. Freedumb<Phreesmart. God is word, and vice versa. It's a one time heaven, pzzz, sleep when dead. Rest, 1
combustible420 2 years ago
your freestyle is hot,,i'am feeling the beat
trap888 2 years ago 2
This is cool! You should check out my videos though! I have LOTS of good music!
moosiklol 2 years ago
u guys got flow
82RN 2 years ago 2
Thats hiw you do it
qzz5 2 years ago
that last dude go super hard
Texancubsfan001 2 years ago 2
Amazing Rappin! 5/5
TheMacintoshExpert 2 years ago 2
Yo this is dope! Were yall hail from?
frshvr6 2 years ago 2
hey dude nice rap keeping working on it and i wish you the best of luck in the future and i hope to buy ur disc one day
sijmenen 2 years ago 6
Great song for your first one! I like the flow of the second guy a lot! keep going guys!! ;)
cricketshady 2 years ago 5
Hey dude if you want to make a real rap song your going to need to tune up the vocals a bit. They are a little bit weak for the song. Otherwise the song is decent.
AgricoreHardcore 2 years ago
nice music............ u should come check out my channel and check out all the stunts and shit me and my friends do
feardabears 2 years ago
Not bad at all. But i have to agree with erccmmo the intro is to long
44olive 2 years ago
Hey man... got some comments on the music...
Intro is to long... should probably cut about 10-15 seconds off the front... good orchestration as the main loop its a lil on the soft side though... Bring the volume up on it a tad if you can. drums are a little on the weak end. Have anything to bring bass / kick up? Lyrics are good! great rythem to em.
the opening and closing rappers lyrics are a lil slower then the other 2 its a little off putting but fine. all in all though great work!
erccmmo 2 years ago 4
"beyond the sky, wet my girls face leave her outside to dry." best line.you guys are good!
ballreptiles32 2 years ago 4