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  • The sound is so annoying. Fix it if you want people to watch it. I love to watch the whole thing, but I can not stand the sound. so please.

  • what a load of crap, watched about 3 seconds

  • I made a film. Just recent, shot a short film called "Lemons & Lemonade" starring Connor Stanhope, child actor who played Lex Luthor on Smallville. Check it out if you got time! >.>

  • C+

  • No shit this film deserves an award, the stupidest piece of shit ever filmed on the planet earth.

  • that noise!!!!!!!! URGH!!fucking annoying... it makes it even worse that my volume was on full blast at first...

  • Please check out my latest two short films: The Sci-Fi drama "NUMERICA" where for every child born an adult must volunteer to die and also a fun little comedy short entitled "Love Sick".

    Just click my username and head to my channel, thanks so much! :)

  • WTFFFFFFFFFF!!!!!

  • what the fuck is that noiiiiiise?!!!!

  • No Greater love.... Winner of "Most Annoying Film Ever."

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  • @sebsomm Your film is a god damn piece of shit, and im not alone in this. Belive me.

  • @victorhui26 i dont even have a film uploaded wtf?

  • @sebsomm fuck you anyways.. haha

  • WHY, after uploading this film and finding corrupt, delete it and try uploading again? You have done more harm than good!

  • nice sound effects

  • i wish the sound would've been better, cos i wanted toi watch this... but... yeah. :/

  • Which award did it win????????????? :/

  • one advice....

    keep making movies but...

    Watch some first.

    Please.

  • was i suppose to go death

  • @jstmeconman deaf...if it made you go death then you clearly found it slightly worse than i did...

  • please repost with the sound fixed

  • The sound is wretched static...what's with that?

  • bull shit...... 

  • I thought Christains were against gay...

    Coz' I swear to fucking christ if I had watched the last 3 minutes and 20 seconds that would of been it, I'd pfficiall be gay.

    Fuckkk...I hope seriousness wasn't the key for this shit.

  • I thought Christains were against gay...

    Coz' I swear to fucking christ if I had watched the last 3 minutes and 20 seconds that would of been it, I'd pfficiall be gay.

    Fuckkk...I hope seriousness wasn't the key for this shit.

  • Wth is up with the sound in the beginning???

  • if any 1 can watch my shorts on my page i could do with some feedback, won let me post link so just go on to my page. thanks

  • If you don't want to feel like the kid at the beggining then stop watching it.

  • very funny actually, my shit acts better than you. LOL :D you mad eme laugh, so good job

  • what the fuck ?

  • Terribly. The Static does not work. Waste of my time. no star rating.

  • is this the worst rated short film on youtube??? because it's not that bad... It's just annoying

  • I can't take the staticcc!!! it's like sooo annoying!

  • this was really good except i don't know why you were pooping in the beginning

  • i like the concept... but camera work shuld hv been more betetr wic will clearly potrayed ur ideas into more efffective way ...

  • just a corny stuff!

  • right from the test the shot selection of angle make me feel sick so I stopped

  • i mean right from the start

  • no offense but this sucked

  • This is an absolutely retarded film.

  • Honestly I'd say this could be better and more powerful if you remake it, and fix a lot of the small problems. I know it's a short movie, but you should add another minute ore two in there just to flesh out the character. He's sitting in front of a toilet talking about wanting to kill himself then walking around with a backpack for some reason - doesn't make sense. Throw in some interesting camerea angles and fix the sound.

    And you don't have to act 'big' during a close up - its a close up.

  • well, that was just about GOD AWFUL

  • What the Deuce! come on man, that was lame. Im going to make a movie and if its crap i can just tell people to watch this one, then I will probably recieve an award for mine!

  • I like how the guy that made this and acted in this was a critic to his own film saying "this is a very powerful film" haha. Not really. Then again, if it's God's will, anybody can get something out of nothing. Good try mate.

  • Christian faggotry.

  • Major lack of story and horribly directed. Directing your actors to overact CAN work (i.e David Lynch films) but in this case it just made me LMAO. your technical issues need alot of work aswell (i.e sound). My advice would b to start with the basics.

  • The idea was good. It could have created a really touching and inspiring video. but...wtf. The audio was terrible. It really annoyed me I just put it on mute. The acting was terrible even for the little acting that was required. Plus nothing even happened. You should have continued the story more. I don't know that's just me.

  • the sound was a catastrophe. and if that was what the guy in the headphones was listening to, he has terrible taste in music.

  • wtf is wrong with the sound?

  • umm i dont know if its just me but all i get is bits and parts of the video and its quite annoying

  • agreed.

  • lol? seriously?

  • too bad daddy forgot to put bullets on the grocery list.

  • though the acting was bad; the concept was very good.

  • Yeah, I just threw up..  Nice try, though!

  • Hahaha... the acting... just... hahahaha. I couldn't take that seriously even if I believed in that crap.

  • ooh my gosh..

    ahahahha, i knoow! the acting was horrible.

  • Award winning my ass, this was the worst acting I've ever seen.

  • maybe if the acting was

    better and the lighting I would

    have cared more.

  • I'm sorry, but this fucking sucks.

  • umm great message, but come on you can act better ^^ the crying was a bit fake lols

    but good one you for trying GBU

  • what a stupid shit!

  • OMG WTF THIS WON!....what!

  • This won? The acting was really bad.

  • airsoft gun. pahahaha.

    i wanna know who this beat out for the "award."

  • Oh, come on! Serious?!

  • baahahahhahahahhahahahhahahaha­haha

  • that was absolute rubbish!

  • that waz AMAZING

    sheer brilliance all over .

    excellente .

  • What a waste of time...

  • rptrtchnodnceprty say nay.

  • Ya man I get what you were going for but the script was not so great.

    By the way what award did it win?

    And starting out it probably not the smartest idea to strive to make a "touching"film, and maybe next time x the music it makes it look like a music video instead of a short film.

  • that was the stupidest piece o shit that i think i have ever seen.

  • it says award winning...what award? sorry, but this may win the lousiest film award only.

    try harder!

  • lmao.

    that is so bad it's funny

    yeah nice effort.

    just bad film.

    sorry kid.

  • gayest thing ive ever seen

  • I am sorry man , but this is the worst Film in the history of Film Making, when you say "drastic measures" , you mean crying about it like some bitch? and "my girlfriend broke up with me" , is that what causes the character to commit suicide? just how much of a bitch is this character?

    the only award for this will be bronze in the idiot olympics ...

  • that was bad dude... really really bad...

  • funny (not a good thing) cheesy

  • u poopin man?

  • WHY?! WHY GOD?!

    Praise Satan.

  • sorry, but this was a pretty bad film. Its been done before, there was no real character development. The was no point. Try again

  • wtfh is this ... ?????

  • dont i repeat dont fucking post anymore of this shit on Youtube...

    Your acting is shocking and why the fuck are you doing a shit in the first scene anyway???

  • I was really expecting Jesus to walk in and that the protagonist shoots him. I couldn't tell if this was a comedy or if it was being serious.

  • hahahahah for reall! i was like.. uh.. the crying.. uhh

  • the message is good but yeah need better actors and better angles shooting quality and so on

  • its actually pretty good, filming is bad but the story is good ;D good one jeremykrakowski

  • lol, what story? there was no story...

  • u never know what is the plan of god. but this film winning an award makes me feel very optimistic about my success in similar contest. maybe that was the plan of god. Thank you!

  • This was really stupid.

    I suppose they're just literally throwing awards are crappy films these days.

    The message is fine, don't get me wrong, but the film itself sucks.

    Acting and all.

  • nice vid i see how you won

  • HAHAHAHA

    that stupid mother fuckker should have been shot...

    ungreatful little shit.

    hahahahahahha

    "oh thank you god thank you!!"

    hey maybe you just dont know how to load a gun dumbass.... another thing you failed at.

    HA GO DIE!

    p.s. i like the toilet paper in the background at the begining.

    p.s.p.s. terrible filming by the way...

  • *P.P.S.

  • are you sure??

  • Very. P.P.S. is "post-postscript", P.S.S is "post-subscript".

    All grammar nazi-ness aside, this short film was lacking, but a good effort I suppose.

  • LOLOLOLOL.

    Why did I waste 3 minutes and 30 seconds of my life watching this shit?

  • what th fuck??? this is shit!i cud pull a better film outa my ass,

  • Wow.

  • A lot of people try to get to stop them. Lord if it is not to be then stop me. You can't tempt God like that. Girls go for abortions and expect for God to stop them if it was not to be. God has already told us not to kill ourselves or anyone else. We all must die someday but the choice is not ours it is God's.

  • Well....the guy isnt gonna win any sort of prize...but the film was good :)

  • the dude cant act

    the scipt is terrible

    i dont see the point

    the dude wants to kill himself

    and god saves him... he gets his faith back

    no strong message in there

  • why do teenagers think about killing themselves, i gueess they have to be strong and patient to get through it.

  • suicide is AGAINST the LAW!!!

  • I think his brains should of been blown all over the walls, and then we could cut to Jesus smiling on the cross

  • it wasn't great, but I understand your story

  • Terrible writing. Terrible directing. Terrible acting.

    Congratulations. You're a winner.

  • what was the last song?

  • hm.. typical american..

  • bad acting good story though

  • as a writer i get your story ... my short is like that i just now the subject! its hard for people like us to make the people understand ... but very good ... i post my short on video response watch it and give me your opinion ... "Chapter 2" is my short name

  • what award did this win, the local church short film comp? you shouldn't lie in order to ram christianity down people's throat. this is the kind of thing that drives people away frm christianity. NOT TOWARDS IT

  • I agree with you....well said

  • Wow the title was missleading. What award?

  • Wow that sucked, he's a horrible actor and c'mon pulling the trigger and no bullets? lame

  • Pathetic!!  its fucking bad dude... please tell me it was a joke!

    i have waste 3:30 minutes of my time...

    no kiddin

  • oh jesus

  • that's one of the worst short videos (not a film) i"ve seen in a while.

  • God didn't do anything somebody just forgot to reload after having a shot out.

  • wanna see a good short shocking film?

    try this: /watch?v=Jx3fO7fI35E

  • that was kinda dumb

  • my girl friend left me, my life is in shambled..omg..get a life first..

  • Oh God why?

  • How did this win a fucking award?

  • pretty bad acting.

  • actually im sorryu let me give you constructive criticism:

    sad stuff happenes every second around the world, but i don't spend every wakiong second crying: Why?

    I need to feel attached to the events to feel sad. Thats why amateurs dont even try short dramas, all the best actors in the world would still have a hard time making people cry with under 10 minutes. The point is even if thesethings make you emotional, you dont have enough time to make anyone else care-do dont bother with drama.

  • who gave you that award? no offense, but you know, try to pitch that plotline to a director and theyll laugh.

    "So, this dudes girlfriend breaks up with him.."

    Producer: And??

    You: "And, thats it..."

  • uhm I think that guys a really bad actor.. if he was a better actor it could be allot more powerful...

  • Award Winning? WHAT THE FUCK.

  • gay

  • Unless this film won "Film that should not have been made" of the year, your "award winning tag is quite amusing. No wonder film and music are sinking into the bottom of the toilet, FUCKEN STOP MAKING CRAP MOVIES, and if you choose to continue, please put some thought into it. Jesus christ . . just Stop!

  • i have wasted 3 mins

    its acutally very shitty movie and very ugly

  • bad acting.. good plot though

  • I must agree with others on the poor acting, but I would also like to add that you need to adjust you white Balance(WB) on your your camera like ASAP...

  • Poor acting and bad leading into the climax, but I really liked the concept that people given the extra chance to live are grateful in that regard.

  • Poor acting and bad leading into the climax, but I really liked the concept that people given the extra chance to live are grateful in that regard.

  • First of all, have any of you joined a festival of this time limit or less? It's no joke. Creating films from start to end is not easy when the clock is ticking.

    The story is the problem with this movie. Why are young adults so convinced that suicide is what people want to see? Keep your target audience in your mind ALWAYS.

    As for comments of how this won awards: You never know what judges are looking for. Some of my worst films have won awards.

  • that was really bad...

    sorry.

    :(

  • Haha, honestly that sucked really really bad!

    But I give you credit for trying.

  • That sucked.

    Terrrrrible acting.

    God?

    What EVER.

  • sorry, but this is crap

  • award winning?? what kind of lame contest did you join?

  • This is a piece of crap, I mean, no offense but... A little directions to the "actor" wouldn't have hurt. Come on!!

  • wow that was the worst 'believe in religion because it will save you' movie I have ever seen! God didn't save you. You just had an empty cartridge. Pull again and you would've died. Sorry pal

  • that was terrible.... worst acting ever

  • OMG That was so...bad. bad story(there was none), bad acting, bad music. that some panel decided this was worthy of any award is a sad statement of the contest itself. then again, it is only my opinion and in my opinion many christians want nothing more than to be the sheep that they are...

  • umm.... god is fake. it's pretty much common knowledge by now isn't it?

  • Read Isaiah 63:1-6

  • this is..close to home. i had a friend that died bcause of suicide over the summer. and this was truly touching. i flinched when he pulled the trigger. god bless

  • God bless you

  • i really liked this. thanks for sharing. death will accomplish nothing. the painful things in life are but a brief moment in time. better things will and do come. Death is forever.

  • tight!

    you may wanna check out BigYouUpdotcom for your demos or other film related stuff, uploaded mine there too

    greetz

  • i agree with HILTON002. your acting wasn't believeable and touching...the plot was not deep, it was all just laid out in the open.

  • the film was ok. it lacked the emotional connectivity with the audience. try to deal with emotions in more realistic manner.

  • Wow, look at all the negative comments... I think the makers did not aim too high, did limit dialogue, and it wasn't totally unrealistic. Of course, not the best thing I have seen.

  • I thought it was gonna turn around and make fun of its cheesiness and predictability, but sadly I was wrong. Take HILTON002's comments into account and try again. Or just try something new that's never been done before

  • hey,

    wow! u almost made me cry

    ~Julie

  • lmao. Bloody awful.

    I know from experience how difficult it is to construct a serious story on no budget and with no real actors. The key is to make things believable and to limit dialogue. Concentrate on narrative and visual compositions. Aim low and keep it realisitic and interesting.

  • i say we all make a pact. no more short films need be made about suicide.

  • wow.

    this was.

    so bad.

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