Decent. Really horrible acting though. Not "youtube" horrible. But horrible by comparision to those who should be setting the bar very high for you. By Youtube standards, it is a work of art. But then by those standards, what isnt?
I thought this was amazing and powerfull. Yes it was a bit odd but it was really cute and really made me think. It seems easy to relate your own life with it if you look.
So he writes the note, tears off the sheet of paper, puts it on the counter, puts the notebook in the cupboard, puts the rat on the note... and the page is magically back in the notebook?
PLEASE DON'T READ THIS!!!!! in 1964 13 year old Elisa Johnson was raped and murdered in North Carolina, her body was found with multiple stab wounds, and now that you've read this, every night she will come to your house and hang from your closet with glowing red eyes, the only way to stop this is to post this to 10 other videos
I thought that this was absolutely wonderful. You have a real knack for editing, color, and composition. This was what some may perceive to be "cliche indie".. but, I totally drew the dividend. I think that what you're doing with art is great and I encourage you to never, ever stop!
Also, what editing software and camera do you use?
*Also, Also.. favorite shot was definitely of that wheat field. It was so timeless.
I liked it, for what it was. The ending kind of left me more confused than ok. I think better actors would have improved this exponentially. They didn't sound the least bit genuine.
On my opinion this film was alrighty. Can't say it touched me deep to my soul since it didn't but first half of it was arty & cam work was nice though. I don't think guys wanted to put a a bag of sense to this creation, they've just spent a good time beside the cam and did what they wanted, I guess it's the main. Anyway, good luck to you guys and keep on doing what you are doing.
It's hard not to write a comment that would sound rude. I found it repulsive to watch the two characters kiss, and I was also confused by the 'hold your breath' scene. This movie fails at guiding your emotions. What was the point? The description sounds like an afterthought. To be fair, it seems as though the creators were intent on capturing a feeling the mass public can relate to. The problem is that the feeling of this movie was just bizarre. Overly eccentric for no reason.
I can't conceive of an appropriate back story that would make sense out of lying about having killed the rat you just found and deposited on the kitchen counter, eliciting the reply of "You're so creative."
Nice production quality and a beautiful feeling on the simple beauty of life when shring it with someone who helps you realize things about yourself you don't realize are there until you meet them, but it lacks true substance, or...it's missing some message as a whole. I don't understand the reasons behind a lot of the strange dialogue between the characters. There's not a lot of reason for a lot of it. It doesn't all draw together and make sense in the end. Maybe that's what you were going for?
Does anyone know were I can find Cam Archer's other short film Godly Boyish? After Wild Tigers I Have Known and this, I really want to see it.
matthewjcresswell 2 years ago 2
It's on the dvd "Wild tigers i have known". I love it.
Schokofresser93 2 years ago
the acting, general idea and direction aren't bad...but the description is pretty far from what we see--correct me if I'm wrong...Please.
I actually like the acting and enjoyed the overall mood. Maybe we can collaborate-dunno. I like to collaborate in film. Keep filming man!
ThanapaulisFilms 2 years ago
"My mom says 'hilarious." Lol xD
Sephiralen 2 years ago
dude, i watched this video like a year ago and i still listen to that song like everyday. it's not on new bengal spice's myspace anymore though...
anyways, love this video.
Kabella24 2 years ago
Hey that's my phone, did I leave that in Santa Cruz 'killmekate'?
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Nevadagirliexxx38 3 years ago
whats the name of the song playing on the credits?
superman3066 3 years ago
The best is watchin it with no vol.
gusiluza 3 years ago
The symbolism escaped me in areas. Could it be apart of other videos?
Cherri59 3 years ago
hey man, what camera did you shoot this with?
bumblebeeees 3 years ago
The acting is the only thing that ruins this. But the direction is beautiful.
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MATT60IYA 3 years ago
this is great. :)
fatalglitter 3 years ago
that is totally santa cruz. holler!
heckyeahimcool 3 years ago
Decent. Really horrible acting though. Not "youtube" horrible. But horrible by comparision to those who should be setting the bar very high for you. By Youtube standards, it is a work of art. But then by those standards, what isnt?
eggbertsmith 3 years ago
"we're so creative"
sheaflower 3 years ago
I thought this was amazing and powerfull. Yes it was a bit odd but it was really cute and really made me think. It seems easy to relate your own life with it if you look.
fuszbutt 3 years ago 2
This was amazing. I loved it, made me think. Just beautiful, I loved it.
nickelman2 3 years ago
I like the way it's directed and filmed but the acting is a bit stiff. It sounds like theyre reading
crain81 3 years ago
There's just something about this. I really liked it.
nit1221 3 years ago
was he supposed to have a boner at 7:24... or was that just his pants?
TeensforEarth 3 years ago
Fisher price version of the IFC channel.
toecutterr6 3 years ago
bit abstract for me
fistlaw24 3 years ago
Seriously? im a big blver in symmbolism, but i have no idea wtf thi is even trying to say. these guys who made this need to get laid.
xMisterBlakex 3 years ago
wtf????????
xMisterBlakex 3 years ago
bull onie
ivoman7 3 years ago
a lot of questions come up but its kinda really cool
nanukdavide 3 years ago
strange
uninvitedwoman 3 years ago
the music is beautiful, and i think it really makes the film work in terms of coloring it with the feeling of endless possibilities =)
sleepy0v0 3 years ago 3
what the f**k was that that wasted 11 minutes of my life
sabresfan65 3 years ago
you needed 11 minutes to find out that you didn't like anything about it?
Man, you need to speed up a little
iasonprixos 3 years ago
movie sucks
inhonorof 3 years ago
i no clue what i just watched but feel 10:46 older and dummer
alisonnx2 3 years ago
Are you stoned at the end of the movie?
Timbazar 3 years ago
if nobody talked this would be a an acceptable lil movie
jadecocoonhadmybaby 3 years ago
What the .... :|
CoffeeSharkNL 3 years ago
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relaxxx59 3 years ago
should have shagged her senseless to be fairly honest
parcoreLA 3 years ago
i think a tard took some acid and then made this video..
aabbccxxyyandzz 3 years ago
what the fuck did i just watch?
scoobysnax954 3 years ago 3
So he writes the note, tears off the sheet of paper, puts it on the counter, puts the notebook in the cupboard, puts the rat on the note... and the page is magically back in the notebook?
poowonder 3 years ago
I noticed that too--bad consistency for a 10 min vid.
kmattso1 3 years ago
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PLEASE DON'T READ THIS!!!!! in 1964 13 year old Elisa Johnson was raped and murdered in North Carolina, her body was found with multiple stab wounds, and now that you've read this, every night she will come to your house and hang from your closet with glowing red eyes, the only way to stop this is to post this to 10 other videos
JeamLeppard 3 years ago
I enjoyed watching your video! ...I sometimes NEED to watch these kind of videos. "you guys did a great job!"
quintodios 3 years ago
I thought that this was absolutely wonderful. You have a real knack for editing, color, and composition. This was what some may perceive to be "cliche indie".. but, I totally drew the dividend. I think that what you're doing with art is great and I encourage you to never, ever stop!
Also, what editing software and camera do you use?
*Also, Also.. favorite shot was definitely of that wheat field. It was so timeless.
bumblebeeees 3 years ago 2
what's the point?
siyuchang 3 years ago
halfway through, not my bag, little contrived and emo
Ilovefunnyshit 3 years ago
nice try
kel657 3 years ago
i really like the music!
mcook311 3 years ago
Excuse me,
i don't feel good
icnclt 3 years ago
Excuse me,
i don't feel good
icnclt 3 years ago
fail
WeeHaScootchy 3 years ago
great!
BazzTheBoss 3 years ago
WTF.Good movie i guess, but what was the point of it.Wasted time of my and theres life.
kokopilko 3 years ago
lol...
Cossakfreedon 3 years ago
gay
vdarkowlv 3 years ago
I liked it, for what it was. The ending kind of left me more confused than ok. I think better actors would have improved this exponentially. They didn't sound the least bit genuine.
tinaubuggin 3 years ago
(I still enjoyed it though. The rat was my favorite.)
tinaubuggin 3 years ago
On my opinion this film was alrighty. Can't say it touched me deep to my soul since it didn't but first half of it was arty & cam work was nice though. I don't think guys wanted to put a a bag of sense to this creation, they've just spent a good time beside the cam and did what they wanted, I guess it's the main. Anyway, good luck to you guys and keep on doing what you are doing.
200miles 3 years ago
Goofy.
witchman1 3 years ago
It's been done before. And way better.
offsounding 3 years ago
very high quality... not exactly my thing though.
sanjgij 3 years ago
It's hard not to write a comment that would sound rude. I found it repulsive to watch the two characters kiss, and I was also confused by the 'hold your breath' scene. This movie fails at guiding your emotions. What was the point? The description sounds like an afterthought. To be fair, it seems as though the creators were intent on capturing a feeling the mass public can relate to. The problem is that the feeling of this movie was just bizarre. Overly eccentric for no reason.
rabidusuniversum 3 years ago 5
This one was lost on me. What was the message? What are we supposed to feel at the end of this? Nice shots and lighting.
mustangs7 3 years ago
this was a well done, and beautifuly made project.
joecomicbook 3 years ago
hey, that was really professional.
seems like a real movie.
Seyahhsod 3 years ago 2
is this in santa cruz?
MarSara 3 years ago
Yup, it sure is
Jambajuicer432 3 years ago
cringetastic homes!
gnamp 3 years ago
???
austhomi 3 years ago
excellent werk
have u seen my lucky duck movie?
"Cosmos."
italk2youdotcom 3 years ago
I can't conceive of an appropriate back story that would make sense out of lying about having killed the rat you just found and deposited on the kitchen counter, eliciting the reply of "You're so creative."
jaredprunty 3 years ago
Oh my fucking god!!!! what the hell was this shit?!! Thank god I skipped most of it cause it was pure crap!!
bralen24 3 years ago
lol, did anyone else see the Xmart at 9:05???
refractivestudios 3 years ago
Honestly though, what were you going for?
lapetitpanda 3 years ago
The only video on youtube thats not a rick roll
mc343 3 years ago
Nice production quality and a beautiful feeling on the simple beauty of life when shring it with someone who helps you realize things about yourself you don't realize are there until you meet them, but it lacks true substance, or...it's missing some message as a whole. I don't understand the reasons behind a lot of the strange dialogue between the characters. There's not a lot of reason for a lot of it. It doesn't all draw together and make sense in the end. Maybe that's what you were going for?
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craplord45 3 years ago
cool film!
reminds me of Easter Bunny is Eating My Candy, also on youtube. Easter bunny is scary though - you been warned!!!!!!!!!
Zombieeatface 3 years ago 2
I liked it.
Ginamustdie 3 years ago 3
weird but interesting
Lange007 3 years ago 4
looks cool (Y)
isignedupk 3 years ago 2
This reminded me of SLC punk movie, it had that strange style that hooks you up from the beggining all the way to the end.
uzimachi1 3 years ago 3
holy crap, SLC Punk was totally what I thought of when I saw this, but I didn't realize anyone else had watched it.
jaredprunty 3 years ago 2
I love it
zhh55916 3 years ago 2
long, but beautiful every minute of the way. in such a short period of time, it's unreal to how much emotion comes across.
killmekate 4 years ago 4
You guys are insanely talented. I love this video. =]
xelectricxnoisex 4 years ago 7
Superb cinematography!
clickmyface 4 years ago 5
I'm a little confused about the story line and what it's about, but the acting was good none the less! I liked I guess.
utenamajor 4 years ago 7
i love it
danikaarndt 4 years ago 5
nicely done. :)
misssarahb 4 years ago 5