Clever idea, but the acting sucked. It needed a little more pizazz...varied camera angles, for one. Better sound, some snazzy edititing. This could have gone a lot further with some more creative thought process put into it.
Very nice commercial, but the girl would have been more believable is she had moved her arms as if she were serious about what she was saying instead of keeping them on her lap as if she were rehearsing lines
This is perfect the video does not matter, quality of the camera is not a issue its the idea, no gimmick just creative advertising...perfect with a little quality control this could be a GREAT AD CAMPAIGN not just one 30 sec spot, its great!
This is a great idea. You need work on the film/light/sound aspects, but those things can be learned. Often it is the 'script' that is most elusive to creative types and ius somthing much harder to teach/learn. I wish I came up with this. Good Job.
i really like this one... cuz theyre all about heinz and the 57's... and its open ended they or you can add more commercials to it just differnt numbers... i LOVE IT!!!
I think it is the oven... maybe the oven fan... When I was editing, I noticed it and thought I would re-shoot but it also adds a bit of realism to the whole thing... and could possibly also parallel the "noise" that she is making I guess... but that is stretching it a bit lol... thanks for the comment!
Haha, I like that! Good luck in the contest! It's nice, because its short, simple, and to the point--but clever and funny. Good job, and I hope you win!
Thanks so much for the kind words. I could never tell by your comment that you are only thirteen years of age. I do not respond to the comments because they are nice, I respond to them to be nice, not that you would know much about that would you.
Better concept than execution. Use 2-3 couples--just one drags(i.e she has to go on and on to fill the 30 secs), one guy sees the other do it, go with the product closeups(as you said below). Maybe one girl doesn't touch the fries until guy puts Heinz on. A faster pace, a little funnier and you could win.
Not bad. Funny idea. I wish you could have gotten in one close up of each character to get their personalities better (or at least to see how bored the guy really is). But the body language pretty much does it anyway. It's still good as is.
Thanks, I was consitering that and also having close ups of the push of the plate towards the girl (with the ketchup large in frame), but I thought it looked a lot more real this way (like an observer). Also, since its just a simple dv cam, I didn't want to make it look like I was trying to go more professional than the quality of film suggests. This way it is kind of like someone forgot to turn the camera off, etc. You are right, but I guess it is a tradeoff of sorts. Thanks for the comment!
I think girls "talkativity" is known all over the world so your idea has to be used many times before.But it is good to connect it with commercial to heinz :)Good luck ;)
hahah that was funny
Chinnzo12 4 years ago
simple and sweet
crazygirl97 4 years ago
HAHA! Great job!
tubemixx 4 years ago
Great video! Here's ours... good luck!
mechanicsorganics 4 years ago
I agree with ISeeColors247
video1569 4 years ago
Thats great - check this out:
watch?v=_wLwqQ60e90
GregVass305 4 years ago
Stopping in to wish everyone good luck... Hugggzzz!
donedealproductions 4 years ago
nice, best one i've seen so far
uben564 4 years ago
nice
tiernanturner 4 years ago
Clever idea, but the acting sucked. It needed a little more pizazz...varied camera angles, for one. Better sound, some snazzy edititing. This could have gone a lot further with some more creative thought process put into it.
DrBossLady 4 years ago
this was really good
let me know wat u think of mine
enter /watch?v=ljBv1U0fMN0 after the youtube adress
moviemaker2006 4 years ago
HAHA YEA DAT WAS GUD
TheRealRudy 4 years ago
Pretty good, but I think the one done by comedywhacked is the best. go to the comedywhacked user.
pnlmig 4 years ago
Very nice commercial, but the girl would have been more believable is she had moved her arms as if she were serious about what she was saying instead of keeping them on her lap as if she were rehearsing lines
ISeeColors247 4 years ago
very interesting video
directordream 4 years ago
wow...that's some nasty audio...
Langfordc 4 years ago
Cute idea! The acting is good too.
marlene954 4 years ago
XD lol
anime90freak 4 years ago
good one!! definatly one of the best!! good luck!!
italgirl333 4 years ago
i wanted him to hit her.
i know its a heinz commercial.
but that would have been wonderful.
good commercial anyway.
sirkeiththegreat 4 years ago
haha! this is very good!
ontheconcourse 4 years ago
thats the best heinz entry i've seen... good luck
shenannigans5 4 years ago
very good
i approve.
i definitely have enjoyed this one the best out of probably15 or so that i've watched.
woot!
runawaybucket 4 years ago
I like this one the best. good luck.
AARawesometastic 4 years ago
nice
ha8erfat2 4 years ago
Lol, that'll shut her up. j/k. 5 stars dude!
deathwing107 4 years ago
GREAT!! haha!
tnpopkid 4 years ago
ha ha. I think this is my favorite.
beers10 4 years ago
I like, I like, great Idea, I think it would really work too
dereileak 4 years ago
this si really creative, i can see this going on tv.
Zz2randomzZ 4 years ago
This is perfect the video does not matter, quality of the camera is not a issue its the idea, no gimmick just creative advertising...perfect with a little quality control this could be a GREAT AD CAMPAIGN not just one 30 sec spot, its great!
TruthHeard 4 years ago
Great idea and it played out well.
thecatdiaries 4 years ago
This is a great idea. You need work on the film/light/sound aspects, but those things can be learned. Often it is the 'script' that is most elusive to creative types and ius somthing much harder to teach/learn. I wish I came up with this. Good Job.
jaredcicon 4 years ago
LOL! funny stuff! good luck to ya.
AKewlName 4 years ago
One of the best entries for the commercial contest. How creative, yes. . so open for more in the future. :)
emalbanat 4 years ago
i really like this one... cuz theyre all about heinz and the 57's... and its open ended they or you can add more commercials to it just differnt numbers... i LOVE IT!!!
dancinangel8823 4 years ago
Thank you! Yes, I liked leaving it open like that. I also plan to make more when I get the time so keep a lookout!
nothin2lose 4 years ago
hahaha that was funny. good job.
bobandhenry 4 years ago
ty!
nothin2lose 4 years ago
It's better than all i've seen so far. Just one thing, what's that annoying background noise?
akoropecki 4 years ago
I think it is the oven... maybe the oven fan... When I was editing, I noticed it and thought I would re-shoot but it also adds a bit of realism to the whole thing... and could possibly also parallel the "noise" that she is making I guess... but that is stretching it a bit lol... thanks for the comment!
nothin2lose 4 years ago
this is by far the best heinz ketcup contest video and ive seen em all
GREAT 5/5 STARS
guitar1994 4 years ago
hey, thanks! Hopefully if/when I make my second, it'll be just as funny.
nothin2lose 4 years ago
Haha, I like that! Good luck in the contest! It's nice, because its short, simple, and to the point--but clever and funny. Good job, and I hope you win!
StifledShadow 4 years ago
thanks for watching! I may have another commercial coming soon that has the same format to it so be on the lookout!
nothin2lose 4 years ago
nothin2lose, shut up, most of these fucking comments are urs, just because they say nice things dont mean u need to answer them
YeaWeNo 4 years ago
Thanks so much for the kind words. I could never tell by your comment that you are only thirteen years of age. I do not respond to the comments because they are nice, I respond to them to be nice, not that you would know much about that would you.
nothin2lose 4 years ago
lol this rocks nothin2lose... good job... hope you win
queensTramp 4 years ago
thanks!!11
nothin2lose 4 years ago
I would have squirted the bottle into her mouth.
1hitwonderthemusical 4 years ago
it was a glass bottle so that may have taken a little while.
nothin2lose 4 years ago
Ok. Then bashed it over her head. Even better!
1hitwonderthemusical 4 years ago
My fav entry so far. Good luck
ThePhork 4 years ago
Thanks for your support!
nothin2lose 4 years ago
Better concept than execution. Use 2-3 couples--just one drags(i.e she has to go on and on to fill the 30 secs), one guy sees the other do it, go with the product closeups(as you said below). Maybe one girl doesn't touch the fries until guy puts Heinz on. A faster pace, a little funnier and you could win.
dfcurran 4 years ago
Thanks for the suggestions, if I have time I may remake, but first I have a couple of other ideas I want to get filmed first.
nothin2lose 4 years ago
done well
lcapels 4 years ago
thanks.
nothin2lose 4 years ago
Not bad. Funny idea. I wish you could have gotten in one close up of each character to get their personalities better (or at least to see how bored the guy really is). But the body language pretty much does it anyway. It's still good as is.
burningface 4 years ago
Thanks, I was consitering that and also having close ups of the push of the plate towards the girl (with the ketchup large in frame), but I thought it looked a lot more real this way (like an observer). Also, since its just a simple dv cam, I didn't want to make it look like I was trying to go more professional than the quality of film suggests. This way it is kind of like someone forgot to turn the camera off, etc. You are right, but I guess it is a tradeoff of sorts. Thanks for the comment!
nothin2lose 4 years ago
lol
my favorite so far
Asa7 4 years ago
Thanks for the comment, means a lot- check out some of my other vids if you have time!
nothin2lose 4 years ago
Pretty good!
FuNkYmOnKeY424 4 years ago
thanks for watching!
nothin2lose 4 years ago
yep! let me know if u win!
FuNkYmOnKeY424 4 years ago
Great idea...rate 5stars, but it seems to me I´ve already saw sth like this.
RainbowMan007 4 years ago
thanks... I am not sure myself if it is 100% my idea so if you ever remember where you saw something like this from, plz tell me
nothin2lose 4 years ago
I think girls "talkativity" is known all over the world so your idea has to be used many times before.But it is good to connect it with commercial to heinz :)Good luck ;)
RainbowMan007 4 years ago
Hah! That's fantastically awesome. ^^
LizzieBlackwood 4 years ago
thanks :)
nothin2lose 4 years ago