Nick Jonas Love Story Message 2

[lovagirl1596]

1:do a alittle more descriptive summary of her in australlia

2:I thought it was fine.. maybe a little more descriptive

3: My names Drew!! Yes i'm a girl i think its a name not a lot of girls havee

4:make the next one joe telliinggg kevinnn about braking his promisee!! :)

[TikiLiki96]

I Totally Agree

[MandyLovesJBbaby]

1) fast forward...i wanna see what brooke will do when she sees nick

2)i think they should be descrpitive but not to descrpitive

3) i'm not gonna enter cuz i don't stand a chance

by the way your stories are great i stayed up all night last night reading them

[Hollywoodgrl1994]

just get NICK AND BROOKE back together!

haha, they were Perfect!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[lwills08]

1111! I would loveeee for you to fast forward to when Brooke gets back from Australia!

2222! It was great the last time, so be as descriptive as last time (:

3333 and 4444! My name is Leah (: I would love to be in the story because I am a huge JB fan. I think it would be awesome if I'm Emma's bff and help her through breaking her promise & stuff.

[yourpet]

1) fast forward

2)i think they should be descrpitive but still not a whole lot like dont mention word for word jsut somtething where the reader gets the idea if u catch my drift...

3) My name is vaneeza (vinnie for short) i have brunette dstraight long hair,5"6,pretty smart,love to write lyrics,and i love red bull,i m totally in luv wid nick like its pretty crazy but i dnt think im over obsessed!

btw i luv ur stories plz write more im addicted!

[MAEGANandJESSIE]

1)FAST FORWARD!!!!! She needs 2 see Nick again and fall back in love with him!!

2)I don't think u should go waaayy into detail like some other stories I've read:AWKWARRRD!!! lol But make them however u want and I'll still read no matter what!!

PLZ ADD MOREEE!!!! LIKE TODAY??! PLZ!!

~Maegan <33

[trueloveisoutthere]

1. Fast forward please :]

2. Too descriptive would be bad, keep it special.

3. My name is Lauren. I have blonde hair, blue eyes. I absolutly love to sing and I am learning how to play guitar. I'm smart and love to talk. Jonas Brothers are my favorite band, but im not over obsessed :]

P.S- I would looovvve to be in this love story, its my all time fav

[njkluver]

my name is Hannah and i would love the part of it.because nick is such a great guy and i have always dreamed of it.and you should skip till brooke and jb comes home=]

[nickelquarter]

1. probably skip to when brooke returns.

2. i love your scenes the way they are. too descriptive is never a good thing. that just makes it awkward.

3. My name is Nicole, and i am totally in love with nick jonas! I'm kinda tall with black hair and light brown eyes, and i'm puerto rican. i speak spanish, but that doesn't mean anything, just thought i'd throw that in there. I would love to be Nick's interest! It would make my day! oh, and a little bit longer makes me cry. :(

Good luck! u r gr8!

[dancergirl4797]

well umm i've already written alot.

3.my name is olivia like i mentioned before. i am 5'4'' and have gray blue-green eyes. i sing and play the guitar. i also love to draw portraits of practically anyone or anything. my reason probably wouldnt be any better than anyone elses so ummm idk. it definately doesnt have to be me, but you can use me if you want to.

[SocksRuleYaWorld]

1 ... I think you should write a bit about her being in Australia and also bout her guy, maybe he helps her gettin back to Nick, so it would be great if she'd stay a while in Australia, but don't forget to let her know about Joe&Emma xD

2 ... Make it as descriptive as you want it to be, I think this scene was great just like it was ;)

3&4 ... nothing to say ;)

[sk8ter676]

fast forward please.

i want to see nick and brooke back together. :D

[patn]

FAST FORWARD PLEASE??

[liikeduh02]

1. fast forward cuz then it might get tooo long and the "fans" might get inpatient.

2. hopefully he broke it with emma just like fanfics descriptive not too much

3. Stephanie 15 5'3 i love to like produce my own songs. i should , in the story, likesay its just a try out for one of thier new songs and i should like produce it. then we go out fall in love then i say "no nick i can't cuz YOU R STILL IN LOVE WITH BROOKE I JUST WORK 4 YEW I HAVE FEELINGS TOO DONT WORRY GO BACK TO BROOKE APOLOGIZE!"

[ayyemilayy]

1. just tell us about her and this other dude for a little..but have nick and her like keep talking and thinking!

2. i thought it was very good..sometimes too descriptive is creeepy

3. it doesnt have to be me..but this is what im like. my name is emily..uhm im blonde..blue eyes. like 5'5. i play guitar and piano and sing. her and nick should just meet like brooke and that other dude did.

4. WRITE MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

[xOxJustFriendsxOx]

1)Yeah I really like her and Nick together s ojust go forward if she's not going to be with that guy

2)I don't think it really matters like acoustichearts94 said you write very well

3)I totally would but I really like Brooke & Nick together .. and my name is Brooke so it would be soooo totally confusing! .. lol

P.S I love this story and you're an amazing writer!! ... <3 .

[dancergirl4797]

once again i got cut off:

5. no thank you. your an awesome writer and deserve thanks for taking up your time writing stories that make your subscribers and viewers happy. :)

[dancergirl4797]

sry i got cut off by my stupid computer.

2. descriptive scenes always make a story better, but i think your a wonderful writer and your descriptive scenes are already good. no, wait, GREAT!

3. i want to but i really love brooke and nick together. so anyways ill just give you my name just in case: olivia.

4.i love your stories and i think im addicted. i love to check youtube to see if you've posted more. keep up the good work, no, GREAT work!

[dancergirl4797]

alright:

0.5. ironically as soon as i started to type the jonas brothers came on the radio. i just had to point that out,

1. skip forward if brooke isnt going to form a relationship with that guy. if she is then talk about it for a bit. (i really do love her and nick together so please please please dint make her relationship too serious if you continue with it)

2.

[Blissful1212]

i really want to see nick and kevins reaction to joe breaking his promise. YOU ROCK GIRL!

[janefrogbear509]

i think if you could fast forrward to when broke gets back and maybe see if her and nick can get back together

[liveglam92]

also your a very good writer. i forget to write that in my comment. and i love your stories.

[liveglam92]

i think you should fast forward to when Brooke gets back so we can see if Nick and her will ever get back together.

[iheartfencing96]

1. brooke surprises them and comes back

2.not too much detail but a little more

luv u!g2g

[skaig]

I be sure to message you...post more soon!I have to know what Leann says to Emma.

[acoustichearts94]

1. definately skip forward. i dont care what she does in australia. :p

2. i think you write them very well, but description always makes a sotry better.

3. oh my goshh. i wont even do it, because i love brooke and nick together too much. :p

4. your an amazing writer. the only thing i would say is dont have nick and brooke break up for good... because you can say hello to hatemail!!! :p

5. your welcome. your stories are amazing! thank you for writing them!

[claralouise123]

1; when she/they get back;..

2; doesnt matter to me;..

3; i will message you;..

4; you dont need any advice, your an awesome writer;..

5; your welcome, and i will always read your stories;..