wow.thats actually touching."The words left unsaid" and "it's laughter and love, a privilege and a gift" are really good. You should be a writer. Try making a whole bunch and put into your own book. Show your friends too. This ART is very touching.
i love the scenery. and it is sooo true! i like the bits like falling out of a tree u didnt climb. u should have added 'finishing a book u never started.' i dunno, jst a thought. buby xxx
Lol, I also wrote a poem about life that's on youtube but yours is amazing, checkout mine, let me know what you think
ToobaTheVisionary 2 months ago
i freaking lllooovvee this!! <3 its so true and beautiful <3 I LOVE IT!!
lovejanevolturi 3 months ago
Beautiful I understood every word, it really makes you think of what life is really about and not how quick you end it. Amazing
Beckyplayful 5 months ago
More Poetry!!
RunwayBrandon 7 months ago
I wish I could say I liked it,
I wish I could say that is life,
but that would be lying to myself.
and that is something I just cannot do.
I did not dislike it however,
life is more than that.
Life is more exciting, happier and complex than that,
otherwise,
why live it?
kendrit 9 months ago 3
I LiKe IT!
Alforisme 10 months ago
Really moving! I love all the juxtapositioning, and it flows really well too. Check out my vids and let me know what you think of mine!
BerryTimeBooks 11 months ago
Daaaaaaaaaaamn! Brings tears to my eyes
metalhoer 1 year ago
such poetry :] truely amazing
Adrianbassoonist 1 year ago
thats what you call human nature.... we are all in the same boat sailing to the sunset.. thank you.. 5 star.
fairhillnorrie 1 year ago
im sorry, can i use this for my typography animation?
MrMADEINBORNEO 1 year ago
That was awesome. Honestly I agree with every word of it. Did you get it published?
davisth3456 1 year ago
Fabulous! ... inspiring from one so young... keep going!
snowmummy16 2 years ago
W0W!i love this poem it amazing...
icycoulesgirl 3 years ago
wow.thats actually touching."The words left unsaid" and "it's laughter and love, a privilege and a gift" are really good. You should be a writer. Try making a whole bunch and put into your own book. Show your friends too. This ART is very touching.
fallingmice 3 years ago
Nice :]
xGigixx 3 years ago
coolio
lizzie2424 3 years ago
i'ma good poet to my fave poem is on my pg exept i ain't alowed to write poems 4 fun after my parents found out i felt that way
ImAnEmotionalGirl 3 years ago
I think i remember one time writing poems in a notebook of mine then we graded each others... I found it the other day. We are loser...
oobermuch 3 years ago
wow thats awsome. are all your stories and poems like this because i loved it! seriously!
iwannabeeu2 3 years ago 2
Thanks! Some of them are like this... the stories themselves are different because, well, they're stories... but again, thanks! :D
WrunWrite1023 3 years ago
i love the scenery. and it is sooo true! i like the bits like falling out of a tree u didnt climb. u should have added 'finishing a book u never started.' i dunno, jst a thought. buby xxx
Thatshardlyfair 3 years ago