She lives! Congrats on surviving. ...sounds great, Kel... ya sure it's not called "Learning to Fall?" I like the addition of the violin, but I'd drop it out at "I want to plummet with grace." Just personal preference perhaps - I like the subdued nature of that verse on your earlier version... soft vocal, sparse guitar... then build to the soaring vocals - cue accompaniment, etc. Broaden the journey, ya know? IMHO. But it's great to hear ya... hope you post more than once a year. Take care...
guess we'll have to actually practice this song!
violinsanity 11 months ago
She lives! Congrats on surviving. ...sounds great, Kel... ya sure it's not called "Learning to Fall?" I like the addition of the violin, but I'd drop it out at "I want to plummet with grace." Just personal preference perhaps - I like the subdued nature of that verse on your earlier version... soft vocal, sparse guitar... then build to the soaring vocals - cue accompaniment, etc. Broaden the journey, ya know? IMHO. But it's great to hear ya... hope you post more than once a year. Take care...
Balboa515 1 year ago