it's okay, but i have some criticisms. you over-enunciate every word, get some flow going and it will sound more lyrical and less like an answering machine has been programmed to sing it.
you also need more hesitations and pauses, slip your words around the beat rather than methodically on it, it is as if you're playing to a metronome.
also your american accent is annoying on the word heart. don't try to strangle the r with the sides of your mouth, give it some space and it will flow.
Sorry umm yikes. I was shocked to see Melissa Etheridge had a hairy chest. are the people who think his voice and guitar are so good on here the same ones who try out for American Idol and protest when they get kicked off? I mean he's alright. Yes it's from Joan but I recently heard it covered by Kiesha White on Noah's Arc.
LOL... Well, I am certainly no Keisha White or Melissa, but I love the song and all the singers of it (including Joan Armatrading's version from the early 1980's.
Now this is a perfect song, it's slow. Good choicem great work mate, sounds good keep up the good work. Gotta go on a hunt for that shirt under all the rubble though! Catch you later.
not bad for a males voice
angieconnie 1 year ago
Why don't you have a shirt on? :(
spongebobfan107 2 years ago
hey...you sound funny but really good version..can i have the tabs?
riama14 2 years ago
i like your voice.but i also agree with the person who says that your pronunciation takes the lyrical quality of the song at certain parts.
nice job though.
wobblyknees88 3 years ago
It is a Joan Armatrading song. Etheridge covered it first.
GroundworkOne 4 years ago 2
I have that noted in the notes, thanks.
cmbojim 4 years ago
it's okay, but i have some criticisms. you over-enunciate every word, get some flow going and it will sound more lyrical and less like an answering machine has been programmed to sing it.
you also need more hesitations and pauses, slip your words around the beat rather than methodically on it, it is as if you're playing to a metronome.
also your american accent is annoying on the word heart. don't try to strangle the r with the sides of your mouth, give it some space and it will flow.
mistakenshyness 4 years ago
Thanks for the suggestions. As for the accent though.... Texas/Southern.... It has been with me for a number of years ~LOL
cmbojim 4 years ago
you sound like the guy from the bloodhunt gang
TongueCut 4 years ago
I want to say... ummm. Thanks? Is that good or bad? : )
cmbojim 4 years ago
well its bad, because you choose the wrong song, but also good, cause that guy is talented and fun :)
TongueCut 4 years ago
*bloodhound
onlyavailablename123 4 years ago
Not bad at all...but it sounds like the singer is reading the lyrics instead of singing them.
ruudzwart 4 years ago
Sorry umm yikes. I was shocked to see Melissa Etheridge had a hairy chest. are the people who think his voice and guitar are so good on here the same ones who try out for American Idol and protest when they get kicked off? I mean he's alright. Yes it's from Joan but I recently heard it covered by Kiesha White on Noah's Arc.
jewelska 4 years ago
LOL... Well, I am certainly no Keisha White or Melissa, but I love the song and all the singers of it (including Joan Armatrading's version from the early 1980's.
Have a great day.
cmbojim 4 years ago
put a shirt on!
fgonzalez649 4 years ago
That's great, but that's not Melissa's song. You covered it from Joan Armatrading. Give the songwriter props.
thibodeaux8 4 years ago
Why doesn't anybody read the comment section in the box next to the vid?
cmbojim 4 years ago
Because I didn't see it. Oops. :)
thibodeaux8 3 years ago
this is a very John Denver version, quite nice with a male voice
gspencer06 4 years ago
Great voice!
idouu 4 years ago
Nice job =) A shirt is needed as said, lol.
FlameDesire 4 years ago
really sings very good and also plays guitar good
intherainbowsky 4 years ago
Thank you, that was nice.
cmbojim 4 years ago
Now this is a perfect song, it's slow. Good choicem great work mate, sounds good keep up the good work. Gotta go on a hunt for that shirt under all the rubble though! Catch you later.
Praetorian5 5 years ago
LOL Thanks : )
cmbojim 5 years ago