I like it. You do sound like theres not much emotion though but i watched some of ur other videos and it looks like ur gettin better, nice lyrics too. The line when you say "take a chance that happen to land in the arms of a man who you'll never avoid" was good. You switched up the one syllable thing for a second.
Nothing special. Nice try though. Just make your rhyme scheme more than one syllable, gets annoying. And your voice is an instrumental aswell, use it. Your voice is very bland and not very emotional at all, just sounds like you want to get it over with, and sounds like you're just reading.
@WesTMusik905 thanks for the opinion, i noticed that from the first time i recorded it, and did several different takes, overall the song was out of my comfort range but thats y they call it experementing
i love this :)
Gianninawiddy 3 months ago in playlist More videos from TheLyricalConcept
i dowloaded your mixtape it go hard keep it up
LilJames429 1 year ago
I like it. You do sound like theres not much emotion though but i watched some of ur other videos and it looks like ur gettin better, nice lyrics too. The line when you say "take a chance that happen to land in the arms of a man who you'll never avoid" was good. You switched up the one syllable thing for a second.
evee4sheezy 1 year ago
@evee4sheezy yea this was a tricky song for me to do, i spent about 3 hours recording in different ways and this was the best one i came up with
TheLyricalConcept 1 year ago
Nothing special. Nice try though. Just make your rhyme scheme more than one syllable, gets annoying. And your voice is an instrumental aswell, use it. Your voice is very bland and not very emotional at all, just sounds like you want to get it over with, and sounds like you're just reading.
WesTMusik905 1 year ago
@WesTMusik905 thanks for the opinion, i noticed that from the first time i recorded it, and did several different takes, overall the song was out of my comfort range but thats y they call it experementing
~Int3graty
TheLyricalConcept 1 year ago