my jazz dance solo for 2009 (bye bye blackbird)

[Jasminejara]

work on your turns - finish them off 'cause it looks as it you're about to fall over, remember to pointe your toes!, finish off your lines to stop them looking sloppy, work on your turn out as well - turn out from your hips, it gives the dance much more expression especially with such a 'sexy' song :) otherwise it's great and i love the choreography!

I have a solo in a few months time with the same song!

[roobzie19]

this is crappy

[unintentionalkiss]

honey work on your turns and loosen your hands

[Ms0liviax0]

ur turns suck

[Ms0liviax0]

sweety ur turns are really bad

[katohines57]

who sings this version of the song?

[JULiEdancerr]

make sure you keep your legs together on your chaines!!! and kep your legs straight and point your toes!! i think you have the potential to be a really good dancer if you went to a better studio. (:

[dancechick360]

dont listen to the haters we are really talented .... u just need to put a little more personality into it... keep up the hard work:)

[HelloDuckY1]

put ur hair up higher or in a bun and take off ur glasses it makes it easier to spot and ur prep was too big At 0:20. and duh work on flexibility and strength it will look great once you do that. dont give up! the ppl telling u that u suck dont kno wat theyre tlking about:)

[gingasweet1]

not very good im sorry. u can sorta see u an alright dancer but this routine is terrible.there right u do need to point ur toes. it looks sorta lazy and messy. like ur only half ther in a way.like at 2.16 wen u do that run thing it looks like u arnt trying

[j0wshyy]

, when your arms and legs are supposed to be straight, make sure they're straight, and when your dancing to anything, unless it's some sort of megamix or montage (which this obviously isn't) then keep to one style of dancing.

And anther thing, dancing isn't dancing without some personality in it. Just then it looked like... steps. Put some of your own moves into the dance or at least alter them to make them your own.

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[j0wshyy]

Sorry, but no!

You can't (or whoever choreographed this) can't grasp the basic concept of Fosse. And if that's not what you were trying to achieve, why use such a Fosse style song? It's not just that, your not all that of a dancer either =/ I really hope your a beginner because if not then this was pretty horrific.

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[LivieDances4ever]

i hope ur a beginner cos if ur not sorry that's pretty bad :)

[BEDPdancer]

you have lots of potential i saw after i watched it really closely again BUT you need to make sure you ALWAYS point your toes and that you keep your knees straight on everything that they are supposed to be straight on. also make sure you put personality into it. but im not really of a fan of the dance and im pretty sure its the choreography, sorry.

[BEDPdancer]

ok so i just watched this like two times in a row and realllly paid attention so i could give you some pointer i guess you could call them...okay so first off point your toes on EVERYTHING! secondly at like 1:15 i think it is when you do the chaine then leap make sure your knees arent bent. third thing is make sure you put some personality into it.

[lalafishsticks]

ughhh,, yuu arent amazing but not that bad,, add personality andd point your toes !!!! you have to sell that dance,, ihope yu dont take it to a competein cause yuu will get picked on and not win anything but a silver,, but i think yuu can cleaan it up nd it would bee good butt what i juss saw wouldnt do much just clean it up ndd you WILL do okayy,, i guess.

[SoPhx7]

um good i guess

[PrincessSakuno]

mayb u can do ur moves a big more crazily (lol) cuz it looks kinda boring maybe if you can exercise a bit more so can increase r staminai think you wont get tird that fast

[sk8ergu3]

that was fucking horrible. lmfao.

[lexaliciousssss]

thakss alott!

[shadowknoll]

Fantastic! :). Bravo, Bravo.

Pretty good for the limited space provided.

[lexaliciousssss]

haha, thankss! (:

[HiPHoPLuVeR1101]

just a little aadvice really spot and make sure you straten ur legs and if you can take ur glasses off cuz it helps me alot and it makes it eaier to spot because you do have to worry about them flinging off

[dancestar1354]

you totally suck!

[Laurakate44]

Where are your videos of you being so god damn perfect?

[annabellexx]

you're really good! :)

[mandaliciousssss]

lol, you look like your marking it.

I LOVE THIS DANCE! suits you. =]

[Miah6699]

nice inside turns,just work a little bit more!--miah! great job

[Anadance]

That was good, you hav a lot of potential. Now some constructive criticism: work more on your leaps, turns and flexibility and you will be fabulous! How long have you been dancing for?

[lexaliciousssss]

5 years and i was limited on space so my leaps were not that great but thanks so much!