Good first effort, better than I could do. Some personal criticisms.
The inconsistent music is annoying as hell; I would work on either keeping the music going throughout a whole scene or not having it at all.
Also, a lot of humor is not just the joke's punchline, but how it's delivered. There wasn't really any moment that I wanted to laugh. Instead, this video just made me say, "weird, wearing your glasses at the computer."
Keep trying though if you enjoy, hopefully you'll produce a winner.
jon, your car was stolen by gay mexicans?
you never told me that.
ShottyRingo 3 years ago
quit drinking antifreeze
Jnote317 3 years ago 4
thanks for watching the video! what antifreeze??
gilcox 3 years ago
Good first effort, better than I could do. Some personal criticisms.
The inconsistent music is annoying as hell; I would work on either keeping the music going throughout a whole scene or not having it at all.
Also, a lot of humor is not just the joke's punchline, but how it's delivered. There wasn't really any moment that I wanted to laugh. Instead, this video just made me say, "weird, wearing your glasses at the computer."
Keep trying though if you enjoy, hopefully you'll produce a winner.
mhuggins 3 years ago 6
Thanks for the constructive ceitivism! I appreciate it.
gilcox 3 years ago
Interesting you guys! Thanks! Post some videos of your own and let us be the judge of them.
You guys shouldn't be mad that you wear sunglasses while playing poker. <3
gilcox 3 years ago
Terrible
captntappa 3 years ago
Worst video on youtube imo
bkleinkn 3 years ago
Can whoever rated this one star please explain why and or please post your hilarious video.
gilcox 3 years ago