Writer's Block | An Original Poem

[MindForge83]

Heaven's tears... quenching lips...

The vividness of the imagery alone could rouse the embers of thought from a stymied mind. "Pink-birthed skies"

my imagery is a linear doodle made by a preschooler before yours ^_^ Such carefully-crafted imagery.

Beautiful. Five stars!

[CommentSense]

I've hundreds of unfinished tomes, And hundreds more unfinished poems, Some are complete As they sit there, Looking to me for an ending, When in fact the ending The ending Was already there Save for a period, Or an excess comma. ;=]

[rubatonick]

wonderful imagiary thankyou.

[7horianfiddler]

Congratulations! I love this video (poem). AsAngelo, i would say that we could never reach to poet's fantasy. Words are just a channel, but never leads exactly to poet's fantasy and consciousness. Just glimpses in the dark;)

[MsWriteNow]

Thank you very much.

[ASAngelo]

Perceptive perfection.

I do not understand the title(there are several if not infinite interpretations), so I simply let my mind wander upon the prose following. It held my breath. That is a very-ery good sign. Then after I began to breath again, I meditated upon the words and listened again. Vivid imagery. All senses were explored. So I must thank you for sharing your gift with us and capturing our hearts. How eloquent and inspiring. Words fail to express.

Regards,

Angelo

[MsWriteNow]

Thank you very much for listening and responding.

[harleynanda]

And so we meet. My first selection from your collection. An enticing opener.

[MsWriteNow]

Thank you for stopping by and listening.

[FromUKtoUSA]

You're gaining a new following I think.  I've been touched by all your poems. Wonderful! (and yes, I subscribed to your site...thanks!)

[MsWriteNow]

Thank you! I'm glad you are part of it :)

[PuppyZwolle]

Irony

Paradox

Singing in the shower.

"Let me wander over yonder till I see the mountains rise."

Desperate need for freedom.

Hooked on a string of words.

Waiting for the flow.

Praying and dancing in the desert to make the rain come pouring down.

"And gaze at the moon till I lose my senses"

[purefilmphoto]

Interesting poem...

[MsWriteNow]

thanks...

[MsWriteNow]

NWM, don't you ever sleep ;-)

[PuppyZwolle]

I wonder the same. Any hour I'm on here he seems to be. Must be an insomniac like all of us.

[fiwaszewski]

Great job my friend, 5stars..

Forrest-Uriah and the GHOST Seekers

[MsWriteNow]

Thanks! :)

[fiwaszewski]

My pleasure!!

[1imageofme]

wow thats so rich and thought provoking.

ps ty so much for contributing to the database and making it the rich place that it is. its much apreciated

[MsWriteNow]

Thank YOU. And thanks for starting the Poetry Database. I think it's a wonderful service to writer's. I love to see the support across YT.

[nordicsky]

Drought... What drought?

All those wonderful words and ideas in one poem,

that's not a drought it's a deluge.

Thanks for posting this.

Kind regards, Peter

[MsWriteNow]

Thanks for watching.

[dmio2]

That's a great kind of writers block to have. Nicely done.

[MsWriteNow]

Thank you

[xxxSunbeamxxx]

Ditto on Janeckza'a comment....you entice so many images to pop up before us as we listen. It is like going on a dreamy journey with this one, I found.

[MsWriteNow]

Thanks Sunbeam!

[janeczka]

Lovely imagery. Blew me away.

[MsWriteNow]

Thanks janeczka :)

[koryargonic]

good imagery

[MsWriteNow]

Thanks for stopping by!

[MsWriteNow]

Thanks, DMag0

[DavidRandallCurtis]

Yeah, how about putting the words in the poem in the description box ya brat! Five and a half stars for you anyway missy thing. Oh... am I drunk or is the video not in sync with the audio... or both?

[MsWriteNow]

Maybe both? I don't know how to fix the synch. Any ideas?

[shanethepoet]

very great poem..well done

[MsWriteNow]

Thank you shane!

[MsWriteNow]

Thank you very much, sir :)

[niceonetom]

beautiful.

don't rush it though, it's too good to be hurried.

it would be nice to have the text too -i have to read poetry aloud. otherwise i don't get all of it.

[MsWriteNow]

Thanks for listening, niceonetom. I will definitely consider your recommendations.

[niceonetom]

yeah - i give advice only on the express condition that it is not to be taken seriously but...

i think your delivery is sharp. if you consider what you do to be spoken word, ie. a performance, then it doesn't make any sense to provide us, the audience, with the script. if you think of it as traditional poetry then letting us read it ourselves makes some sense i think.

what you do here is great, so however you do it is just fine by me.