Constructive Criticism: Audio could have used work (an external mic would have been great), and continuity at the end (the blonde is holding her drink in the close-up but not in the medium shot).
I think both of you overacted a little. Personally, I have no acting skills, so I don't know how much my critique counts! I just tried to picture myself watching a tv show, and that's what I felt. I'm the type that likes heart felt stuff, so it would be neat to see a sad moment for one of your scenes!
hey, I thought this was really good! the only criticism I have is that you should work on how you respond to what she's saying to you.. sometimes it looks like you're not taking in what she's saying, like you're acting your lines rather than actually feeling the emotions behind the words. It would be good to take in the things she's saying as if it were real, and react. A good actress shows how she's feeling with her expression and emotion, not with what she's saying :) I hope that helps!
@LikeOMGpaul haha! thanks...that's actually cuz we didn't have two cameras...and the emotions I was showing while she was talking weren't always syncing up to the same lines she was saying in real life...And that was all improv, so we weren't doing scripted lines. We responded how we would in real life, but we probably should've set up two cameras to make that more real. I think we'll do that for the real thing. Thanks again! :)
@ThePPBJ I bet if you look on the majority of video's, someone says first/second. SO my question is, why are you having a go at ME for it, if MILLIONS of other people have done the exact same thing. and odds are, you have said it before aswell.
acting is reacting! when she says something to you, your face doesn't show your reaction (sometimes). I would work on that. you probably had trouble with that bc you were going back and forth with the clips. it's mostly the expressions i would say to work on. other than that it was great! i loved your 'hey!' in the beginning. it felt real. oh and the blonde girl needs to work on speaking clearly. sometimes i couldn't understand her. 'dismissed' sounds like 'disminished' lol. good job!
@crzymonica19 Thanks! And you're right...we should've set up two cameras cuz the reactions I used weren't mirrored often with what she was actually saying at the time...But! I wanted my character to not react much to her threats and insults, because she's "above" that. So when she calls me a slut, I don't want my character to get mad, but instead just smirk at her like she's heard it all before. :) I appreciate your feedback and I'll try to sync up the reactions better in the real thing! :D
@ThePPBJ so sorry, and for your information, I did enjoy the video. Also I am not stupid. I don't know you, therefore, you don't know me, so don't judge me. K? bye.
This is cool nice job!!!!!
Comedybeauty10 1 month ago
this is terrible, girls. Just terrible.
enogmelimon 1 month ago in playlist Uploaded videos
u look like a great,cool, and sweet person to hang out with
justinbieberluv3136 3 months ago in playlist More videos from DigitalMunchies
I saw you fill this.....I was going through the drive through!!(:
JackieexRawr 3 months ago
@JackieexRawr Thru
JackieexRawr 3 months ago
Melissa, is your friend from the south? lol, she just sounds southern to me. Anyways, I love this and I would LOVE to see more!! :)
~Kaleigh
KookieMonster224 3 months ago
Freaking awesome
sugargalore 3 months ago
I think the dialogue is a bit awkward at some points. Like, it doesn't flow well. But the acting was very good :)
Kutie103 3 months ago in playlist More videos from DigitalMunchies
how about lying game scenariosss
mariellam03 4 months ago
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143franns 4 months ago
@143franns McDonalds* haha
ToastyVidz 3 months ago
"OINK" <3
MileysBigestFan1423 4 months ago
0:50 It's not my fault your a slut! I love it! This is Melanie by the way :D
lookatme12153 4 months ago
You should do the ryan and maci fight about ryan not spending enough time with bentley from teen mom
MsLaurenArchie 5 months ago in playlist More videos from DigitalMunchies
Constructive Criticism: Audio could have used work (an external mic would have been great), and continuity at the end (the blonde is holding her drink in the close-up but not in the medium shot).
snoisulli23 5 months ago
hmm i thought it was a bit cliche but not bad
dancerSummerLover 5 months ago
awsome
xoxoxojessica 5 months ago
I think both of you overacted a little. Personally, I have no acting skills, so I don't know how much my critique counts! I just tried to picture myself watching a tv show, and that's what I felt. I'm the type that likes heart felt stuff, so it would be neat to see a sad moment for one of your scenes!
~Allison
allison21fhf 5 months ago
The blonde one, she needs to try to act less, be more natural because it's really obvious that she's trying really hard. The other one was better
FaIseHope 5 months ago 4
Awesome video! You are so gorgeous
WhitneyJeanXO 5 months ago
you are SUUUCH a good actress melissa.<3
agmusicvidsx 5 months ago
ahh you're so pretty! amazing quality! the bloopers were hilarious(:
mynameismeena 5 months ago
so amazing!!!!!
girlygirl147sn 5 months ago
oh my gosh! your soo pretty! :P
Ladybugzable 5 months ago
THIS IS AMAZING! (:
PrincessCamille1996 5 months ago
You guys should think of some movies you liked and maybe pic a scene u enjoyed!:)
divapanthas 5 months ago
OMG the blonde girls voice sounds like ke$has
ilovemusicvideos48 5 months ago
You should act out the phone skit with ragina Katie Karen and Gretchen u guys would do it awesome ;)
xxCalixxLoverxx 5 months ago
@xxCalixxLoverxx I actually already did that one!! You can search it out on my vids! :)
DigitalMunchies 5 months ago
this was really really good! and the blond girl kind of looks like britney spears
imaislandgirl2 5 months ago
acting scenario!! csi scene, like the interrogation part :P dramatic-ness
iBianca5 5 months ago 32
@iBianca5 Oooo! That would be fun! Thanks!!
DigitalMunchies 5 months ago 7
I can't hear this with the music... it's good though ithink!
perfectlyjackie 5 months ago
lol, this is really good! However it just really made me want McDonalds fries.lol but really, it's a great scene :D
SmarganM 5 months ago
I think you would benefit from method acting. Message me if you want to k
hannalestrange 5 months ago
i know that a lot of people do this, but i think you'd be really good at it: the baby mama skit
LiveLaughLinden 5 months ago
PLEASE do the scene in mean girls when they do the dance to Jingle Bell Rock for the talent show!! PLEASE DO ITT!!
miniruby675 5 months ago
hahahaha love thiss! favoriteddd lol
pancakers3 5 months ago
I LUV THIS! U BOTH R SUCH GOOD ACTORS:)) DEFINETLY MAKE MOREEE:))
BubbleProductions11 5 months ago
This is really good!
ohmyynicole 5 months ago
she forgot her purse when she left...hahah but i really liked this! GREAT!
kaymily95 5 months ago 76
@kaymily95 hahah! I didn't even notice that! :P
DigitalMunchies 5 months ago 13
You guys are soo pretty.(: & hahaa. i loved this!! You guys are soo funny & great actors.<3
MichelleMyBellx33 5 months ago
do more beauty videos!!! ur so friggin pretty!!!
beautysbiggestfan1 5 months ago in playlist More videos from DigitalMunchies 59
@beautysbiggestfan1 aww!! thank you! I'll try! :P
DigitalMunchies 5 months ago
hey, I thought this was really good! the only criticism I have is that you should work on how you respond to what she's saying to you.. sometimes it looks like you're not taking in what she's saying, like you're acting your lines rather than actually feeling the emotions behind the words. It would be good to take in the things she's saying as if it were real, and react. A good actress shows how she's feeling with her expression and emotion, not with what she's saying :) I hope that helps!
LikeOMGpaul 5 months ago
@LikeOMGpaul haha! thanks...that's actually cuz we didn't have two cameras...and the emotions I was showing while she was talking weren't always syncing up to the same lines she was saying in real life...And that was all improv, so we weren't doing scripted lines. We responded how we would in real life, but we probably should've set up two cameras to make that more real. I think we'll do that for the real thing. Thanks again! :)
DigitalMunchies 5 months ago
this is soso cool<33
nadianadianadiaz 5 months ago
You left your bag when you got up. haha
iluvyou2196 5 months ago
omg i love your videos so much : )
mellaabaabyx 5 months ago
Will you please do the Pocket Full of Sunshine skit from Easy A? (:
violetmoon4 5 months ago
you have such good acting skills! your awesome<3 maybe put more expression? i dont know haha! i thot it was awsumm!(:
livlaughlovexo 5 months ago
are u allowed to film in public places like did u ask permission
swizzlemonster 5 months ago
@ThePPBJ I bet if you look on the majority of video's, someone says first/second. SO my question is, why are you having a go at ME for it, if MILLIONS of other people have done the exact same thing. and odds are, you have said it before aswell.
duvetlovers2010 5 months ago
acting is reacting! when she says something to you, your face doesn't show your reaction (sometimes). I would work on that. you probably had trouble with that bc you were going back and forth with the clips. it's mostly the expressions i would say to work on. other than that it was great! i loved your 'hey!' in the beginning. it felt real. oh and the blonde girl needs to work on speaking clearly. sometimes i couldn't understand her. 'dismissed' sounds like 'disminished' lol. good job!
crzymonica19 5 months ago 2
@crzymonica19 Thanks! And you're right...we should've set up two cameras cuz the reactions I used weren't mirrored often with what she was actually saying at the time...But! I wanted my character to not react much to her threats and insults, because she's "above" that. So when she calls me a slut, I don't want my character to get mad, but instead just smirk at her like she's heard it all before. :) I appreciate your feedback and I'll try to sync up the reactions better in the real thing! :D
DigitalMunchies 5 months ago
@ThePPBJ so sorry, and for your information, I did enjoy the video. Also I am not stupid. I don't know you, therefore, you don't know me, so don't judge me. K? bye.
duvetlovers2010 5 months ago
mccdonalds
redrosey7865 5 months ago
You guys are so funny! Hahaa!(:
DoeyProductions 5 months ago
Ahh I love this!! I love you too Melissa imma big fan! You both are really pretty<3
AmandaBell123 5 months ago
lol
smileypj28x 5 months ago
aweesomee.
StellaaaXx 5 months ago
NO ONE CARES IF YOUR FIRST SECOND OR WHATEVER!!!
anyways... this i awesome both of you!! do more! you both are also so pretty and funny!:)
cutieeoranges 5 months ago
awesome!! :D thanks for subbing me <333
hancomanc 5 months ago
second!
duvetlovers2010 5 months ago
First!! :D <3
Bunny1234Amy678 5 months ago