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  • This is cool nice job!!!!!

  • this is terrible, girls. Just terrible.

  • u look like a great,cool, and sweet person to hang out with

  • I saw you fill this.....I was going through the drive through!!(:

  • @JackieexRawr Thru

    

  • Melissa, is your friend from the south? lol, she just sounds southern to me. Anyways, I love this and I would LOVE to see more!! :)

    ~Kaleigh

  • Freaking awesome

  • I think the dialogue is a bit awkward at some points. Like, it doesn't flow well. But the acting was very good :)

  • how about lying game scenariosss

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  • @143franns McDonalds* haha

  • "OINK" <3

  • 0:50 It's not my fault your a slut! I love it! This is Melanie by the way :D

  • You should do the ryan and maci fight about ryan not spending enough time with bentley from teen mom

  • Constructive Criticism: Audio could have used work (an external mic would have been great), and continuity at the end (the blonde is holding her drink in the close-up but not in the medium shot).

  • hmm i thought it was a bit cliche but not bad

  • awsome

  • I think both of you overacted a little. Personally, I have no acting skills, so I don't know how much my critique counts! I just tried to picture myself watching a tv show, and that's what I felt. I'm the type that likes heart felt stuff, so it would be neat to see a sad moment for one of your scenes!

    ~Allison

  • The blonde one, she needs to try to act less, be more natural because it's really obvious that she's trying really hard. The other one was better

  • Awesome video! You are so gorgeous

  • you are SUUUCH a good actress melissa.<3

  • ahh you're so pretty! amazing quality! the bloopers were hilarious(:

  • so amazing!!!!!

  • oh my gosh! your soo pretty! :P

  • THIS IS AMAZING! (:

  • You guys should think of some movies you liked and maybe pic a scene u enjoyed!:)

  • OMG the blonde girls voice sounds like ke$has

  • You should act out the phone skit with ragina Katie Karen and Gretchen u guys would do it awesome ;)

  • @xxCalixxLoverxx I actually already did that one!! You can search it out on my vids! :)

  • this was really really good! and the blond girl kind of looks like britney spears

  • acting scenario!! csi scene, like the interrogation part :P dramatic-ness

  • @iBianca5 Oooo! That would be fun! Thanks!!

  • I can't hear this with the music... it's good though ithink!

  • lol, this is really good! However it just really made me want McDonalds fries.lol but really, it's a great scene :D

  • I think you would benefit from method acting. Message me if you want to k

  • i know that a lot of people do this, but i think you'd be really good at it: the baby mama skit

  • PLEASE do the scene in mean girls when they do the dance to Jingle Bell Rock for the talent show!! PLEASE DO ITT!!

  • hahahaha love thiss! favoriteddd lol

  • I LUV THIS! U BOTH R SUCH GOOD ACTORS:)) DEFINETLY MAKE MOREEE:))

  • This is really good!

  • she forgot her purse when she left...hahah but i really liked this! GREAT!

  • @kaymily95 hahah! I didn't even notice that! :P

  • You guys are soo pretty.(: & hahaa. i loved this!! You guys are soo funny & great actors.<3

  • do more beauty videos!!! ur so friggin pretty!!!

  • @beautysbiggestfan1 aww!! thank you! I'll try! :P

  • hey, I thought this was really good! the only criticism I have is that you should work on how you respond to what she's saying to you.. sometimes it looks like you're not taking in what she's saying, like you're acting your lines rather than actually feeling the emotions behind the words. It would be good to take in the things she's saying as if it were real, and react. A good actress shows how she's feeling with her expression and emotion, not with what she's saying :) I hope that helps!

  • @LikeOMGpaul haha! thanks...that's actually cuz we didn't have two cameras...and the emotions I was showing while she was talking weren't always syncing up to the same lines she was saying in real life...And that was all improv, so we weren't doing scripted lines. We responded how we would in real life, but we probably should've set up two cameras to make that more real. I think we'll do that for the real thing. Thanks again! :)

  • this is soso cool<33

  • You left your bag when you got up. haha

  • omg i love your videos so much : )

  • Will you please do the Pocket Full of Sunshine skit from Easy A? (:

  • you have such good acting skills! your awesome<3 maybe put more expression? i dont know haha! i thot it was awsumm!(:

  • are u allowed to film in public places like did u ask permission

  • @ThePPBJ I bet if you look on the majority of video's, someone says first/second. SO my question is, why are you having a go at ME for it, if MILLIONS of other people have done the exact same thing. and odds are, you have said it before aswell.

  • acting is reacting! when she says something to you, your face doesn't show your reaction (sometimes). I would work on that. you probably had trouble with that bc you were going back and forth with the clips. it's mostly the expressions i would say to work on. other than that it was great! i loved your 'hey!' in the beginning. it felt real. oh and the blonde girl needs to work on speaking clearly. sometimes i couldn't understand her. 'dismissed' sounds like 'disminished' lol. good job!

  • @crzymonica19 Thanks! And you're right...we should've set up two cameras cuz the reactions I used weren't mirrored often with what she was actually saying at the time...But! I wanted my character to not react much to her threats and insults, because she's "above" that. So when she calls me a slut, I don't want my character to get mad, but instead just smirk at her like she's heard it all before. :) I appreciate your feedback and I'll try to sync up the reactions better in the real thing! :D

  • @ThePPBJ so sorry, and for your information, I did enjoy the video. Also I am not stupid. I don't know you, therefore, you don't know me, so don't judge me. K? bye.

  • mccdonalds

  • You guys are so funny! Hahaa!(:

  • Ahh I love this!! I love you too Melissa imma big fan! You both are really pretty<3

  • lol

  • aweesomee.

  • NO ONE CARES IF YOUR FIRST SECOND OR WHATEVER!!!

    anyways... this i awesome both of you!! do more! you both are also so pretty and funny!:)

  • awesome!! :D thanks for subbing me <333

  • second!

  • First!! :D <3

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