emo poems

[torishine3]

Speachless....im speachless...:O

[theperv01]

The moral of this poem is. It takes many nails to build a crib but only one screw to fill it.

[sandwitch50]

Ur really good I used to right but now i drow ether way uv got skill and don't let anyone's pice of shit words nock u down. Sorry about the spelling xD

[kristinbass123]

i love your poems



[tboy221]

you are really good.. i am going to publish a book of poetry i have written soon.

[coldblud101]

the 1st one was the best iv evereverever read like holy fuking shit damn!!!!!im hella good at emo poems too

[MegaGlicher]

roses are red flowers are blue i am emo just like you, fuck all rapper who scream my name becuase of them i am dead ( by the way nice poem )

[Dougredemo]

Btw I made this up

[UndercoverKadaj]

@Dougredemo nice :3 ^^

[Dougredemo]

Hey you can use this if you like "if I never tell you that your beautiful don't be sad you've made me speechless and beautiful never seems good enough

[ToxicAngel7707]

I feel your pain.....

[EmoChildMusic]

They are masterpieces, humane, gripping, pure and emotional, I love them, they are great and I think you have a great future for poetry. I write poems my self, like yours, but your speak out to me. They are Beautifully written

[angeldevilgirljessy]

@EmoChildMusic thnQ very much ^-^ <3

[MrTorrentgamer]

how would u feel if sum1 made thiz into a song

[angeldevilgirljessy]

@MrTorrentgamer :P i already did... mixed the first one and the last one together :] i just dont sing :P only play guitar

[KieranAngelLove]

:')

[GimpRage69]

Your Hot.... Btw I'm Emo And I like the Poems :/

[akodagreat]

i swear i could die for u cuz u pomes make me cry

[129snowball]

SO dnt ba hater soo wat shes awsome

[troopercarlson]

YOUR AMAZING!!!!!!

I write too....

Cuts: Red slits on my body from the sickening fight. I hide them from everybody, not shown to the light. I scream out your name, as you put me through horror. You''ve gone through thy pain, for that was your order. Beautiful, red, twinkling water gushes from my wrists. I feel the urge to slaughter, I have a death wish. I love you to death, I give you my soul.... but there is no love... no faith anymore

[angeldevilgirljessy]

@Ecowolf167 thnQ very much ^^ and ofcourse you can you the video :]

[AmazingMarshallFan]

You are great I love these!

[SabakuNoGaara2010]

That's what u call EMO?! U suck I'm goth I guess and I know what a freakin emo is

[UndercoverKadaj]

@SabakuNoGaara2010 tittle say emo poem.... not that im emo >.> and that was a long time ago i look way different now....don't have to flip out over that...

[gothbabii188]

guh..you suck >.< you don't even know what emo is....jeezus all you're doing is rhyming. FAIL.

[mightytaco123]

number 2 is exsacly like me sorry for the bad spelling

[AllVsMe]

I really liked #2 and the ending lines to #3. You should check out my stuff and post your poems on here.

[HeavenOfRock1]

these poems gives a strange feeling it feels like its speaking right to my heart great job keep going

[nguW2000]

Those peoms remind me of my self always heart broken but awesome keep writeing

[shaydendray55]

well ur just a sypathy seeker and absuer

[atvkid4]

i agree with the second one and the first one is amazing your very talented at writing and dont ever let any one tell you otherwise because i been in that situation before too many times to count but i got stronger and i got my payback even when it wasnt a good thing to do but now i just walk right by like its nothing

[liltwilightfan12]

i love your poems you are talented

[angeldevilgirljessy]

@liltwilightfan12 aw thnQ so much <3 ^-^ means alot to me :D

[angeldevilgirljessy]

@SptmsFldwck i know.... i already said that in discription....that i speeled it wrong... its just a typo

[caylee280]

i almost cryed :*(

[HeavenOfRock1]

@caylee280 i bet everybody did or at least almost did

[supermayo1998]

i rite poems abotu maa life to and its okay bcuz ur not alone...your rilly preaty

[supermayo1998]

i rite poems abotu maa life to and its okay bcuz ur not alone...

[lovedeathjared]

your cute and i write too

[XXEmoXAngel]

You have a gardian angel.. I have the fucking demon...

[alfertigad]

now look im sure some one out there likes u and ther to afraid to ask u out bc thy might think u dont like thm when u do like tht person its happend to me. and if ur stil alive dont kill ur self plzz im sure some one wants u and wants to marrie u i would but im taken and i cant do tht

[angeldevilgirljessy]

@alfertigad ty ^-^ very sweet of you :)  and the poem with the guy.... hes my boyfriend now for almost 2 and a half years ^-^ so im very happy now dont worry :D

[xxasianxxninjaxx]

wow that made me tear up.. that bf/gf are with sum1 else.. that they cant love you anymore... always hate forever is a word for </3

[wowaddiction101]

story of my life! i know your pain :( I don't think i can help u feel better, but just know

that you're not the only one that feels like this.

[joeywheller4ever]

It strolled down the hallways It whisperd in my ear Making my skin slither away It said”Death is a coming” It makes me do something Quite fatal I grab the rope Tie a knot Put my head through a loop Life is all I hope before I know it I’m hanging their I watch my body swinging in the air It made me do it I hate It Why I know that I’m dead I’m mesmerized watching my body their Lifeless Death All I hear is “Death is a coming

[joeywheller4ever]

wow this is grate

i like this one better sometimes things are meant to be. sometimes things are never meant to last. i have to think about now. and stop living in the past. you can't love me, and i know why. you'rw with someone else, it makes me want to cry. my life is just a lie, but things happen for a reason. you've got a gardian angels, and i have the f*ucjing demon!

[sophiluvsdawson]

I loved poem number 2 thought it was really nice and clever :)

[cuddlesrcno]

Awsome poems! I loved ever one of them!

[TenactiousDrox]

i like these poems

[officertubs88]

I loved ur poems they really spike to me I fell the same way and the music fits in great the perfict speed and loudness it's awesome keep up the good work

[NightmareCries]

heres a poem i wrote its called downwards

hurt lost pain alone numb in the heart cold to the bone blind by hatred hurt by love cry scream shout out to the world im blind im stupid lifes not fair whats the point why am i here my voice the whisper inside my head tell me scream at me to end all my pain please turn into a video i love it much real name kanya coffman!!

[Mrxemoxx]

your very pretty

[angeldevilgirljessy]

@Mrxemoxx ty :3 but do you mean how i look in de video or now? :P [ my avatar ] lawl xD

[eatcatsn0tfish]

Damn, these are SICK!!! :D I LOVE THEM!!! You should write more. :) :) :)

[N00bsNxtDoor]

love these i used to have a whole notebook with good poems know ive been thinking of strating a band and poetry is music you know you should wright songs

[Xxprep4lifexX]

There good., You should make them all longer though.!

[emo2000x3]

ur amazing ! i love ur poems !

[XxD3ATHxxBL0SS0MxX91]

i love them... the third one is like wht i just went through... ur writting is most amazing, keep it up

[taitertot12]

i love your peoms!

[sexyboy2good4you]

Your peoms are really kewl i like me

[swsteven14]

love your poems come check out mine an tell me what you think

[animemastergirl]

its so beautiful

[julianorgazmic]

your so eeemmmooooo XD so cut so cute

[scruffdaddy08]

Those were pretty good(:

[TheFlameman33]

very good

[plancarte59]

love it n what is the name of the song

[angeldevilgirljessy]

if a song from the movie: final fantasy 7

earith theme

[EmoIsMyBlack]

theese are very good what song is this?

[angeldevilgirljessy]

its from the movie: final fantasy 7

[charmeddd]

ur poems are beautiful ur a real artist

[Chaosforce99]

hah love the main theme of ff 7 it rocks

[HolstnerKing]

These Are Amazing

[lightlessfirefly]

wow , u r really gooood! hm... i wish u weren't so sad though. You Rock!! :P

[PROSTR01]

nice :)

[RicH3b4]

ooommmmggggg! tha is grate poem(sorry i cant spell) iv been missing love my how life)=

[Impulseification]

You got talent ;)

[SicKxQuiKxScOpE]

that was amazing. i never herd anything like this. i luv it. sorry yu feel this way though =/

[Robotm0nKey121]

thx for the tip really nice of u

[Robotm0nKey121]

Oh my god..... Your freakin poems are awesome... I should favorite your video...... and to be honest...... i love your poems and your were beautiful and inspiring and it inspired me alot...... I want to be a poem writer like you.... having those strong feelings...... any tips for me?

[angeldevilgirljessy]

tip....well uhmm :P

only write when u realy feel like the things u write...

poems with true feelings are always pretty ^-^

[megamanzero999]

@angeldevilgirljessy she is also pretty

[SlitherBaby01]

They mean allot and i totally understand what your sayin keep writing

[mspunkskater]

i love them sooooooooooooo much u rock

[angeldevilgirljessy]

thnQ very much ^^

[kkhaydee164]

beautiful..♥

[EMILY7VENGANCE]

awee! you're so pretty! thats soooo sad but its really good!

[vivicazero1]

is this a joke?

[ledzep191088]

hahahaha

[arbiter4353]

awsome poems first one made me cry T.T

[RejectedAngelz]

Thats Great!!!

[iminlovenow12345]

i love this video.. your so pretty and just wow,, its just a amazing video

[IIF3shC0oki3s]

im a wanna e emo xD.... you got soo maany feelings in them poems

[kkhaydee164]

rude ass face i am suicidal or was im controlling it now nicely (:

[mbm13213]

@kkhaydee164

Did your daddy diddle you when you were a little kid?

[kkhaydee164]

wtf!! how fuckin rude u stupid ass what the fuck is ur problem Turkey dick?

[mbm13213]

@kkhaydee164

Gobble gobble on my dick little suicidal bitch.

[Super00O00]

you are wonderfull girl your beauty

[screamolove123]

fric all you haters thay were beautiful:)

[angeldevilgirljessy]

tyvm :D

[liliemar12]

i love them, and i would not listen to what these ass holes have to say it doesn't mater how fat or ugly you are but what does matter is that you are happpy with your self. i hope you have a good life and everything turns out well for you. :)

[angeldevilgirljessy]

tyvm =)

i dont look like that anymore ;) i cut my hair :P and i feel much better now :)

^-^

[kassiluvsalex10]

dude , this is gayy , i could right much better emo poems than this , and i can already tell you arent scenr , emo , or goth , unlike me , because i am .

why do you choose to be a fuckin poser !!?

[jadelouise600]

well right no u just seem like a chav so y dont u just leave her alone that poem is amazing and I dont fink u could do any better

SO GO AWAY!!!

and try saying something good rather then BAD

[DrSweetCakes]

LOL u just look like sum fat butch in an uperclass community who can't get over how fat you are. well if your so sad i'll come over and cut your face of for you.

[timesnipe722]

FUCKING EMO SHIT

[MrXxemokiddxx]

beautiful boo just beautiful:)

[123imtehshow123]

wow

you have problems like mentel problemsO_O

[DeathsDarkRose]

AGREED!

[narutofan116076]

thats pretty cool=D

[dark6dragon]

those are the best

[emogirl56ify]

i love all of them

[evflyleaf]

I love 2 and 3 the most =]

[boredvlad23]

amazing 0.0

[ononiap]

Btw i know wat its like...i hope ur okay! :)

[ononiap]

OMG! Love it!

[DynamicxEmo]

sometimes your stong

[angeldevilgirljessy]

[ stong = strong ] :P

[shalboner]

hey,

first off

i LOOOOOOOOVE.

your poems.

and i was wondering, would you mind if i used some of your lines in a song?

[angeldevilgirljessy]

uhmm :P a couple oke .. but not all cuzz i made a song of it already :P

[dude1720]

She bled for me now I bleed for her she died for not but death still hurts it pains me now to think of her I died for no pain but DEATH STILL HURTS. support me now in my time of need

forever yours

-Bleeding Heart

[1SemiEmo1]

Really good and btw ur really pretty

[angeldevilgirljessy]

ty ^-^ but i dont look like that anymore ;)

[look my avatar ]  me now =D xD

[1SemiEmo1]

oh ok well i bet u still do lol

[polerbear622]

i know your pain but do not worry ok

[JellyDehli]

ROFL!!!!!!!!!

Wait...this IS a parody isn't it? Sure sounds like one!

[ienvyclouds]

you are beautiful in what you say and the way you look

[123abcrash]

wow........ other people have my crap life too?

[krashiiii10]

i know your pain,i fel it too.i hate sometimes life is different for me and maybe other people like us. but some people have gifts.

[firemle]

your poems are great i feel your pain noone understand are feelings they think they know us but they'll never figure us out i know its hard but you got to move on leave him behind and wright a new song im not trying to rhyme that just does that with everything i say

[FireWolfFangdiamondt]

nice peom

[freelolipopinpants]

wow they're rly good, easy to relate to xD

[jodyraves123]

Your very talented! and prettuy

[philperson95]

this is the most faggot thing i have ever seen get a life you stupid cunt. i actually hope you die bitch

[fearnobody123]

god damn whats your problam? i liked what she wrote

[otakugothicvampire]

good poem check out someof mine but mine dont rhyme ido they ahve to rhyme to be a poem? srry just started writing them thanx

[BMXuntilDeath]

love the poems seems like u write from the heart i write the same way, and i feel u somethings just arnt ment to be

[headstrong16]

omg i love ur poems ur really good keep on doing it n maybe you'll get published

[otakugothicvampire]

check out my poems there not as god adn tehy dont rhyme but their good their on my channel thanx

[xxXvicktoriaXxx]

i really like ur poems mine r completely different but they mean the same thing,,, thats weird but cool...

[Ninjababe16]

wow I luv ur poems wish I could write that well

[rangemajek0]

wow. please make more but this time dont put ure pictrure in the way it makes it hard for me to read x0x0

[angeldevilgirljessy]

haha x3 oke srry :P

[folems]

go die ur too generic

but don't id feel responable

[krazykristi69]

u r so pretty.i love ur poems.i write poems too.its something i like to do.

[blackrosechick1992]

aww, i love your poems

[ILuveMusic101]

ur not emo

[angeldevilgirljessy]

i am now... :S see my icon ->>

[ezer998]

wow i make poems 2 1ns called shut the fuck up i like big black pussy lol :)

[ImJstALilEmo]

great poems love them!

[mcrladygerard13]

i make poems too..... (including depressing, emo, love, hertbreak, sad, hate, friendship...... SO RANDOM) but i havent posted one yet.... maybe in the future

[iDontCare867]

i really like these poems.

[Symcurl]

im nt emo im a lyricsal spitter bt i must say tis poem iz nice

i ave nothing wrong wiv emos i ave emo mates

[growingup15]

wow its great but sad. trust me i write emo poems myself. my friends always tell me that there great but always sad.

[uyahera]

it's beautiful...=)

[lalalalollipop16]

those are AMAZING sad but i loved them

[TheVideoGuy16]

How can someone as pretty as you lose a guy. If I was him i'd probally have to kill my self after loseing you. Nice touching poems

[HolyGlucose]

like some of um

[badtimesallthetime]

these are incredibly beutiful poems, especially the first one, but you need to worry less about rhmying and more about getting the true meanig out instead of using words that just fit in nicely

hope ui write sum more

[xxxemoxxskittlesxxx]

you should write some more those were amazing

[funnylad1]

so beautiful

[angeldevilgirljessy]

thnQ ^-^

[00SkaterGirl00]

it wuz great but u rimed a little2 much

[xxPoetTaddxx]

some of the best poems ive ever read, thanks for sharing them

[angeldevilgirljessy]

thnX ^^

[gtareds]

beautiful

[jc90nemo]

:( sory

[GabbyXirock]

That was amazing.

and it made kinda sad

[GARCIADEMON1]

this poem makes me cry =[

the song fits to

[emogirl2003]

ur a great poet

[xxdeepchickxx]

i love it!!!!

[emoprincessof95]

realy awesome poems keep em up

[wessel2000]

really Nice poems

[emochick0012]

this is very good..hun you r not alone even though i dont know u i see u said in ur poem we cant love u i will love u (as a friend)......right me plz i want u to feel better becuz i feel the same way....i c the pain in your eyes but always remeber things get worst befor they get better..ily right bak..

[angeldevilgirljessy]

thnX that you like them ;D

the last poem was about someone i loved...

but he had a girlfriend :( but they broke up

and now hes my boyfriend (A)

[Elaina015]

i loveur poems

[angeldevilgirljessy]

thnX =D

[12dl196]

Your poems are good!

I love this piano song too.

<3x

[angeldevilgirljessy]

thnQ ^-^