I really liked the approach you took to tell the story. I think there is loads of room to develop this into a longer piece. The voice over drew me into the story and i was left wanting more, which i suppose is a good thing, but i really do feel if you've a mind to develop it then you should.
The three lead characters were really strong and carried a real sense of power, control and strength. Anyway good look with it all. I'll be starting at Confetti myself in September.
I really liked the approach you took to tell the story. I think there is loads of room to develop this into a longer piece. The voice over drew me into the story and i was left wanting more, which i suppose is a good thing, but i really do feel if you've a mind to develop it then you should.
The three lead characters were really strong and carried a real sense of power, control and strength. Anyway good look with it all. I'll be starting at Confetti myself in September.
Cheers
Mark.
curwoodm66 2 years ago