Watch your diction. Your vowels are too spread out horizontally which makes your high notes sound very nasally. The melody in the song should try to sing out while the other parts should back off.
Also, shape the lines. I don't notice much dynamic changes which makes the song a little boring.
@Razzlyify well put- especially work on the dynamic changes. that can make or break any song- and this ones worth not breaking. its a beautiful piece but its not quite there. still, good job
Watch your diction. Your vowels are too spread out horizontally which makes your high notes sound very nasally. The melody in the song should try to sing out while the other parts should back off.
Also, shape the lines. I don't notice much dynamic changes which makes the song a little boring.
Other then those, great singing!
Razzlyify 2 months ago
@Razzlyify well put- especially work on the dynamic changes. that can make or break any song- and this ones worth not breaking. its a beautiful piece but its not quite there. still, good job
pianofanatic101 3 weeks ago
o.o =.=" ur As stand out
cyberdemonnumber3 2 years ago
ABSO. Wonderful!! I miss School for that purpose only(choirs)!!!
MunchkinGoddess86 2 years ago