yeah. about halfway done. i've put in a bit more detail that kinda prolongs the bit with nikumu at the beginning, and then i'm spicing up the bit with sokka right now. there's this one part i'm not really sure about, seeing as i don't know the complete plot, but you can take it out if it doesn't fit.
hm. i dunno how much longer. there isn't much to go on, and i've already practically written half of this chapter already..... if you went back and wrote a basic scene for when suki catches them, i could flesh it out for a few hundred words or so...
you should care. its your story. XD plus, once i was done with what i've got here, i would have to send it back to you, and then you'd write the basic bit and then you'd have to send it BACK to me, and then i'd flesh it out, and then i would have to send it BACK to YOU and then you would post it. XDD its a lot of work for not caring.
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow that was amazing hazaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!! alright so good job and KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK... RIGHT ONNNN!!
you aren't going to finish it, are you? XDD
AyaChan004 2 years ago
Uh...haven't you seen my animations and announcements video? I said I was quitting it
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
ope, no i didnt. XD either that, or i did and just didnt remember. XD
AyaChan004 2 years ago
Fail
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
-3- shut up.
AyaChan004 2 years ago
Not mai fowlt
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
yush it is. -3-
AyaChan004 2 years ago
nu its yours
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
nupe, its always yours. thats just how things work. i personally blame sokka. XDD
AyaChan004 2 years ago
What? Why sokka?
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
he's an easy scapegoat. XDD
AyaChan004 2 years ago
I see
you working on Saving Kyoshi>
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
yeah. about halfway done. i've put in a bit more detail that kinda prolongs the bit with nikumu at the beginning, and then i'm spicing up the bit with sokka right now. there's this one part i'm not really sure about, seeing as i don't know the complete plot, but you can take it out if it doesn't fit.
AyaChan004 2 years ago
It'll probably be fine. If not I'll change it a bit so it fits
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
okay. its almost to 2k words, but if you want it longer, then thats okay.
AyaChan004 2 years ago
Longer if yo ucan, but if you can't I won't force you XD
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
hm. i dunno how much longer. there isn't much to go on, and i've already practically written half of this chapter already..... if you went back and wrote a basic scene for when suki catches them, i could flesh it out for a few hundred words or so...
AyaChan004 2 years ago
You could do that if you wanted. I really don't care
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
you should care. its your story. XD plus, once i was done with what i've got here, i would have to send it back to you, and then you'd write the basic bit and then you'd have to send it BACK to me, and then i'd flesh it out, and then i would have to send it BACK to YOU and then you would post it. XDD its a lot of work for not caring.
AyaChan004 2 years ago
OKay then don't do it
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
well fine then. -3-
AyaChan004 2 years ago
are you going to finish this?
waterbender42 2 years ago
some day XD
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow that was amazing hazaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!! alright so good job and KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK... RIGHT ONNNN!!
earthlover44 2 years ago
Thanks! I hope to finish it wihtin a month or two
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
This is cool! I like it so far! ^^
Sprinkleschan 2 years ago
Thanks! I hope to work on more of it when I get home from vacation
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
XD its awesome
Pickle1312 2 years ago
Thanks! I think its pretty good for my first one
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
Hey I acually did spell the title right XD
waterbender42 2 years ago
yeah you did...nice!
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago
YAY IT'SO SO AWESOME I LOOOOVE IT!
waterbender42 2 years ago
Nice. Thank you so much for uploading
ShiaIchigo 2 years ago