English 102 project- Fight the Power: Hip-Hop's Battle as Public Enemy

[therealbcb]

wow really amazing stuff bro.....and with rza producing you can't go wrong.

[omoneysouthwest1]

like the lyrics man nice job :)

[YouLuqueRight]

Okay, the bars are nice (like real nice), very conscious and you stick to the point you're trying to convey. As for the delivery, you need more conviction and confidence in my opinion. Pretty good nonetheless, glad I looked over this.

[charparis1234]

I really like the beat its sick!! Good work on being creative!

[sphanse92]

Very entertaining! 

[kevo1five]

dope cuz.

[illanrima]

"But then when it destroys us

we'll be quick to shift the blame

Switch invincible with victim

'I ain't the criminal, I'm the played!'"

Thoughtful, creative and smart lyrics that evoke strong visuals. Great beat too.  Don't stop writing!

[swo2n]

Nice writing. Poor delivery. Good job though really.

[perfect20years]

Very unique and full of meaning. I really like the beat to this song. - Rob

[FrankTheScarecrow]

Very creative and interesting double meanings and metaphors.

[0333dancer]

Love the effects on this, it adds a lot of interest. Overall, great job!:)

[ClassicistGreg]

Nice video dude! I like the lyrics! The meaning behind them leads to lots of other possible discussion.

[kristinburger1]

Great song. Very interesting lyrics. Well done.

[seotero5]

I really liked you song. Great beat and even better lyrics. Your argument came out clearly! Nicely done.

[Cruz858]

For someone with very little experience writing and performing hip hop, I think you put forward a good effort. A hook might have been nice as a way of getting your message lodged in your audience's mind. Something to keep in mind as you go forward with your hip-hop stardom.--Mr. Cruz

[KelseyKatarinaSass]

You did a really stupendous job, Im not big on rap for it isnt sophisticated enough for my taste, but this really was splendid to encounter.

[thedioprsz]

AWWWWWWW SHIT

[doriftodorifto]

nicely done

[Chris1337]

aw shit cuz they startin!

[lawlaxdude]

Good job BewareTheFogg :winks:

[bcransom]

HOT HOT FIYAH

[tigerfan5]

Ayyy this nigga raw

[FYWBreborn]

gives this man an A