I really love your voice, but it looks as if you're smiling sort of when you're doing this monologue. (It could be how the camera is positioned too maybe, so if this is the case, make your camera face a little more downwards because it looked a bit awkward.) I wish I could see your more gestures with your hands too, because there is a lot of hand gestures you can do with this monologue. Keep in mind you're really frustrated with your dad in this monologue.(: Good job all in all though! (:
I really love your voice, but it looks as if you're smiling sort of when you're doing this monologue. (It could be how the camera is positioned too maybe, so if this is the case, make your camera face a little more downwards because it looked a bit awkward.) I wish I could see your more gestures with your hands too, because there is a lot of hand gestures you can do with this monologue. Keep in mind you're really frustrated with your dad in this monologue.(: Good job all in all though! (:
AshSplashTV 2 months ago