Fucking lol. This was awesome. My shitty first attempt at poem was about fire: fire burn burn eat and drink your time is soon up it's no time to think what you do you do best little beast you devour cutely in your own little feast! how beautiful your whole lifespan is engulfed in heat, fire fire, process complete, it lives each time alone yet never ceases to be fire fire, eternal fire. Inspiring also, "Fëanor grew swiftly, as if a secret fire were kindled within him." - Silmarillion :D
nice one David. Inspiring to say the least!
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