original song - Are we really happy?

[TapScience]

I'm impressed.

[jmanh93]

I really liked it, but the guitar was a little too loud and twangy over your voice. It has great potential though

[noobcakes99]

this is actually amazing :)

well done :D

[eeviace]

hmmm i liked the guitar part a good bit...

the vocals and melody not so much....

the lyrics are just terrible...i'm sure they are sincere...just cliche and well... lousy

stick w/ the music...try new words and melody.... oh dear i'm just now hearing the humming!! leave that out for sure, does not fit at all!! well it does fit, but it fits the shitty parts, which make it shitty also by association.... i bet if it could be really good w/ a different singer and a new melody/lyrics tho,try that

[kornypony]

thanks to your honest criticisms. no offense, but i dont really care about the fact that you dislike the lyrics, i wrote them to by girlfriend, that was how it was written, and i dont plan to change it. i play music to express, not to impress. so is for my singing. This video was made almost 2 years ago, and i bet i can do a much better version now, but im just gonna leave it where it is. cheers!

[marcelodaniela]

is kinda smashing pumpkins, like it

[anyonecanplayguitar]

im not sure why but ppl tend to compare me to Billy Corgan after they heard my covers of Radiohead songs. :\

[rebegans]

this song is so beautiful!!

[anyonecanplayguitar]

thank you!

[tonigt0tonight]

very nice

something like death cab for cutie

this song reminds me of "the photo album"

[anyonecanplayguitar]

thank you! its much appreciated. in fact, i was thinking about DCFC while writing this song. btw, i apologize for the late reply, as i dont use youtube as often these days.

[slipknot0hate0all]

that was fucking amazing good sound and great lyrics. Overall  really good man

[anyonecanplayguitar]

thank you, sir, you are very kind. the song was nothing more than just a whining of a frustrating relationship =)

[slipknot0hate0all]

well you got a damn good song out of it

[Xylemdrinker]

The lyrics are very heartfelt, and the Composition has a very nice flow to it. 5/5.

[anyonecanplayguitar]

thank you for your comments, i think for this song i still have a lot to work on, for example, the arrangement of the verse and chorus. thanks again. cheers!

[Br00klynB0y87]

This is awesome... I like the overall idea and the lyrics are nice in a melancholy way-

Anyhow, if I was you I'd work on this song further, specifically the second and third verse -I'd introduce another subtle sound/instrument along with the acoustic to guide and "fuller" the sound. -That is just my opinion ofcourse. I find your song is has everything but just lacks variation between verses and can be a bit repetitive.

Nonetheless good work, peace.

[anyonecanplayguitar]

thank you for the constructive critism! it is much appreciated. i agree with the overall monotone of the song. i will work on it when recording. im planning to get a synthesizer so maybe i can put some strings, bass and beats to it. thanks again for your comments.

[Krista360]

It's a great song. Beautifully put together.You have a wonderful tone to your voice...you play guitar with such harmonious heart...love this:}

[anyonecanplayguitar]

thank you! =)

[noirsociety]

koo song, anyone told you that you sound like sean lennon?

[anyonecanplayguitar]

i was told that i look like him :\

[LioneLalexander]

very extraordinary, very rare that something by a non professional could touch me so much. its not polished, but the heart is there, it touched me more than anything else because of the relationships i'm in right now. reminds me of adolescence in new york too. very fucking good pal, plus good add with the radiohead nobody does it better. thats how i first found your channel. you're awesome buddy.

[anyonecanplayguitar]

thanks man, cheers!

[lorak74]

i love it. did you write it?

[anyonecanplayguitar]

thank you! yeah i recycled parts of the other songs i wrote and put them together in this song.