one last fix. Neat poem. And a yellow submarine. And the baby. Need to fix. Please don't comment on oyur acting?? Yuo did well. I liked how it went to end. If I knew a few more words or bought a dictionary I might say what it was, but I liked how you did it.
Plus I think you have a sweet face too. Remember what you've said about vibes. Someone who doesn't think you have a sweet fae has somewhat bad taste in women.
The poem was great. =)
Tokagawa89 1 year ago
Dark....
holythunder1 2 years ago
This poem was quite interesting.
sweetz863 2 years ago
lol
singlaprety1 3 years ago
lol?
Inspiredbyyoo 3 years ago
i mean lol as in a simle
but LOL is luaghng
singlaprety1 3 years ago
that poem gave me so much...pleasure...
hatc9723 4 years ago
That makes me happy.
AnfractuousPattern 4 years ago
Im sailing away??? Yellow submarine??? Hm.. Copyright maybe?? Styx and The Beatles would be so pissed at you.
Supermanj57 4 years ago
know much about allusions?
Inspiredbyyoo 4 years ago
Yes.
Supermanj57 4 years ago
one last fix. Neat poem. And a yellow submarine. And the baby. Need to fix. Please don't comment on oyur acting?? Yuo did well. I liked how it went to end. If I knew a few more words or bought a dictionary I might say what it was, but I liked how you did it.
Plus I think you have a sweet face too. Remember what you've said about vibes. Someone who doesn't think you have a sweet fae has somewhat bad taste in women.
vainihminen 4 years ago
U know? you have a very sweet face
bravery73 5 years ago
Thankyou. I know a lot of people who would disagree with you, though.
Inspiredbyyoo 5 years ago
I cannot believe that, the one who d disagree with me must be a fool only.
bravery73 5 years ago