Good job! Very funny! The only major improvement could have been in tighter shots and the acting. It felt like guys playing around and making a video, not like you were watching a professional commercial. For example, when grabbing it, the first guy would have been running toward the door, possibly a cut to the second camera. Instead, he grabs it and holds onto it while the other guys try to get it. It doesn't look like you storyboarded it out and shot multiple takes.
Yea we went to the other classroom for the first bit and the footage was not taken at the same place; so it changed a bit but i tried to make it look undifferent.
Good job! Very funny! The only major improvement could have been in tighter shots and the acting. It felt like guys playing around and making a video, not like you were watching a professional commercial. For example, when grabbing it, the first guy would have been running toward the door, possibly a cut to the second camera. Instead, he grabs it and holds onto it while the other guys try to get it. It doesn't look like you storyboarded it out and shot multiple takes.
Great job!
- TAE
TheAnimationEmpire 3 years ago
yea. there was two different sort of footage put together; so it didn't flow too well but thx!
thelistenernplayer 3 years ago
I'm Alex Law..
it's kinda random i think the start was good but you could change the ending or else it would go completely messed up.
xiaoqiaozhugeliang 4 years ago
thx; how can i change the ending to make it better? i don't understand how it completely messed up with or else...
thelistenernplayer 4 years ago
its bullying
hero99999999 4 years ago
Good.
xfloraax 4 years ago
ahaha its awesomme!
lmao
louraemon 4 years ago
haw haw very funny. :P
sikelanBFF 4 years ago
I just realised after watching it again -
It sort of messed up when
at first Roy was backing away,
like going away from the door
And you guys were nearer to the door...
But then when you guys were running out
He was closer to the door than you guys
So it's like.
IDK lol.
But still your ad is way awesome, lol.
vkwokky 4 years ago
Yea we went to the other classroom for the first bit and the footage was not taken at the same place; so it changed a bit but i tried to make it look undifferent.
thelistenernplayer 4 years ago
LMAO awesome [:
alvinaaXD 4 years ago
hahah. awesome video.
;)
loveuoi 4 years ago
Nice!
like the idea for ure thing majig
=)
lizziebebizzy 4 years ago
heya this is jaime jonny you pro!
screamer4charlotte 4 years ago
Nice dude u should download iMovie HD
KillingSpree1995 4 years ago
Lol, I made this account just so I can like. Upload mine.
Nice idea, btw.
Lol,
yeahh...
My advert is really rough 'cos I'm like. New to Final Cut Pro. -__-
vkwokky 4 years ago
Luv the music and how you guys planned it out so well......I luv it!!!!!!
justinWROKS228 4 years ago
this is totally awesome. so funny jonny
AM45NED 4 years ago
MY FIRST VIDEO / DIE!!!!! IMOVIE ROCKS and i just started usin it yesterday!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thelistenernplayer 4 years ago
omg...this is HILARIOUS xD make more!!! love the screaming after Roy ran out ^.^
EmoThunder222 4 years ago