Sorry jake this isn't funny at all. I found myself not laughing at even one of your jokes. I want to try and be positive but there was nothing funny about the your stand up. The only funny thing was that you thought your jokes were good. I know this is rough but I want to be honest, if u really want to see how funny u are dont be a pussy and do this in front of an live crowd.
Hey Jake, You've got good delivery and projection. Start working with a mic, for practice. Too many "uhms" and "y;knows" . Wear some pants, your bird legs are distracting! Ha! check out my bit search: Johnnyfuckingedwards (dirty comedy so ask your parents' permission.- Johnny
Wow, Jake. I can't believe this is basically your first stand-up routine. Great script. As far as the delivery goes, if you could do a bit more in the way of impersonating the people you are talking about, or just exaggerate your facial expressions or something just to enhance the comic effect, then it would be perfect and way better than the the stand up I saw in NYC, serious. I'm very proud of you.
hahaha i loved the "sob" at the beginning :) but i thought you could do the "Wabbit" voice better, tho. its an awesome idea- so i think i'd stretch it out and make it really exaggerated. :) also, i think you could change ur volume more to bring out punchlines and then maybe lolz... flap ur arms a bit more! more movement, i mean.
i love the words :) the liver spots- the walking stick. its really well written! overall- it's really good! :) :) i really liked it :) honest!
hahaha well thanks nina! yeaaa i've kinda learned a lil that to be funny you have to exaggerate everything A LOT!!!! i'll keep that in mind haha thanks!
ur kinda like macain
Ac3sniper 2 years ago
Sorry jake this isn't funny at all. I found myself not laughing at even one of your jokes. I want to try and be positive but there was nothing funny about the your stand up. The only funny thing was that you thought your jokes were good. I know this is rough but I want to be honest, if u really want to see how funny u are dont be a pussy and do this in front of an live crowd.
evancisneros531 2 years ago
your a mormon faggot
numba1underdog 3 years ago
wow
gandway 3 years ago
Hey Jake, You've got good delivery and projection. Start working with a mic, for practice. Too many "uhms" and "y;knows" . Wear some pants, your bird legs are distracting! Ha! check out my bit search: Johnnyfuckingedwards (dirty comedy so ask your parents' permission.- Johnny
nonards 3 years ago
wow parker, you're even more annoying on youtube than you are in history class,
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niffer1 3 years ago
hahahahaha i totally agree
goinyard216 3 years ago
Wow, Jake. I can't believe this is basically your first stand-up routine. Great script. As far as the delivery goes, if you could do a bit more in the way of impersonating the people you are talking about, or just exaggerate your facial expressions or something just to enhance the comic effect, then it would be perfect and way better than the the stand up I saw in NYC, serious. I'm very proud of you.
kristinparker22 3 years ago
hi hi jake :) its nina :P
hahaha i loved the "sob" at the beginning :) but i thought you could do the "Wabbit" voice better, tho. its an awesome idea- so i think i'd stretch it out and make it really exaggerated. :) also, i think you could change ur volume more to bring out punchlines and then maybe lolz... flap ur arms a bit more! more movement, i mean.
i love the words :) the liver spots- the walking stick. its really well written! overall- it's really good! :) :) i really liked it :) honest!
kingdombasses 3 years ago
hahaha well thanks nina! yeaaa i've kinda learned a lil that to be funny you have to exaggerate everything A LOT!!!! i'll keep that in mind haha thanks!
sk8erguyjake 3 years ago
Did u memorize all dis? McCain blinking and being blinded by whites was funny. Dont say ummmm so much.
harvancik123 3 years ago
1st comment!!
harvancik123 3 years ago