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From: sk8erguyjake
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  • ur kinda like macain

  • Sorry jake this isn't funny at all. I found myself not laughing at even one of your jokes. I want to try and be positive but there was nothing funny about the your stand up. The only funny thing was that you thought your jokes were good. I know this is rough but I want to be honest, if u really want to see how funny u are dont be a pussy and do this in front of an live crowd.

  • your a mormon faggot

  • wow

  • Hey Jake, You've got good delivery and projection. Start working with a mic, for practice. Too many "uhms" and "y;knows" . Wear some pants, your bird legs are distracting! Ha! check out my bit search: Johnnyfuckingedwards (dirty comedy so ask your parents' permission.- Johnny

  • wow parker, you're even more annoying on youtube than you are in history class,

    liv

  • hahahahaha i totally agree

  • Wow, Jake. I can't believe this is basically your first stand-up routine.  Great script. As far as the delivery goes, if you could do a bit more in the way of impersonating the people you are talking about, or just exaggerate your facial expressions or something just to enhance the comic effect, then it would be perfect and way better than the the stand up I saw in NYC, serious. I'm very proud of you.

  • hi hi jake :) its nina :P

    hahaha i loved the "sob" at the beginning :) but i thought you could do the "Wabbit" voice better, tho. its an awesome idea- so i think i'd stretch it out and make it really exaggerated. :) also, i think you could change ur volume more to bring out punchlines and then maybe lolz... flap ur arms a bit more! more movement, i mean.

    i love the words :) the liver spots- the walking stick. its really well written! overall- it's really good! :) :) i really liked it :) honest!

  • hahaha well thanks nina! yeaaa i've kinda learned a lil that to be funny you have to exaggerate everything A LOT!!!! i'll keep that in mind haha thanks!

  • Did u memorize all dis? McCain blinking and being blinded by whites was funny. Dont say ummmm so much.

  • 1st comment!!

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