Yours sounds interesting. I have to say though, I'm not entirely sure - from a sales point of view - that it's the best title for a horror/thriller. But that's just my opinion :)
Yours sounds interesting. I have to say though, I'm not entirely sure - from a sales point of view - that it's the best title for a horror/thriller. But that's just my opinion :)
Totally agree with Sean! I registered with Youtube just to post a message. Your story is superb...and the ending...Fantastic! I really hope to see this movie now, all the best
As a BOSI Mentoring Program participant - not participating in this contest - just gave your pitch the Thumbs Up. You cover most of the elements Danny and Andy went through during training and "MADE" sounds commercially viable as well! Suggestion: for the sake of not turning off the suits, I'd sell it as horror-suspense, rather than drama-horror. From your pitch, you seem to go for that "contemporary supernatural feel" reminiscent of M. Night Shyamalan. Get a big name to do the teacher! GL!
Word! I only 'liked' it' coz I read your script, and I think you have a winner! I don't usually vote for pitches. But your story is absorbing, and the ending is...Brilliant!! Totally unexpected and original. I laughed and I was scared shitlles. Keep sending your script to people.
Word! I only 'liked' it' coz I read your script, and I think you have a winner! I don't usually vote for pitches. But your story is absorbing, and the ending is...Brilliant!! Totally unexpected and original. I laughed and I was scared shitlles. Keep sending your script to people.
Good pitch, it includes a summary of the logline, main acts, the characters, story, and you do it naturally and lively without reading mechanically from a teleprompter like others do. All the best, you have my Like.
your movie sounds pretty interesting and you seem pretty passionate about it. I hope your best as a fellow screenwriter, and i hope to see your movie in the big screen. but i didn't get the title.
So who won?? Was it you? You got the most Likes as far as I can see.
johnnyone9 1 year ago 2
did you enter the page awards??
kearyespeer 1 year ago
Gros bisous et bonne chance! Tes histoires m'on toujours marquées, tu es original et tes dialogues sont fantastiques! <3
patapatasel 1 year ago
lots of luck! hope you win :)
andrickvason 1 year ago
lousy
tanitamora1 1 year ago
Hey,
thanks for the comment.
Yours sounds interesting. I have to say though, I'm not entirely sure - from a sales point of view - that it's the best title for a horror/thriller. But that's just my opinion :)
Good luck.
P.
DryIce7 1 year ago
Hey,
thanks for the comment.
Yours sounds interesting. I have to say though, I'm not entirely sure - from a sales point of view - that it's the best title for a horror/thriller. But that's just my opinion :)
Good luck.
P.
DryIce7 1 year ago
Bonne chance!
felixcfg 1 year ago
Geez! You're getting up there in your "likes!"
kearyespeer 1 year ago
Best of Luck Sebby! Love Perdie xx
perdiehb 1 year ago
Bafta, Sebi!!
olariugabriela 1 year ago
Totally agree with Sean! I registered with Youtube just to post a message. Your story is superb...and the ending...Fantastic! I really hope to see this movie now, all the best
desdemoner 1 year ago 4
As a BOSI Mentoring Program participant - not participating in this contest - just gave your pitch the Thumbs Up. You cover most of the elements Danny and Andy went through during training and "MADE" sounds commercially viable as well! Suggestion: for the sake of not turning off the suits, I'd sell it as horror-suspense, rather than drama-horror. From your pitch, you seem to go for that "contemporary supernatural feel" reminiscent of M. Night Shyamalan. Get a big name to do the teacher! GL!
pabloponcedeleon 1 year ago 2
where is your script Sir? sounds good brother, im gripped
huzbandex 1 year ago
to 28naenae28, haha, i'm flattered but no.
candidatebosi 1 year ago
you're a homo.
28naenae28 1 year ago
Hi, I really liked the way you tell it all to us. I have learned from you.
RosalindaMorriss 1 year ago 2
Word! I only 'liked' it' coz I read your script, and I think you have a winner! I don't usually vote for pitches. But your story is absorbing, and the ending is...Brilliant!! Totally unexpected and original. I laughed and I was scared shitlles. Keep sending your script to people.
toddericksean2 1 year ago 5
Word! I only 'liked' it' coz I read your script, and I think you have a winner! I don't usually vote for pitches. But your story is absorbing, and the ending is...Brilliant!! Totally unexpected and original. I laughed and I was scared shitlles. Keep sending your script to people.
toddericksean2 1 year ago
Go Sebbyyy!!! :D We miss you!
Hanne.
HaVdB 1 year ago
I like the story Seby :)
Fingers crossed!
Anne1991VDV 1 year ago
Sebby, I see the resemblance and I love the idea! The Best of Luck to you!!
davymaster1 1 year ago
Good pitch, it includes a summary of the logline, main acts, the characters, story, and you do it naturally and lively without reading mechanically from a teleprompter like others do. All the best, you have my Like.
johnnyone9 1 year ago 2
Go Sebastian!!! :D
Soldier2580 1 year ago
Wish you loads of luck Sebastian will redirect to my friends Jan Frome
TheFerrett1 1 year ago
@candidatebosi
Hi, a misunderstanding on my part it seems.
I was sent an email about this a couple of times by a mutual friend but i didn't recognise the address. - Hence i thought it was spam.
I've removed the comment and liked up the video
Best luck with your pitch.
JimLockey 1 year ago
your movie sounds pretty interesting and you seem pretty passionate about it. I hope your best as a fellow screenwriter, and i hope to see your movie in the big screen. but i didn't get the title.
popifun 1 year ago 2
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JimLockey 1 year ago
nice dude and I wish you the very best of luck!
dzone911 1 year ago
Sounds great !
rodking42 1 year ago
Good luck, sir... I shall spread the word... T
Mozi2 1 year ago
Sounds like Lost but with kids...so don't know if it'll work but i clicked LIKE anyway.
The best of luck!
madseadog 1 year ago
Sounds like the story would really draw me in. Good luck!
jcweh 1 year ago 2
good luck mate! your script deserves the win
ShopliftersUnite 1 year ago
Best of luck, Seb!!! The story sounds great!!
Lenoutza 1 year ago
it sounds good. the type of story i would like to see on the big screen.
filmkinbuff 1 year ago
srr guys for the sound delay. couldn't fix it.
candidatebosi 1 year ago
@candidatebosi hey sebastian, your link isn't working i think..
bxlenfooorce 1 year ago