mystic cave (mario paint composer original composition)

[Rabje1234]

not bad. I like the basic melody, but next time you could use some more instruments and make the tempo a lot higher so you can add more notes =D

Maybe another soundfont? like a Real Soundfont or Orchestral soundfont.

So: nice job but it needs a little more work (and a better recording program).

[jinjo2200]

thank you so much for the comment. I figured out the perfect frame rate(sort of) thank you

[ChaosZero314159]

Would it be okay if I redid this song with some other instruments and a different soundfont and posted a video as a response becuz I like the premise and melody you've got going. However the poor quality of the recording which isn't really your fault kinda ruins the video.

[jinjo2200]

Wow, I'm just surprised I got no nasty comment when I got a comment. anyway, I give you permission if I get credit. Thank you for the comment.

[Vlog4Verena]

not bad, but seems lazy, like no time was taken

[skyzer332]

<.< no effort

[deadlykill7]

completely agreed there

[cetko13]

Awful

[xEdge42x]

Well dude, this song seemed like you barely put any work or effort into it, and was extremely sloppy.

[Fullnintendo]

The general emptyness and instrument choice (particulary the Marios and shy guys) corresponds quite well to a cave's atmosphere and. It got a nice sense of unpredictability with those thrills that add some mystery. You had great ideas and good percussions.

However, I think that it would need sighly more complexity (more melodies and instruments), variation and more choesion (better transitions to thrills).

Far from being bad and actually good in concept and sound. Nice job!

[jinjo2200]

thank you. I really appreciate it.

[ubberduppy55]

To few instruments. builds up to slow and my opinion tempo is a little slow. I also think that fast part of notes ruins the songs atmosphere.

[jinjo2200]

It sounded better in ams. I tried to recreate it the best I can.

[ubberduppy55]

Instead of using ams make it on mario paint from the start and transcribe it from your head

[TheReaverUltimate]

boring. Not enough instruments. should put more work first.

[foxwolf0]

i like it. reminds me of several different games and other.