KID RAPS WU-TANG (PROD. RZA) (MUSIC VIDEO)

[herostasman]

listen to old eminem. rap like his style not the new lil wayne

[longluvedrappers]

@herostasman i dont listen to lil wayne, and i want to develop my own style. i dont want to sound like an eminem wannabe either

[pailiu13]

Yeyeyeyeyeyeyey boiiiiii

[iBlurryFilms]

YESSSS KARAN!!!!!

[beeejaiii]

too fast on this beat.

but besides that, u got the right idea buddy.

goodluck, it's a harsh world out there.

[LK9Icepick]

longluvedrappers can destroy 90% of these fake studio gangsters in a rap battle. That's a fact.

[TheSupaflyJedi]

Nicely done man!

[ir193]

Lyrics are great. Like the rest of them said before me work on flow or maybe choose a different instrumental to match the rap.

[GoreyAndKrookedOnes]

You can rap

Tighten up the flow a bit and I think you are good really

Dunno this is sick though still!

[TheHotchick313]

keep up the go work.view my view at>thehotchick313

[J12kL]

keep it up bro

[OldirtyHobo]

worl on M-A-K-I-N-G O-U-T  Y-O-U-R WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORDS

[EvanMulrine]

nice man :)

[qpqb]

woah woah slow down lol naww but it was good

work on flow and go with the beat more

u have OG lyrics btw

[HustlaRiddimzCinema]

I know this guy! lol keep it up bruv!

[LK9Icepick]

This guy is amazing!

[FallingForgiveness]

Oh one more thing, I love the way you bring it back at 1.29, the start of that section is perfect imo, but it should slow down gain afterwards, back to flowing with the beat.

[FallingForgiveness]

Yeah man lyrics are nice, only problem is your going way to fast for the beat, its good to keep some parts of it fast, but the majority of it wants to move a little slower flowing with the beat. As i said though some of your lyrics are nice man, keep at it :).

[DecoYserbia]

slow down dude



[TheDogod]

if you work on your flow i'd buy your stuff !

[carfansunited]

Yeah, you're good!

[wikedsikmedia]

slow down bro and work on that flow but still pretty dope

[skatinghobart]

dont put effects on your voice, at the beginning also. maybe slow it a tiny bit at some points, sounds great!

[longluvedrappers]

thanks for all the advice. I try to improve and do new things everytime i make a new track.

[REELHIPHOP420]

@longluvedrappers good shit, could use with some adjustments... better mic.. for example... but yeah, dope shit... fuck these haterss... chose a good beat.. but Immortal and WuTang are two completely different styles... respect.. add me up... peace

[hunnitmillion]

I like that you understand the importance of being lyrical and you have some nice, intelligent lines but you should slow down and try to be more melodic and flow on the beat, because right now you're just reciting the lyrics with music playing in the background. Still, good job.

[inchulk]

@hunnitmillion I second that...you're lyrics are good, and nuff respect for biggin' up the Wu man...but you gotta practice rappin' on beat...good lyrics, just gotta work on your flow...

[ceferistul05]

you know you won't rise to fame with this, right? and you know why? cause ppl these days listen to Autotune! hahaaa anyway good performance kid :)

[mysticarbol]

hmm hes alright..

[Richardood]

This is better than Lil Wayne :)

[REELHIPHOP420]

@Richardood fuck, anyone who raps nowadays is better then Lil Wayne

[Buckfutter1000]

@Richardood nigga, the fuckin queen of england is better than lil wayne.

[mapleleaf786]

eyy yoo karannn so ill

[kingballaboi1]

shit goess hardd!!

sick broo!!