[S] CR1M1N4L, CR1M1N4L - Original Homestuck Fansong by Rachel Macwhirter

[MichuKyu]

I know what ill be singing for many weeks now >:]

[2Dswife459]

I learned the words to this in an hour. XD

[447u]

I think it would have been better with "criiiminal, criiiminal", not "crimminal, crimminal".

[RachMacwhirter]

@447u

Thanks for the advice. The choice of 'crimminal' as opposed to 'criiminal' was a conscious choice though - I liked how much more bouncy it sounded :)

[Iluvmakara]

ALL FUCKING DAY criminal hmm hmm hm Friend~Uh Cynthia wat are u doing me; nothing

[chessykit]

Oh hey, it's my canon Terezi voice... (seriously.)

[rgreedj]

Rhythm seems off. Lyrics are nice, but they're sung so bunched and such. Were it me, things would be more drawn out, but articulated just as sharply if not more so. Excellent work nonetheless.

[JennyTHM]

Headcanon Terezi voice: Found

[MoMoMel908]

This is so perfect for Terezi. No words can describe the perfection of your voice and your writing.

[tromboneperson1]

my friends are addictied to homestuck... Whats it about?

[TwilitFeather]

@tromboneperson1 shenanigans

[RachMacwhirter]

@tromboneperson1

Simply put, it's about Kids And Fun.

[majorearthlover]

@RachMacwhirter You know, except for the part where that one guy goes insane from withdrawl and kills everyone including his best friend.

[tromboneperson1]

@RachMacwhirter oh ok thanks should i read it?

[RachMacwhirter]

@tromboneperson1

It's definitely worth a read! The first act may seem slow (it's still wonderful though), but it never stops escalating and accelerating. Basically, it's the most incredible thing I've ever seen.

[KidaNoche]

Sung this all day and drove my friends nuts. I wanted to ask about the music? What did you use to make that? [assuming, you know, I'm a noob and don't know anything at all about this kind of stuff]

[DMLunatic]

This is the most amazing thing I've ever heard!!! >: ]

Tell me, how hard did you work to make it 4:13 long?

[RachMacwhirter]

@DMLunatic

Thank you!

I didn't actually work super hard to get it to 4:13 long. It kind of naturally sat around the 4:14/4:15 mark when I was nearly done with it, so I tweaked the tempo a little bit for P3RF3CT1ON.

[yectorium]

4 minutes of my life wasted...

[RachMacwhirter]

@yectorium

It took you that long to realise you disliked it? x3

[precociousParasite]

@yectorium You must have seriously hated it if you listened to the whole song. ;D

[tromboneperson1]

@yectorium wow if you watched the whole thing then decieded you didnt like it then you are an idiot

[tehvampire]

The quality: Excellent

Lyrics: Perfect

Melody: Unbelievably catchy.

I REALLY REALLY LOVE THIS.

[Totalcat7]

HEADCANNON and holy crap that is amazing

[anlocati]

oh god this i want to make a cosplay music video for this!! oh my god!!! so amazing!

[Ravenofthestorm]

YoU bRoKe My tHiNkPaN MoThErFu CkEr... tHiS Is a MoThErFuC KiN' mIrAcLe!

[TigrisISA]

OMG!!! this is exactly four minutes, thirteen seconds long!

[t1w1y]

I didn't like Homestuck, couldn't even get past the first two pages. Then I heard this song. I'm on Act Two now.

[RachMacwhirter]

@t1w1y

AWESOME. I feel so proud, haha.

[JulianH1001]

You should apply for the contest Hussie's holding for the album. FOR S3R1OUS. >:]

[plainWonder]

@JulianH1001 Amen to that. We could use some more songs that are actually, you know, sung.

[MixedUpCc]

Amazing song:D

[MaleShojofan777]

Submit this to the album!!!!!!!

[eriinthehedgehog22]

I agree with the person below me, submit it to the album! :D This is great!

[Mythbusters51]

You should submit this for the album! The next one is a contest!

[lindigaro]

I see the like button... but where is the love button?

[epictoxicmonster]

Oh my gosh, this is great! Amazing work Rachel Macwhirter. Keep it up :3

[ChucklesTheVampire]

I just.

All three things I've found myself obsessed with over the past year or so (HINABN, Hunger Games, and now Homestuck), I've found songs by you for those things.

And they are all so amazingly wonderful.

AAAAAAAAAAAAH. SO COOL.

[LPSFlix]

Wow, this is amazing! <3

[MrJoost66]

I officially feel happy that Terezi is my patron troll. This is an amazing song, great job.

[TheWarnerSister]

DO YOU UNDERSTAND THE DEPTH OF MY DELIGHT IN THIS SONG. CAN YOU EVEN FATHOM IT. OH MY GOODNESS.

It's so cutesy, yet disturbing... it's got that little twinkle in the background just like Terezi's theme... and I think if I closed my eyes I would indeed hear this song in black, teal and red. And to top it all off your voice is just how I imagine Terezi's! This is...

D3C4D3NT.

[PrinceMoogle]

n0w i g14e th1s s0ng a thumbs up :)

[HolyCowWorshipper]

HAHA holy crap. Ok yeah Holly again. You are amazing okay. Yeah.

[Roflmao9]

WH4T NOW? >:]

[blueowl]

Someone should make a badass Death Note AMV to this. That is, after they make a Homestuck one.

[DeRagon3333]

So, what grade did you get on this song? >:]

[RachMacwhirter]

@DeRagon3333

No idea for this song on its own, but for the subject overall I got a high distinction >:]

[DeRagon3333]

@RachMacwhirter H3H3 3XC3LL3NT

Great song by the way, I'm going to get this and Temporal Shenanigans on my musically inclined listening device soon. Keep it up!

[Misevenify]

This is perfect. :D

And you have a beautiful voice.

[IAmOnFyre]

You have a really beautiful voice, but the lyrics we a little clunky. It's still super catchy though.

[naruhina2894]

RachMacwhirter: make the best terezi song ever

YOU CANT DO THAT! it has already been done October 23 2011, R3M3MB3R? >:]

[TheGodKefka]

Like a lot of other videos out there, this needs more views.

[CaptainSeaWolf]

My new canon voice >:]

[devdude53]

Ok, this is the first HS fansong I have EVER heard; and you just raised the bar, P3RM4N3NTLY!

[jayceface07]

OMG I LIKE REALLY LOVE YOU NOW!!!! YOUR SONGS ARE AMAZING!!!

[pikachurinnn]

This is so brilliant! :D

[jadem9987]

This is amazing! It needs more views...

[NijuuNiji]

This

is gorgeous

[LizaLeech]

YES!!!! I have been waiting for this and I am not remotely disappointed!!!! It's wonderful and I LOVE it.

[Fennecatt]

Holy crap this is... wow. Absolutely FABULOUS.

[8GrejmoN8]

Well, okay, crap, gonna doublepost here, it wasn't such a good idea to comment before I was done watching it, but my GOG it's freaking amazing. I somehow can't enjoy fan-made HS songs with lyrics, but gog freaking darnit, your voice somehow makes it all even more amazing. Both the song itself and the lyrics are awesome, and both fit Terezi's style pretty darn well. You did a great job on that song, I could even see it one of the official HS albums. You really are talented.

[8GrejmoN8]

Homestuck seriously took over your life, didn't it.

...

You also can't sleep due to the incoming EoA5 flash, right?

Please, tell me I'm not the only one.

...Please.

[nolakali]

@8GrejmoN8 i know it is driving me up the wall in suspense

[Sagers24]

@8GrejmoN8 you aren't the only one, I'm up till like 3:00 am reading homestuck and bloggs, so I don't sleep much before school

[loloutloud86]

HOLY SHIZZ!!!!! THIS IS SO AMAZING! I CAN"T EVEN HANDLE IT RIGHT NOW!!!! :O

Everything is beautiful and nothing hurts. :'D

This is also a good voice for Terezi (at least I think so.).

[xcarmella]

this is fantastic <33333333

[TheShadowpie]

VERY good.

[pupz24]

SO AWESOME~

[stopitsgingertime]

Amazing song, and it's 4:13 long too! P3RF3CT >:]

[CoolGriffy]

Ok, this is pretty awesome

[PhychoHam]

}:D wOW, uHH, i DIDN'T KNOW YOU COULD SING THIS GOOD, tEREZI!