I can see you put a lot of work into this but I didn't like it very much. I guess your characters are good and you can build on them, but for the pilot episode I found the beanstalk idea boring. See, the beanstalk stories are a bit overrated to me because they have been done so many times. I feel like I, as a viewer, would want more of a backstory. How did Mike and Jordan become friends? Why are they so poor? Where do they live? Etc. For first time animation though, this was good quality.
It's pretty funny! x3 But there's no females in the show, so it might not appeal to that demographic! However its pretty funny and I enjoyed it. :D and I'm a girl. But get a girl character haha~
@PopPrincesses Uh oh busted! You're right, and we did realize that one glaring absence and will be sure to make up for it in the next one. That way young females around the globe will have a role model to look up to the same way young males look up to these characters! ;) Thanks for watching!
I'm not a fan of the animation style but I thought the plot was interesting and a couple bits made me laugh. I think you guys have a lot of potential and I can totally see a slightly more stylistically developed version of this on Adult Swim 8D
@veryboredpug Thanks for the feedback=) There are definitely a few things we would want to polish/improve if we had a larger team and more time. It was our first ever animation and since there was only two of us working on it we had to balance efficiency with quality. Let us know what you think of the next one!
this is awesome and funny
skiesdalimit1 2 weeks ago
how did u animate the arms? when i do cut-outs it looks shitty
tgmagee186 2 months ago
@tgmagee186 I used the After Effects puppet tool. It's pretty cool.
pldshrtprdctns 2 months ago
@pldshrtprdctns hey guys ethan these videos are awsome i should help u guys some time
EthanKears 2 months ago
This was funny i could see ya on adult swim on one of their 15 minute timeslots.
MurkSquad5150 4 months ago
I can see you put a lot of work into this but I didn't like it very much. I guess your characters are good and you can build on them, but for the pilot episode I found the beanstalk idea boring. See, the beanstalk stories are a bit overrated to me because they have been done so many times. I feel like I, as a viewer, would want more of a backstory. How did Mike and Jordan become friends? Why are they so poor? Where do they live? Etc. For first time animation though, this was good quality.
ilovemostlyanything2 4 months ago
LMFAO iou 1000
DEO541 4 months ago
It's pretty funny! x3 But there's no females in the show, so it might not appeal to that demographic! However its pretty funny and I enjoyed it. :D and I'm a girl. But get a girl character haha~
PopPrincesses 4 months ago
@PopPrincesses Uh oh busted! You're right, and we did realize that one glaring absence and will be sure to make up for it in the next one. That way young females around the globe will have a role model to look up to the same way young males look up to these characters! ;) Thanks for watching!
pldshrtprdctns 4 months ago
@pldshrtprdctns Oh! She should be really hot but a raging lesbian! :D
PopPrincesses 4 months ago
@PopPrincesses there is a girl and she is the perfect role model :D
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BlarkUntVhite 4 months ago
I'm not a fan of the animation style but I thought the plot was interesting and a couple bits made me laugh. I think you guys have a lot of potential and I can totally see a slightly more stylistically developed version of this on Adult Swim 8D
veryboredpug 4 months ago
@veryboredpug Thanks for the feedback=) There are definitely a few things we would want to polish/improve if we had a larger team and more time. It was our first ever animation and since there was only two of us working on it we had to balance efficiency with quality. Let us know what you think of the next one!
pldshrtprdctns 4 months ago
@pldshrtprdctns Wow, it looks really professional for your first ever animation! And yeah, can't wait to see more (:
veryboredpug 4 months ago
That was awesome, I'd want to see that on Adult swim =)
PressXStudios 4 months ago
Thanks! Hopefully someday....
pldshrtprdctns 4 months ago
This is funny but could use a bit of work, and maybe make the characters blink a bit more to add a little more life to the characters
projectxtrememe 4 months ago
Yeah I thought about it, but decided I could save some time by not adding blinks. Maybe on the next one. Thanks for watching!
pldshrtprdctns 4 months ago
Great job!
onceinmotion 4 months ago
this was a pretty funny cartoon, hope you guys get to have ur own show on adult swim keep it up man!
buddahsmokee 4 months ago
this made me laugh
7255202 4 months ago
Great Episode! Many great scenes and funny characters. The dance and Mike and Jordan walking were my favorite animation. Outstanding job!
cowsarealiensnaca 5 months ago
@cowsarealiensnaca Thanks! The kind words really mean a lot=) Let me know when you guys have anything up!
pldshrtprdctns 5 months ago