that was well done, but I felt the music was a little too loud sometimes and we can't make out whar the characters are saying. But good job! I loved the p.o.v you used for the locker scene!
@TheBLVDofdreams Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! Yeah there were a few mistakes in this short film, the music being the most noticeable. We were on a short deadline (as it was for a school project) so we weren't able to perfect it unfortunately. The final scene was supposed to play out differently also, but again, the deadline took that away from us. The locker scene is my favorite part, thanks again for your comment :)
that was well done, but I felt the music was a little too loud sometimes and we can't make out whar the characters are saying. But good job! I loved the p.o.v you used for the locker scene!
TheBLVDofdreams 9 months ago
@TheBLVDofdreams Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! Yeah there were a few mistakes in this short film, the music being the most noticeable. We were on a short deadline (as it was for a school project) so we weren't able to perfect it unfortunately. The final scene was supposed to play out differently also, but again, the deadline took that away from us. The locker scene is my favorite part, thanks again for your comment :)
TheMrAdrianG 9 months ago