all the pre-raphaelite canvasses SpokenVerse shows per stanza match the way things are going in this Victorian parlor which is for play and more than with just words . " En garde ! "
It's funny how these things sometimes come to mind. I was turning this poem over in my mind and it suddenly occurred to me that I'd incorrectly written"154th sonnet" the day before. I kicked myself and came back to this board.
Beautiful. Though, you said "choose" instead of "chose" and "extracting" rather than "exacting". I only noticed the third time I listened, however.
ThePublicPolemic 7 months ago
Thank you :) ~PaganGlade~
PaganGlade 7 months ago
all the pre-raphaelite canvasses SpokenVerse shows per stanza match the way things are going in this Victorian parlor which is for play and more than with just words . " En garde ! "
rappamarfil 7 months ago
It's funny how these things sometimes come to mind. I was turning this poem over in my mind and it suddenly occurred to me that I'd incorrectly written"154th sonnet" the day before. I kicked myself and came back to this board.
polymath7 8 months ago
Goddammit, I meant sonnet 116. SpokenVerse, you approved the comment, why didn't you correct me?
(I'm sure you spotted the error unless you were as distractedly careless as I was)
polymath7 8 months ago
very fine-
hswatnik 8 months ago
Love this! Thank you :-)
chona42 8 months ago
Very much timely for me. I am off to vacation with a lady candidate, and as the last line says, I will wait and see. :-)
BabyHominid 8 months ago
This reminds me a bit of Shakespeare's 154th sonnet ("Love's not love which alters when it alteration finds...).
polymath7 8 months ago
Thanks for sharing this poem - I am someone who likes Victorian chicklit!
Also, I liked the H. Rider Haggard/Rumpole of the Bailey reference!
duckpondwithoutducks 8 months ago
@duckpondwithoutducks I like the fact that you recognised it. At least she isn't a member of the tribe who put pots on the heads of strangers...
SpokenVerse 8 months ago