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  • Beautiful. Though, you said "choose" instead of "chose" and "extracting" rather than "exacting". I only noticed the third time I listened, however.

  • Thank you :) ~PaganGlade~

  • all the pre-raphaelite canvasses SpokenVerse shows per stanza match the way things are going in this Victorian parlor which is for play and more than with just words . " En garde ! "

  • It's funny how these things sometimes come to mind. I was turning this poem over in my mind and it suddenly occurred to me that I'd incorrectly written"154th sonnet" the day before. I kicked myself and came back to this board.

  • Goddammit, I meant sonnet 116. SpokenVerse, you approved the comment, why didn't you correct me?

    (I'm sure you spotted the error unless you were as distractedly careless as I was)

  • very fine-

  • Love this! Thank you :-)

  • Very much timely for me. I am off to vacation with a lady candidate, and as the last line says, I will wait and see. :-)

  • This reminds me a bit of Shakespeare's 154th sonnet ("Love's not love which alters when it alteration finds...).

  • Thanks for sharing this poem - I am someone who likes Victorian chicklit!

    Also, I liked the H. Rider Haggard/Rumpole of the Bailey reference!

  • @duckpondwithoutducks I like the fact that you recognised it. At least she isn't a member of the tribe who put pots on the heads of strangers...

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