DesERTED a Jonas Brother horror story ch.17

[beccalouisem]

that was rather amazing



[NickJonas4Ever121]

awesomeness!!!

[XBieberFeverX815]

tht ended so abruptly! i wntd to kno more about esme and elisa!

[dangersgirl89]

I've got chills.

[Mrsclic]

this story has a really good moral and so did the sequel to this one and the sequel to the sequel to this one.

i

[pokemonwarrior10134]

you know this kinds reminds me of an Episode of Avater the Last Airbender cause Anga and Kutiara kissed and it made light

[LoveJonass1]

Love the story :)

[solarsonic928]

5 Stars!!!This was an awesome story!!!

[TheTwilightTwins232]

I'm in shock.

[DanceRocks001]

WHOOAA! Oh my goodness! I love the ending!!!!!! :O :D

[filipgurl]

AMAZING! Wow

[soccerchick803]

i read that last line and i got chills!!

[Roseyp26]

okay i am going to warn all my friends to not read this at night but to definitly read it i loved it!!

[sweetlollypop1996]

wooww errr woooww

thts all i can say

tht is truly amazing

woow

[kamirules123]

I am scared to......uh,,.....DEATH RIGHT NOW!!! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!

[beautynbell]

That was amazing. Totally freaky, but amazing!

[ZashleyandTroypay3]

That was amazing! Fantantic! Outstanding!

[AussieGirl411]

you are the best writer!!! This was absolutely amazing!! I can't wait to read the sequal!!!!!!!

[katiexoxokitten]

:') i love it so much im crying i do this when i make up sad songs but its sos happy(sniff)

[littlemissattitude10]

Through this journey of creepiness... i never gave up... and i made it to the end!!! Lol, jk!!!

[OJDpatient3]

that was so amazig! okay, im gonna stop tryping now and read the first chapters of departed...lol.

[pinkpearl13]

i loved it!!! yayayayaya haha

[InlovewithaJonas624]

wait so r they dead???

[alleygirl102396]

no they all survived

[InlovewithaJonas624]

okay good lol

i was jw

[bamlvr01]

omg i had to read it over i never ead the end i luv it omg wow this would make an awesome horror movie imglad ur restarting this again

[avy96heeba]

wheres kevin girl did he find her

[alleygirl102396]

yes he did

[x0meangirlx3]

creepy but stilll soooooooo hot lol

[KevNickJoeJonasLuvv]

god that is so... i can't describe it. but it sure has me in tears! it has such a happy mood!!!

[ELmoRoX20]

wait! did esme die???

[funkyearings7]

she was already dead...

they were seeing her ghost and elisa's ghost too.

[cassyday18]

why isnt this a book?!!!!! its amazing!!!! you need to make a book out of it

[sweetkat1307]

MY GOD!! I just read all 19 chapters and its 1:16 am and the only light is my laptop...and tv...and im scared cause my posters are creeping me out now...

[wowxxurcool135]

aww! i love it, absolutely!!!

[NatureGirl118]

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:D

[FranMH94]

OMG! this was so good!

[imgreeknvme1]

holy crap! tht was like woah! it was like 6am when i read this and i didnt know my dad was awake and he dropped something and i screamed

[roXXstarSS]

Wait? is this it?

[italiachick101]

woow omgee this should be a tv seris i would deffently watch it

[iluvconverse1]

jesus lord! I'm creeped out because really eerie music is playing and my brother isn't awake! The sound of it is coming from all around me and im not shitting you

[JoonasObessedx]

"claps" your an amzing writer ! i love the ending, its so beauitful

[vrvboogie]

i mean wat happened to Esme?

[vrvboogie]

wow wow wow wow wow!!!!!! write more, write more, write more! please!? i need to know wat happens!

[Cathlyn90960]

holy!!! wow..oh wow..um..wow..damn..didn't expect that ending!! wow..oh wow..**looks 4 new words in dictionary** ok got one..

WOW..no w8..wow..w8 here it's..wow..gah!! WOW!!!

[JBluvsMEnotYOU]

holy crap i didnt see that coming damn

[FutureMrsJoeJonas11]

omi jonas!!!!!!

damn that was soooo good!

you should make more stories like that!

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!

:)

[dancedance394]

wow. that was... wow. that was so amazing i cant think of anything to say!!!!!

[HannahsFannahs]

OMFG! that was amazing!! wow.. and congratulations! that was the first fanfic/horror story that has given me chills for YEARS! i watch too many that they rarely scare/give me chills anymore.. and that 1 did.. so congratulations!

[torrie950]

this was soo good

you shouldve wrote more to it

it was deff. awesome

[thefrayfan15]

OMJ, this was one of the greatest storys i've ever read!!! I'm sad it's over! But you're an awesome writer!

[zipper921z2]

loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[AppreciateJB]

WOW... An amazing story! I was shaking, and freakin' out, great story!

[DJDangerJonasLuver]

That was awesome!!!!!!!!!! make another horror story

[emilyXlovesXjonasXD]

OH MY FREAKING GOD! THAT WAS AUHMAZINGGG! :):):):):) AHH! I LOVED THAT! ;) hhe! you should make a movie!!! :)

~emily

[depplove23]

This is the first story I read on youtube and you got me hooked! I love all your stories and I think you should write another horror story because you are extremely good at it. Keep on rockin' and writin'.

[lanasawh11]

aww that was sweet love always prevails

Personally i think u should make another horror story.

Xoxo,

Annisa

[jobrosfan4]

LOVE it!

[OKJfilms]

I Loved it Make another horror story!

[xoxojonasxoxnick]

THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOO AWSOME!!!

[cassidyxoxo1]

tell me theres an 18!

[JOExJONASxLUVSxME]

this was actually chp. 19 she put it in wrong and it was the last one :(

[Tambasco511]

whoa love totally pones evil! i feel like a hippie rite now, dudes. lol

[jobrosluvr335]

great ending!!! :)

[jonasloverforlife]

THAT WAS AWSOME!!! this story so pones every story out there!!

[iNCREASthePEACE]

that was soo...WICKED!! i loved it!!!

[KeNiJoGirl]

loved it!

[madison50364]

that was so frickin' cool! you should definitely write another scary story! it'd be totally awesome! loved it!

[meg90795]

i lved it ausome ending i think you should write another one like this

[xshootingstar64]

i lovee it!

perfect ending(:

[50675]

LOVED IT!!!