There are some points where there was too much dissonance during the second phrase of the song. Mostly dealing with the clashing between the chords and melody. The melody is good, however, the chords feel as if they may be a little off during the second phrasings.
@Siberianhusky89 Yes, the chords on the seconds phrases are not exactly the same as the original (a little more dissonant). This is partly due to me writing this by ear and not using any references other than the song itself. Although this is an arrangement, which gives me a bit of artistic leeway, In this case I think it would have sounded better If I had kept the normal chords. Thank you for the comment; I hadn't really noticed the chords were not right until you mentioned it.
@SELG88 Not godlike... I'm still learning and improving my ability to write/arrange. In particular I'm starting to feel like 1:20 onward might be a little too angry to fit Mallow's situation in the game... something I was trying to avoid. But I still love the way it all sounds so I probably won't change it now. And thank you for listening, enjoying, and commenting!
There are some points where there was too much dissonance during the second phrase of the song. Mostly dealing with the clashing between the chords and melody. The melody is good, however, the chords feel as if they may be a little off during the second phrasings.
Siberianhusky89 2 months ago
@Siberianhusky89 Yes, the chords on the seconds phrases are not exactly the same as the original (a little more dissonant). This is partly due to me writing this by ear and not using any references other than the song itself. Although this is an arrangement, which gives me a bit of artistic leeway, In this case I think it would have sounded better If I had kept the normal chords. Thank you for the comment; I hadn't really noticed the chords were not right until you mentioned it.
meganinja456 1 month ago
too good. godlike O.o
SELG88 6 months ago
@SELG88 Not godlike... I'm still learning and improving my ability to write/arrange. In particular I'm starting to feel like 1:20 onward might be a little too angry to fit Mallow's situation in the game... something I was trying to avoid. But I still love the way it all sounds so I probably won't change it now. And thank you for listening, enjoying, and commenting!
meganinja456 6 months ago