I loved this, the song was very beautiful, great choice.
RainOfFire4 2 years ago
Not bad at all. I agree though, work on your transitions a little more. I see more of a plot in this one! It's much better!
Mohama 2 years ago
i like the song.
work on your transitions. (:
roobear214 2 years ago
thanks
fencer27 2 years ago
Great~ <3 Loved it :OOO
Shippou1111 2 years ago
I loved this, the song was very beautiful, great choice.
RainOfFire4 2 years ago
Not bad at all. I agree though, work on your transitions a little more. I see more of a plot in this one! It's much better!
Mohama 2 years ago
i like the song.
work on your transitions. (:
roobear214 2 years ago
thanks
fencer27 2 years ago
Great~ <3 Loved it :OOO
Shippou1111 2 years ago