As a constructive criticism, it sounded a little like it was the first time you had read the material, or were even improvising it, resulting in many pauses and unsure moments in the dialogue. With a little more time spent polishing your delivery you could really be onto something good.
thanks, that means quite a bit and it's helpful. it was the first time i'd recorded dialogue (pre-written, no improv) and i only did a couple brief read-throughs before recording. and even in the parts where i fucked up i did another take of in the file and took care of it in post.
Good content. Poor execution.
d3vpsaux 3 years ago
Sketch,I think you hit the nail on the head. XD.
davidcattoor 3 years ago
this is pretty good.i like the content and sarcasm.keep it up and ..maybe you can improve it a little bit.
maggot197666 4 years ago
I really did enjoy the content.
As a constructive criticism, it sounded a little like it was the first time you had read the material, or were even improvising it, resulting in many pauses and unsure moments in the dialogue. With a little more time spent polishing your delivery you could really be onto something good.
I look forward to seeing more videos!
verbaluk1 4 years ago
thanks, that means quite a bit and it's helpful. it was the first time i'd recorded dialogue (pre-written, no improv) and i only did a couple brief read-throughs before recording. and even in the parts where i fucked up i did another take of in the file and took care of it in post.
Kenkai6655 4 years ago
I want to do one of these too! Funny. Just like Henry does.
audijeep 4 years ago 2