MJ Fantasy: " The Man Next Door " Part 26

[Mercyjackson14]

Can you please put part 27 and 28 on mobile Im really interested in finding out what happens between Mickey and Ana.:D

[ChrissyLovesYou221]

YES YES YES!!!!! KAREN IS ENCOURAGING ANA TO GO BACK TO MICHAEL!!!!! ANA GO GO GO BACK TO MICHAEL PLZ PLZ PLZ!!!!!!!!!!! LOL love the story bro :D

[MJFan4ever11]

Omg I looove this fantasy!! It's so romantic and sweet :)

[WifeofJackson]

Man whaaaat! I was expecting that. Omg, I can't believe she left the baby :(

[xuSmileyface]

It's been like 3 weeks... Are you still alive??? What has that job got you doing?! O.o

[OldSchoolSweetheart]

@xuSmileyface girl I am trying =( I am up from 4 am every day plus I got a child to care for please be patient with me.

[MsChemicalEngineer]

Eldest daughter I've read this so many times, and I have even gone back to rereading So Complicated, Abused Heart and Lie to Me. You're killing me and forcing me to beg, so here goes: Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaase put the next part out, you're driving me crazy!!! Hug yourself then go and create...I don't want to wait no more!!!

[OldSchoolSweetheart]

@MsChemicalEngineer i know mommy I am so sorry... i have been so busy with work =( I'm trying here... I told you all I wasn't gonna be able to post as fluently as I was.

[MsChemicalEngineer]

@OldSchoolSweetheart I know I was having a bad night.sorry!! I hope work is going well for you...I remember working when my kids were little, it was a bitch!!! I still had to beg because I know you laughed when you saw it!!! Hug my grandbaby for me, and take care of yourself...you still need some time to yourself don't forget to take care of you!!!

[MsChemicalEngineer]

@OldSchoolSweetheart I reread this and realized that you are a very talented writer, and an excellent mother. It takes a special woman to be a mommy, who is willing to put her child's needs first. A mommy wants what's best for her child...no matter how old they are...my mother used to sit up nights waiting for me to come home from my dates when I was in college, then would run to bed so I didn't know about it. I adored my mother, and I know my grandbaby is gonna feel the same way about you.

[MsChemicalEngineer]

@OldSchoolSweetheart I just wanted to remnd you of these things, because I know you are working so you can give your daughter the very best. You're a great write and you hear that all the time and it's true, but as a mom, there isn't one better and I thought someone should say it. I adored my mother; she is how I gauge whether a person is a good mom or not...she was a tough act to follow....she would have loved you and of course the great grandbaby!!!!

[SwagLikeParisJay]

Where the heck is part 27?!?!PLZ HURRY!!!

Ahhh! I'm going crazy over here! :)

Love thisss! <333

[DaizyfreeAG]

Come on! I've been waiting ever so patiently, with out asking, but THIS IS RIDICULOUS!

I wanna cry. COME ON! I NEED THE NEXT PART!

[virgomoonbeam]

Omg Nadine just left the baby,how could she do that?,i'd love to know what she wrote in the letter.I hope caring for Michael's son will bring him and Ana closer together instead of pushing them apart.Wonderful part Johanna x x

[candace23800]

oh please the next part

[msdogooder]

What a beautiful change of events. My Gosh if Ana isn't the perfect woman for Michael. When he gets emotional and upset she is able to calm him. I love that. This might not be the "typical" family but it can be an equally amazing family none the less. I true blessing from God! I loved the way Ana took care of the baby, she was so kind and tender with him. I love every single thing about this video. Karen was so great with Ana, Ana was great with Michael and the baby!! Incredible!

[xxxangel777]

omg.....this was ....just amazing, incredible, simply perfect!!!!! oh my gosh...this bitch really abandoned her baby! how can anyone do this??? .... i´m lost for words!

but i´m sure michael will be the best daddy, and he´ll love it!!!!

really amazing story .... i didn´t see this coming! love it sooo much

[mjismyhubby]

I NEED THE NEXT PART NOW GIRL this was amazing and very well written

[makenart]

GREAT follow up! Please continue this story. I'am so hooked that I can't wait for the next part. Please hurry

[Iceprincess2031]

Can't wait to see what happens!!!

[MsFallagain]

Lol.... I had to refer back to chapter 19 to get the baby's name. DARREN, his name is Darren. Nadine's actions just prove that she was never fit to be a mother. Welcome to fatherhood Michael. I hope Ana continues to help with Darren, because he deserves to be LOVED!

[MJfanMega]

OMG! Gurrl, you are soo amazing!

I seriously don't know wjat to say anymoree!

Gawwd!EPIC! EPIC! EPIC!

I'm soo waiting for the next part!

Hope it'll be up soon, though!Girl you got me addicted!!!!!!!! Ahhhh *o*

I hope ur doing fine too girl, you seem so stressed.. r u OK? :D

LYSMMM <3333333333

[MJMBRallmyboos]

NEXT PART,

Dear heart.

I need it,

Cause I'm pleased with it.

I'll sit here and wait,

But I don't know how much more I can take! XD ^_^

[XxPassionForMikeyxX]

Awwww Johanna this part was amazing!!!! I felt so bad for Michael, how could that horrible bitch of a mother do somethin like that?!?! Ugghh Ana would make such a good mum :) I really NEED the next part hun!!! <3 x

[23LiberianGirl]

Can't wait for next part!

[TullerJackson]

OH GOOOOD!!!!!!!

[xuSmileyface]

Oh SHIZNIT Nadine's a BIZNITCH!!!!!! I love this so much!!! But GOD DAMMIT girl stop cutting it off at the really good parts. You really got stop that. It just makes me loose control. I get all twitchy and stuff... I talk fast, my hair starts falling out. My fingers don't stop moving. My legs shake. YOUR MAKING ME MENTALLY CRAZY!!!!! O.o

[PAIDIA1]

BELIEVE ME... im not going to miss the next part....and girl you are perfect...

[cutup4488]

Perfection ....once again! Johanna, you never disappoint! I hope you new job is going well! Hugs! L.O.V.E! xxSara

[OldSchoolSweetheart]

@cutup4488 hey girl it's going well.. keeping me busy. I need to catch up on your amazing story <3

[jkool20]

Oh my gosh!!!!!!!!!! This is intense!

[MyDude1995]

next part please

[MJJ8003]

next part next part ! :DDDDDDDDDDD ! ASAP

[kelbellmjslover]

You had me in tears and I need to dee the next part Jo like for real this is too much

[NunuxoxoAngel]

ahhhh! girl! PLEASE GIMME THE NEXT PART TONIGHT!

IM DYING TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!! JOHANNA! YOU'RE KILLING

ME LOVE!

[1mjjloverforever38]

Who the hell does things like that?

[MsChemicalEngineer]

SNAP yourself Miss Thing!!! You know about how much I hate cliffhangars and yet you persist!!! This was so great, it's time for Mchael and Ana to get back together!!!! I missed you this week, how's the new job and how is my grandbaby?

[TheMiissCB]

Omg Nadine is such a bad mother !!!!!

[candace23800]

the baby is better off without nadine.but right now anna seem like the only one that cares about him[the baby] and she just met him. i hope she can help michael get feelings for him.

[mjswife100]

OMG....ana is gonna give michael another chance just know it...

[MJluv4allTIME]

Nadine is such a jerk!!!! Next part soon I LOVE this :D

[mjgoonmusic]

wonderful chapter like always, I loved it!

I´m happy Ana is thinking of giving MJ another chance, oh it didn´t surprise me much, Nadine abandon her baby and left him with MICHAEL!

But I´m glad Ana found the baby and took care of him and that was really sweet and made me smile the way she was with the little baby and she starts to really like him. wonderful. Now I think MICHAEL needs Ana more then ever!

Hope they will be together soon, for sure I´m not going to miss next part! Can´t wait!

[MONIELUVSMJ]

this was sooo good....i can't wait to see what happens girl! ((:

[KraziiGcmGirl]

Dann girl.this was very intense! I loved it..i hope this baby will bring them closer.i cant wait til.next part hurry please

[MsCavalia]

Nadine is such a deadbeat mother, abandoning her baby and leaving Michael to take care of him, at least Ana is there to help him

[smileycurtis]

Oh my damn this is good can't wait til the next part :)!

[bigmjfan1]

I love it i love it i love it cant wait for the next part!!

[iEsHaNjAyDeN09]

love this hun, you're an amazing writer! :)



[DaizyfreeAG]

Damn.

Thats cold...

AW, COME ON, MAN!

NOW WE GOTTA WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART! DAMN!

[Thegirlisdanger0us]

Omgomgomg I need the next part<3

[ThePYT1991]

That's pretty selfish of Nadine but as long as she's out of the way that's a big relief for Michael and Ana.

[SuperBasketball4eva]

OMG I can't believe that Nadine just abandon her own child!! That ticks me off!!! And poor Michael can never get a break!! I love it can't wait for the next part!!

[inventinglondon]

next next next I'm filled with joy by reading that she's gonna stay with him !

[MichaelJacksonsLove2]

Aww, poor baby! How could she just leave him like that?? And poor Mike just doesn't get a break, lol

I know I say this like every time, but this story is so amazing! I love how I can feel Michael's frustration and Ana's apprehension, it's just all so real! You really are an amazing writer, Johanna! :)

[alsvalia]

Oh, snap! I surely don't want to miss the next part! I have a feeling that this baby will in fact bring Ana and Michael closer together than before...