Nice try. You've got the notes pretty much right but you're quite rigid with your strumming and sometimes out of time. Try and relax your right hand more, get into the groove of it. I can't see your right hand but I sense you may not be doing enough up strokes and muting between strums to give it a good sound. Also, for the bridge you need to work on your chord transitions (power chords sound better here) and slow your licks right down and get them accurate. Sorry to be critical.
keep rocking
508stevef 1 year ago
I think you're doing a great job! It's nice to hear the classics.
JohnSherack 2 years ago
nice guitar man
Ryuukishi1994 2 years ago
les paul?
aerosmith4ever1 2 years ago
@aerosmith4ever1 of course
jetsedaam 1 year ago
solid cover
funwap5 2 years ago
needs more distortion - this was the song that pioneered the term "heavy metal" AND IT AINT MEANT TO BE PLAYED CLEAN.
mallamoozoo 2 years ago
Nice try. You've got the notes pretty much right but you're quite rigid with your strumming and sometimes out of time. Try and relax your right hand more, get into the groove of it. I can't see your right hand but I sense you may not be doing enough up strokes and muting between strums to give it a good sound. Also, for the bridge you need to work on your chord transitions (power chords sound better here) and slow your licks right down and get them accurate. Sorry to be critical.
banapaulo 3 years ago
Shut the fuck up, dude. It's rock, not a piano concert.
miriyaa 2 years ago