Attempt finish of _ABANDONED_ Ravenpaw & Tigerclaw WOTF AMV - The Business of Paper Stars

[RnningWlfPrdctions]

You know even though you simply repeated the footage over again i think it still turned out amazing!! ;D

[rekamonster]

i think AlliKatNya is a boy!!!lol

[rednackadrian]

i like how darkstripe looks

[Queenoonoo]

I am Tigerstar. My friends who know my secrets, stand by me not by choice, but of fear.

[Owlfeatherx]

@Queenoonoo If you're serious then you don't really have any TRUE friends, you know? .-.

[Queenoonoo]

@Owlfeatherx Yes, I do. Not ALL my friends know my secrets.

[funnykittenz1]

Not really finished, just repeating parts of the original animation :\

[angelthecyotoe]

Subbed cuz of this, quite awesome

[SuperHi12345678910]

1:14 i saw a tigerstar face flash like in the start of her last animation pet!!!!!!!!!! =DDDDDDDDDD who else saw it?

[flippybear556]

lol i like how raventail said redtail is dead it was kinda funny to me

[GreenPebble1]

I don't think this is very good because it's not original. You just kept repeating all of the animation pre-done. You should have just made the rest yourself, instead of making look like it's constantly repeated. Just my opinion, but good job on it. c:

[SuperHi12345678910]

0:48 they look so happy. =DDDDDD

[SuperHi12345678910]

1:16 who's those kitties?

[11friendscp]

@SuperHi12345678910 The one in the left is Longtail, the one in the right is Darkstripe, and the one running is Ravenpaw

[SuperHi12345678910]

@11friendscp thanky thanx.

[11friendscp]

@SuperHi12345678910 no problem ;D

[SkyStormFire]

3:03-3:10 gave me goosebumps

[XsummerpupX]

This gave me chills :3

[leilani2468]

HAMSTERS

[ravenandshegofan1234]

:icongunitdown: lol deviantart command :3

[feeeeetslaaaaave]

now i have lived

[dawnshadow16]

its not tigerclaws fault hes evil, blame thistleclaw, he taught tigerpaw that it was good to be blood thirsty. so if its anyone to blame for tigerclaws actions, its thistleclaws fault

[Alanna1230646]

i didnt really like but i was good!

[rabidepicgoose]

@Alanna1230646 dat make no sense

[Lauren007E]

his voice is too confited &hes supost to have green eyes but it s fucking kool

[Tygress99]

omg..This is great!!

[eeveeisawesome]

I love all of your Warriors AMVs!! =D

[20firebird]

ravenpaw looks so goddamned CUTE!!!!!!!!!

[bellacullenisme]

EPICNESS!!!!! XD

[MewLovesLucario13]

thank u so freakin much!!!! i am so happy!!!! u completed my secret longing!!!! X3

[jengawolf]

raven paw has a deep voice!? 1:40 dang he says redtail is dead!!!!

[Gravitythewolf]

what song



[aliar789]

poor ravenpaw hes scared to death of tigerclaw,if tigerclaw didn't kill redtail and lie saying tht ravenpaw is a traitor ravenpaw will still be with thunder clan not with barley

[WarriorcatsShadowfur]

@aliar789 Like Bluestar said, Ravenpaw was better off a barn cat. If he wanted to go with the Clans, he could of gone with them on the Great Journey or just gone back to his Clan after the BloodClan battle.

[MollyStarmender]

>:O I love it! I was very upset when she didn't finish it, could you try to finish Brambleclaw and Hawkfrost amv? Since Brambleclaw is my FAVE FAVE FAVE Warriors Cat EVER, that would make my day, I just LOVE her animations, but I ahte how she never finished it D;

[judy991]

@MollyStarmender i could try but i will def have to ask first =3

[4551ore]

bravo!bravo!well done!

[pokemonchampion493]

@MollyStarmender Damnit! Brambleclaw is the best!!!!!!!

Whos your least favorite >:3

[MollyStarmender]

@pokemonchampion493 Tigerclaw -.- He's a butt. xD

[pokemonchampion493]

@MollyStarmender :O Tigerclaw is my least favorite too, and I hate Ashfur, and Rainflower and Thistleclaw

[KimberTheKitKat]

@pokemonchampion493 omg yes. i hate rainflower. e.e

[pokemonchampion493]

@KimberTheKitKat She was VERY mean to Crookedjaw (one of my faves)

"Its not my promblem why shoul i deal with it?!"- Rainflower That, made me pissed, so Shellheart was an awesome dad :3

[KimberTheKitKat]

@pokemonchampion493 yup. thats why i do. she just...never appreciates him over something so stupid. >:U

[ravenandshegofan1234]

@pokemonchampion493

I know! Rainflower is a total BITCH.

On the other hand, Shellheart, be my daddeh :3

[Hawktalon18]

@ravenandshegofan1234 no duh rainflower sucks XD

[Kittywolfspirit]

@MollyStarmender It's been done...and amazingly, might I add.

[StarTheWolfPuppy]

@MollyStarmender omg finally somebody else who adores brambleclaw as much as me!i think u and i will get along well!

[LuverWolf]

great job! Although i think you shouldn't have repeated so much at the end. It got sorta annoying... but great job. ;D

[IceheartOfThunder]

Wow, very impressive way of trying to finish this. Im sure that she'd be very please if she found this that somehow it was finished. Nice work

[Frostfurrocks]

Impressive, actually. I have to admit that I didn't expect much, but this was actually a pretty good ending to a spectacular AMV. The crowd picture near the end was getting a bit repetitive, maybe next time you could take different snapshots of the photo, or pan it different ways? Just a suggestion, and well done!

[silvermoon617]

XD at 3:07 you can hear Ravenpaw sayin Redtails dead really slowly XDDD

[lushstar68]

if i was any good at anima but i am not i probly would have put all of what happend to him like caching the snake and being hated by all of the clan when tigerclaw told lies and him ending up going to the farm to get away from tigerclaw

just an idey but i cant make anima yet DX

[striper453]

this is amazing!

[tibertruth]

i really hope ravenpaw is mentioned in the series again he was my fav char <3

[StarTheWolfPuppy]

11 people dont like Ravenpaw

[himynameisblood123]

hey, could you try and finish her other amv of brambleclaw and hawkfrost?

[ToontownLavender]

its cool but i wish you would've drawn the rest yourself instead of repeating clips. 

[dogs2231]

<3 great job!

[Brakenpelt]

i liked it! nice work :3

[tigerfang2017]

nice!

[warriorsdovewing01]

what song is this? nevermind

[warriorsdovewing01]

what song is this?

[webkinzgirl921999]

Press 0 the replay encase u broke the replay button ^^

[aliar789]

9 people dont care how ravenpaw feel and how tigerclaw is going to try to kill him

[noahab12]

very nice

[kittycatlovers03]

love it! :3

[CreamyKittin]

you did very well ;)

[chelseaghostblood]

nice idea of trying ur best to finish this vid

[amy141199]

This is a bit off topic, but Tigerclaw kind of reminds of Severus Snape from Harry Potter. >=)

[MrScruffman]

GREAT LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[jadedaysisme]

I think Ravenpaw should at least be able to come home now that Tigerclaw (Refuses to call him tigerstar) is dead. And get is well disereved warrior name.... you know...

[stripeheart142]

@jadedaysisme right

[Jayfeather2000]

@jadedaysisme Hes happy with his best friend Barley and having lots of mice from the barn hes a barn cat now

[TheAmbereyedwolf]

ravenpaw has green eyes

[aemg01]

@TheAmbereyedwolf um, tell that to AllyKatNya ....

[Jayfeather2000]

@TheAmbereyedwolf actually he does have Amber eyes

[halostar2000]

@Jayfeather2000 actially they are yellow

[toontownlover1112]

good job! :] i just wish Ravenpaw didnt have to leave thunder clan cause of tigerstripe he was my fave cat :'[

[Darkdragon659]

@toontownlover1112 I think you mean Tigerclaw.

[toontownlover1112]

@Darkdragon659 oops ya i mean Tigerclaw..... idk how i thought his name was Tigerstripe i guess i was thinking of Darkstripe or someone.... o.O

[Darkdragon659]

@toontownlover1112 Lol yeah. Tigerstripe, the impossible son of two of the most traitorous cats in Thunderclan. Joke

[stripeheart142]

@toontownlover1112 whos tigerstripe?

[MrVadersMom]

@toontownlover1112 I thing you mean tigertclaw!LOL XD

[Clawstalker]

u know i think if raven paw had a different mentor, he wouldve stayed and became a warrior.

[youngsoldeir918]

I'm guessing Tigerclaw made eight accounts and disliked this video eight times.

I personally liked it!

[tsaspsja]

@youngsoldeir918 uhh correction, now it is 17 dislikes.

[XxJessieKittehxX]

@youngsoldeir918 Then Ravenpaw counteracted him by liking this comment 8 times. When Tigerclaw saw this he got Darkstripe to make an additional 9 accounts and disliked the video again. :(

[lochadkat]

Awsome i always wanted to see how it ended poor raven paw... trapped by cats who hate him :(

[kittykitty6677]

@lochadkat when he did nothing wrong, too.

[KaalaSmallteeth]

Lol it was good, but the only thing is is that I don't think she would have used the same clips she used before. I might have actually threw in some other pictures/clips from other amvs or things. Just a suggestion if you decide to do another one of these ^^ but yeah, i liked it

[judy991]

@KaalaSmallteeth thats actually a good idea, thanks :D

[KaalaSmallteeth]

@judy991 welcome ^-^

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[FireStarDoink]

The scenes you need to repeat to make longer, just use the slow down half effect to slow down the zooms

[chrylbltn]

I love Ravenpaw, he's a sweetie. -^^-

[Xena111Vit111]

7+ people should be tied up and thrown infront of trafic!

[GoldenChocoboLover]

^.^ LOVED IT :)

[silvermoon617]

7 people are stupid at the moment XP

[Lakesong315]

um alikatnyas a boy

[Lakesong315]

@Lakesong315 but really good anyways it doesnt matter

[reeniebear99]

WARNING SPOILER: i feel bad for ravenpaw, but at least hes happy living with barley in the twoleg barn!



[XmixXwingX]

Nicely done! *gives thumbs up*

[kitzurday95]

...arent ravenpaws eyes green?

[bastumbo]

@kitzurday95 i think they were green but i might be rong havent heard of ravenpaw for a wile in the books

[Starielle8825328]

@kitzurday95 his eyes are actually amber i saw it in the book

[catsasuke1212]

@spazzydragonfilms o3o lols, I heard him say all of it "Redtail is dead!"

[bookwormmaddy]

You must have tried hard, and it is quite good... but I'm sorry, I don't think it's that great :/

[chimbleysweep22]

Great job with this!

[WarriorLegoGerbils]

You know what. If Alikatnya did finish it it would probaly look exactly like this :D Good job of the rest. And when he says Redtail again it's a bit slower and quieter which is why you may have not noticed it at first

[Midnightfaithful]

Nice attempt

[Jerome7lover1998xn]

you are so good at making videos!!!(sorry i dont can speak goog english i learn it at scoool...over 3years...)

[trunko1234]

ok i luv the video but i wish you could of had more detail from the whole book like when Ravenpaw had to leave or him telling Firepaw (AKA firestar) why hes like scared of Tigerclaw (AKA Tigerstar)

[armyblackwolf1]

when i said your need to finish it i meant with different motions not the same over and over again i am not saying its not good it is but i thought it would be better with different motions after the part he stoped.

[Rosethepichu5]

im glad someone finished it! +V+ it was a good video!

[MegaSwiftwaters]

Nice music. it was meant to go with this vid in a way.

[CreamyKittin]

You did a great job, that is wickedly awesome

=)

[SkyThePureWhiteWolf]

i hate th part at the start and when tigerclaw smiles at ravenpaw >.< it gives me spine chills

[620emilymartin]

Wonderful job! 10/10

[Quaversish]

1:30 Their heads XD. Great AMV, though. I love this song (:

[ShadowStartheleader]

attempted? You just re-do the whole thing two and a half times.... sry... nice try though.

8/20 stars.

[Mosby67]

Poor Ravenpaw i wished he stayed in thunderclan i wanted to see his warrior name

[xPinkIcex1121]

I swear to god that if Tigerclaw was real and I was a warrior cat, I'd kill him without question. e.e

[eeveelutions100]

@xPinkIcex1121 try and see what happenes scourge would kill you to get to Tigerstar he'd be like 'Get out of my way foxdung Tigerstar's MINE!' lol

[xPinkIcex1121]

@eeveelutions100 ROFL yeah, probably. XP

[eeveelutions100]

@xPinkIcex1121 yeah thats just what I thought

[katie199710]

AWSOME!!!!!

[spazzydragonfilms]

In the middle of the video you can hear ravenpaw say "Redtail" again. xD;

[judy991]

@spazzydragonfilms i didnt realie that ^^

[spazzydragonfilms]

@judy991 It's kinda shakey, though. o;

[maensilverrmonsters]

@judy991 i like it you are good :D i cant edit worth a crap

[PurplePythonStudios]

@spazzydragonfilms  I HEARD IT! :D

[PurplePythonStudios]

@spazzydragonfilms  I HEARD IT! :D but its all slow like RRRREEEEDDDDTTTTAAAAIIIILLLLL

[chocolatewhisker]

@spazzydragonfilms I also heard, "is dead" after it, but its kinda hard to hear

[Swiftflower]

@spazzydragonfilms yeah lol!! he said it super slow, like, "Reeeedtaaaiiil!!!"

[spazzydragonfilms]

Epic.

[CpRookieROX]

C'MON U EDITED THE REST! GIVE YOURSELF SOME CREDIT MAN!

[judy991]

@CpRookieROX aw thank you :)

[CpRookieROX]

@judy991 NP!!! ;)

[cor955]

@judy991 great job if there were still stars and not likes id give you 1000000000000000000000000000/5 i love warriors and this song allis music vids so good job

[judy991]

hey guys if you like this video then search up Allikatnya for more ;) xx

[DarkusDios3]

dude, how do you get the video owned by someone else and edit it with such good quality?

[judy991]

@DarkusDios3 I used movie maker and mediaconverter . org but I recon allikat could do waayy better than I did ;)

[DarkScarWolf]

@DarkusDios3 I know this is a late reply, lmao, but zamzar.com downloads the video well also.

[DarkusDios3]

@DarkScarWolf lol thanks

[Nerfnut64]

good job!

[KukiAndWallyForever3]

How can you copy the video to your movie maker??

[judy991]

@KukiAndWallyForever3 i use this site called mediaconverter. org it is a free site that will download mp3 wmv eg

[ILuvPadfoot]

I like it

My one sucks I don't even know how u do this!!

[Firepaw997]

I always pictured 2:42 as a slow-mo run cycle that would go to the beat of the song, but I like what you did :3

You did a pretty good job with it, even though there was such little footage available to make the edit. :)

[judy991]

@Firepaw997 ah yes i get what you mean lol but i still think Allikatnya could do better than i done ;)

[gingamaster134]

@Firepaw997 this is allikatnyas

[Firepaw997]

@gingamaster134 I know that. What made you point it out?

[gingamaster134]

@Firepaw997 i thought u didnt know.sorry

[Deathovercapture]

pretty good...

[jazzman8371]

this is good

[judy991]

@jazzman8371 thanks :)