@oniec0wns yeah, he might be asking for critisism, but i think he wants it in a more posivitve way? not like "the intro is fucking long" im bored and stuff... try more like "the intro is a bit long, you might want to cut it down a bit"?
intro is to fucking long, I'm bored before the song starts.. and try a bass drop insteand of just hi-hat tap.. and a little more variation , its the same beat over and over and over and over and over...
Drit bra Patrick !!
TheShaDex1337 3 weeks ago
AWESOME !!!
TheShaDex1337 3 weeks ago
du er flink. :P <3
Mazuen 2 months ago in playlist Liked videos
cool story bro...
Omnitica 2 months ago 5
Sweet Synth & Chords, Patrick! :-D
DJDanivanOfficial 2 months ago
next avicii?
xSunde 2 months ago in playlist Liked videos
Du har laget fin sang.
AznNorwegian 2 months ago
@AznNorwegian Ok.
UltimateZparkz 2 months ago
Herlig<3
Majocheify 2 months ago
Drit bra :D
TheGProdz 2 months ago
Patrick, faen så sick, lag fler, så blir du kjent!!
LitoAmini 3 months ago 2
Patkey! Den er gæærn!! Du har maaad skills man!
rimi89 3 months ago 3
sykt nice :D
97Torvald 3 months ago 2
l0l wtf? im coming with feedback, as he suggests us to do
its called help him out, but whatever, guess u kids don't want a helping hand
newfags theese days
oniec0wns 3 months ago
@oniec0wns yeah, he might be asking for critisism, but i think he wants it in a more posivitve way? not like "the intro is fucking long" im bored and stuff... try more like "the intro is a bit long, you might want to cut it down a bit"?
Goggenhoim 2 months ago
@Goggenhoim It's not negative, its critisism
im just saying things he should know and that would get him more views
oniec0wns 2 months ago
@oniec0wns that might be true.. but you should still try to be more positive
Goggenhoim 2 months ago
Sick! Dette kunne vært en Avicii-sang hvis jeg ikke hadde vist at den var din! :)
Download link? ^^
Zechez95 3 months ago
@Zechez95 Takk aaa! :))))) Download link ligger på Facebook-profilen min, hvis du bare blar et stykke ned <3
UltimateZparkz 3 months ago
Herlig Patrick ! Gleder meg til fremtidige låter :D - Sander <3
jubelproductions 3 months ago
@jubelproductions Takk JubelProductions! <3
UltimateZparkz 3 months ago
holy shit ! first time ? great song ! :)
twintipfreddern 3 months ago
@twintipfreddern Yes, first time! Thanks <3
UltimateZparkz 3 months ago
intro is to fucking long, I'm bored before the song starts.. and try a bass drop insteand of just hi-hat tap.. and a little more variation , its the same beat over and over and over and over and over...
but for a first time, pretty average
oniec0wns 3 months ago
@oniec0wns make something better then...
Goggenhoim 3 months ago 7
@oniec0wns Comes from a guy who only has Runescape gameplayes? ;) I think you should a better song than this in 2 days :) Good luck!
UltimateZparkz 3 months ago 2
@UltimateZparkz it's true, the intro is a little long. But once you hit 0:48 it goes bam
anthonylamc 3 months ago
@anthonylamc BAM! :D
UltimateZparkz 3 months ago