Nice short movie, although the narrative was not too interesting. I think rather than than symbolism or too much atmosphere you could do more engaging character portrayals.
Thanks for the detailed response. It's hard to find quality feedback. I'm reediting this video right now for festivals and I'm glad to have more feedback to consider for the reedit.
Very very cool. I dug it.
Outthehouse 3 years ago
Nice short movie, although the narrative was not too interesting. I think rather than than symbolism or too much atmosphere you could do more engaging character portrayals.
Very nice though!
Halboy10 4 years ago
great video. everything was pull focused correctly, smooth pans, tilts, dollys, the light was fine and everything videowise was exerllent
i like the way the colour red is constant throughout the film.
but i think the 'dads' earring spoilt the business look about him.
and his acking wasnt convinceing enough.
soundwise its averge i think some of the music fades are prehaps a little quick. but the whole standerd of the movie is extreemaly professional
harrybutcher 4 years ago
Thanks for the detailed response. It's hard to find quality feedback. I'm reediting this video right now for festivals and I'm glad to have more feedback to consider for the reedit.
taikoone 4 years ago
cheers to this brilliant short flim!
sincerelycaiden 4 years ago 3
too long, repetitive and easy to predict. well executed, though
oimabel 4 years ago
Dominic and Daniel in a video!
littledriel 4 years ago