Added: 2 years ago
From: elleisforlovee
Views: 624
Sort by time | Sort by thread (beta)

Link to this comment:

Share to:

All Comments (28)

Sign In or Sign Up now to post a comment!
  • You'll probably gonna get annoyed at all these comments from me, but oh well! Haha this is one of my favorites. You could just feel their love for one another.

  • @florencie123 Not annoyed by them at all! They're making me happy! I'm glad you're enjoying this for the second time! :]

  • what was she trying to say that she couldn't?

    great chapter btw!! =)

  • Me or Miley?

  • miley.

  • Oh, that she missed Nick, basically. And needed him to be closer to her.

  • okay i am one of the unfortunate ppl who didn't get the thing. :( i won't get the cyber hug ;) haha jk but please can u give us any hints?

  • I'm basically saying that there relationship is so much deeper than sex. And they can have conversations that normal teens would have. Sorry, no way to hint at that :p

  • craziishatt(:

  • I DIDNT GET IT. Is it really easy or hard? lol. I don't get what your saying... or maybe I do .......... I really don't know. :| CONFUSED. :) great chapter though!

  • Okeee, what didn't you get?

  • she's moving? whaaaaaa?

  • Figuratively, not literally.

  • oh okayy ahah

  • hA. Random Fact: the song on the video im begginning to hate cuz ive never heard the entire song and just hearing that bugs me..lol. Wow.

  • It's not letting me respond to this, so let's try onelasttime! Download! Buy! Listen to it somehow! I really recommend the song to any Niley shipper. It fits them perfectly. And! It was written by two people who actually fell in love when they were young and just couldn't shake eachother. And they're both in the band. It just all works. SUCH a beautiful song!

  • If you go on youtube, type in "on the surface still as beautiful" and the first video that (should) pop up will have a rough version of the song. Listen to it and tell me whatcha think :]

  • The song is Beautiful! i see now. ha it was just the chorus.lol. it bugged me that i hadn't heard the entire thing..lol.

  • Right!? I love it. It's definitely up there on my Niley playlist :p

  • I really liked this chapter :]]

    im usually confused towards whats happening but lately ive been understanding a bit more. great writing! your skills are great!

  • i <3 it but sometimes its a bit hard to understand who's saying what.....

  • Hmmm. I write in novel format. Every new line is a new person talking. And usually if it's followed by an action with 'his/her' to show possession. Sorry if it's confusing?

  • you are an amaizing writer!

    i love the way you picture nick and miley together and when miley approched nick with his full name?! ahah amaizing! the next onee

  • amazing xDD have fun at your sissy's wedding !!

  • amazing!! have fun at ur sisters wedding!!

  • WOW I loved it a lot goood luck with the wedding!

  • that was so good:) can't wait for the next one

  • wait..so i am sooooo confused...is this like a present thing..like in the present where it's happening for real and it's no flashback. or is it like they are remembering what happend before. and the good things..cuzz im soo confused sometimes and the other times i love it...idk how but i rlyy like you stories..while being totally confused..haha

  • It's okay. I've said it before, I don't write for everyone to immediately get it. I hate stories like that. Aha. Yes, it's present day. Takes place right after Joe and Nick stopped talking and Nick went to his room. The whole idea was Nick called Miley right when he got to his room because he missed her, even though he JUST saw her like fifteen minutes ago. Does that clear it up? If not, lemme know! Don't be afraid to tell me you're confused! :]

  • another incredible chapter.

    I love your series.

    <3

    ohh and congratulations to your sister!

  • gah i love this series so much

    its the best ive read

    please post more soon

    :)

  • Comment removed

  • amazinggg!!

    can't wait for the next!

    =)

  • dang. i love this. (:

    the end is the best<3

  • nick just go over there!! u know she wants u hahaha love it next one pleasee and i love ur type of writing never doubt it

  • Well thank you :) have fun at ur sisters wedding :)

  • My god you such an amazing writing. Your writing is like breath taking. WOW :)

    that was soo good :) im kind of like in love with this series. haha :)

    thanks for still posting this even though ur super busy with ur sisters wedding!

  • I felt bad! I couldn't leave you guys hanging because I'm not that cool :p

Loading...
Alert icon
0 / 00Unsaved Playlist Return to active list
    1. Your queue is empty. Add videos to your queue using this button:
      or sign in to load a different list.
    Loading...Loading...Saving...
    • Clear all videos from this list
    • Learn more