Dude, I love "Pulp Fiction"! This cartoon is cooler then a frige. I like how the characters move around. What program did you use for the floor? Keep'em cummin', like a slut at a gangbang :)
Hey man! Got your comment I've just been swamped with work so I haven't had time to comment.
It's a good start. My comments are, in your next animation, really concentrate on the poses. Characters should not stand just straight up and down Scooby- Doo style. Their bodies should be curved a little bit so they don't look so stiff.
Also, on the arms, the wrists should drag behind the man arm a little bit. Like when the rest of the arm gets into a post the wrist should follow behind slightly.
Easy Boycie, things are really starting to shape up aren't they? A real easy way to add atmosphere and aggression to this animation would be to knock up a couple of "straight on" shots of the characters faces when they are engaged in important parts of their script.
excellent work mate! you came across a nice clear sample too! :D its adventurous, the characacures dont look very identitcal, i mean you can only tell its samuel jackson because of the voice, but either way, it is animated well, and it actually portrays a similar energy to the real scene! it is great and funy to wqatch! good job mate!
Really cool man. One of my favorite scenes from this movie. I recommend getting this one book called, " All About Techniques in Animation" It focuses a lot on camera angles, and all that stuff.. But anyways it's awesome, although it would look even more fresh with some different camera angles to add like a dramatic effect.
no they are rigged and boned just like a 3d animation program.you draw all the layers in vectors and add bones to bring them to life all the other movements for example the mouth is a switch layer and manually animated within the time line thanks
Right, right, right. But what's the Trojan Horse? I was wondering if you meant that I was going to ask to collaborate with him (as I think I've asked you in the past).
I did offer, of course. And I'm sure HitManimation and I will collaborate in many different ways (probably both ways, him helping me and me helping him), but I just want to make it clear that I don't offer advice for anything in return.
The only requirement for my advice is the willingness to listen (and he listened to my last set of advice and appreciated it, which is why I gave so much more this time). So I only gave advice cuz he wanted it.
So although I got a ton of advice for you, this is your best effort, it's hilarious, and I hope it does well. You're improving at an incredibly fast rate (crazy fast), so keep it up!
Also, what makes this work well is that you have high quality voice acting (you cut corners by using voice from actors in a great movie), so keep that in mind. Find real voice actors.
Make the audio as good as the video. Music and sound effects help, but the voice acting makes it or breaks it.
More advice... I think the guy in the chair looked skittish but not quite as freaked out as he could have. Maybe a little shaking (rather than the rocking motion you used) and eyes that go from small to super wide while he's shaking, kind of like that kid on South Park who drinks coffee. =^)
Also, the ending was a bit too abrupt. The white guy should have still been shaking a little after the dialogue, while Sam leans forward and closes in on a solid stare. =^)
... I also see a little bit of a bounce on his hands as he puts them down. That's awesome! Keep thinking about that.
Advice... so people aren't constantly moving. The next thing I recommend that you work on is trying to make your movements more "deliberate." What that means is that hand movements are great, but the hand jets out there, bounces a bit, sits out there with almost no movement and then later jets back (that's what I mean by "deliberate"-- the movement is motivated).
Praise... I love where you're going with the character designs with this. The eyes are really done well (this increases with each vid you make). Keep that up. You also animated the eyelids very well. You even made Samuel Jackson's farther eye smaller... nice.
You also increased the speed of your movements... this is a HUGE improvement. Plus the timing is great (using movie audio makes it easier to have good timing), I also see a little bit of a bounce on his hands has he puts them down.
Hahahahaha! Wow, this is awesome! If this wasn't a clip with so much language in it, I'd ask to help you promote it. You want to collaborate on something?
this is great. the perspective is confusing but thats a common mistake. i rly like it :)
TheCreator4 1 year ago
this had me in stitches....very nicely done! Subbed :)
richw4 1 year ago
Hey hitanimation. You've done a fantastic job with your character design and animation. Keep it up.
mattpartridge 1 year ago
Dude, I love "Pulp Fiction"! This cartoon is cooler then a frige. I like how the characters move around. What program did you use for the floor? Keep'em cummin', like a slut at a gangbang :)
hgdagr8one 1 year ago
Hey, this is one of my favorite movies! You are so, so cool. Fine stuff! ;)
5*
littlemissumbrella 1 year ago
lawl "did he look like a BITCH?" that was my fav part
DualFlame 2 years ago
Very well done my friend. The mouth movements and the body animations were very smooth.
snakejohnson 2 years ago
very VERY nicely done :)
I like the direction too, when it pans over to the other guy just briefly for the 'what?'
billmacp 2 years ago
Man that is a ton of work. Sam's animation really stands out.
ToonSnaps 2 years ago
Very good - You got Samuel L off to a tee.
The Slagg Brothers
slaggbros 2 years ago
Hey man! Got your comment I've just been swamped with work so I haven't had time to comment.
It's a good start. My comments are, in your next animation, really concentrate on the poses. Characters should not stand just straight up and down Scooby- Doo style. Their bodies should be curved a little bit so they don't look so stiff.
Also, on the arms, the wrists should drag behind the man arm a little bit. Like when the rest of the arm gets into a post the wrist should follow behind slightly.
hiyaanimation 2 years ago
Easy Boycie, things are really starting to shape up aren't they? A real easy way to add atmosphere and aggression to this animation would be to knock up a couple of "straight on" shots of the characters faces when they are engaged in important parts of their script.
plumpnation 2 years ago
Best Animation I've Seen So Far. And This Is the Best Film Ever, My Favourite Scene Too.
All You Need Is the Amendment Piece, With The Path Of Righteousness Speech.
10/10
CocoLadd 2 years ago
HAHAHA..... HAAAA! Funny Stuff. You Got A Talent Kid.
MrHappyFaceFilms 2 years ago
wow your pretty good at this :)
iggy35 2 years ago
thank so much for taking the time to look cheers
hitmanimation 2 years ago
Great job! Like the face expressions.
paulymac 2 years ago
right on dude. very nice
stickytoonz 2 years ago
excellent work mate! you came across a nice clear sample too! :D its adventurous, the characacures dont look very identitcal, i mean you can only tell its samuel jackson because of the voice, but either way, it is animated well, and it actually portrays a similar energy to the real scene! it is great and funy to wqatch! good job mate!
NGstalagmite 2 years ago
i love tht movie
OfficialYungbooba 2 years ago
LMAO
animatercreator 2 years ago
Very well done. Awesome stuff.
OverlordJake 2 years ago
Really cool man. One of my favorite scenes from this movie. I recommend getting this one book called, " All About Techniques in Animation" It focuses a lot on camera angles, and all that stuff.. But anyways it's awesome, although it would look even more fresh with some different camera angles to add like a dramatic effect.
UltraMegaSmoof 2 years ago
Wow! nice graphics!! this looks really good!! clean as hell LoL
BADToonZ 2 years ago
yo u got skills man!! I really like this! fluent animation
carlitoway44 2 years ago
Well done mate. This is looking very smart! Like the style you went for. Keep up the good work.
LeeHasPencil 2 years ago
Great!
dahraf1981 2 years ago
Great looking characters and awesome lip syncing! Good job!
frankdiddly 2 years ago
LMAO....Say what again!
KartoonManagement 2 years ago
Good stuff ;)
Is that cut-out animation?
bashscrazy 2 years ago
no they are rigged and boned just like a 3d animation program.you draw all the layers in vectors and add bones to bring them to life all the other movements for example the mouth is a switch layer and manually animated within the time line thanks
hitmanimation 2 years ago
That was bloody brilliant!
Kie77 2 years ago
awesome animation
fluffyman2121series 2 years ago
Wow! This is absolutely your best work I think, character design is awesome, and I love the gun movement. Involving!
uolter81 2 years ago
great job guys =] 5/5
middledistanceproduc 2 years ago
GREAT job!
@TheAnimationEmpire actually gives some pretty good advice.
But beware of trojan horses.
CrappyCartoons 2 years ago
Trojan horses?
TheAnimationEmpire 2 years ago
Um it's an expression from an ancient Greek story. I think wikipedia might have an article about it.
CrappyCartoons 2 years ago
Right, right, right. But what's the Trojan Horse? I was wondering if you meant that I was going to ask to collaborate with him (as I think I've asked you in the past).
TheAnimationEmpire 2 years ago
I did offer, of course. And I'm sure HitManimation and I will collaborate in many different ways (probably both ways, him helping me and me helping him), but I just want to make it clear that I don't offer advice for anything in return.
The only requirement for my advice is the willingness to listen (and he listened to my last set of advice and appreciated it, which is why I gave so much more this time). So I only gave advice cuz he wanted it.
TheAnimationEmpire 2 years ago
Great work. I love the eyelid movement while he's talking. Very expressive. Keep it up!
teknekflozart 2 years ago
Dude, only take advice from people who have BETTER ANIMATIONS than you. Your animation is great. Keep following your own path. Your doing great.
YurAllStupid 2 years ago
I agree. Better animations, more experience, more success, etc. And this is also a great piece! I hope this starts getting better views.
- TAE
TheAnimationEmpire 2 years ago
@TheAnimationEmpire
thanks again for all your support
hitmanimation 2 years ago
rofl! thats kind of pretty good animation bro! keep it up ;)
cartoonking3 2 years ago 2
This is really tight..did u do this with Anime studio pro?
Kenwayoforeh 2 years ago
Lot's of possibilities here. Nice work.
bowlingballout 2 years ago 2
So although I got a ton of advice for you, this is your best effort, it's hilarious, and I hope it does well. You're improving at an incredibly fast rate (crazy fast), so keep it up!
Also, what makes this work well is that you have high quality voice acting (you cut corners by using voice from actors in a great movie), so keep that in mind. Find real voice actors.
Make the audio as good as the video. Music and sound effects help, but the voice acting makes it or breaks it.
- TAE
TheAnimationEmpire 2 years ago
Last one...
More advice... I think the guy in the chair looked skittish but not quite as freaked out as he could have. Maybe a little shaking (rather than the rocking motion you used) and eyes that go from small to super wide while he's shaking, kind of like that kid on South Park who drinks coffee. =^)
Also, the ending was a bit too abrupt. The white guy should have still been shaking a little after the dialogue, while Sam leans forward and closes in on a solid stare. =^)
- TAE
TheAnimationEmpire 2 years ago
... I also see a little bit of a bounce on his hands as he puts them down. That's awesome! Keep thinking about that.
Advice... so people aren't constantly moving. The next thing I recommend that you work on is trying to make your movements more "deliberate." What that means is that hand movements are great, but the hand jets out there, bounces a bit, sits out there with almost no movement and then later jets back (that's what I mean by "deliberate"-- the movement is motivated).
TheAnimationEmpire 2 years ago
Praise... I love where you're going with the character designs with this. The eyes are really done well (this increases with each vid you make). Keep that up. You also animated the eyelids very well. You even made Samuel Jackson's farther eye smaller... nice.
You also increased the speed of your movements... this is a HUGE improvement. Plus the timing is great (using movie audio makes it easier to have good timing), I also see a little bit of a bounce on his hands has he puts them down.
TheAnimationEmpire 2 years ago
Hahahahaha! Wow, this is awesome! If this wasn't a clip with so much language in it, I'd ask to help you promote it. You want to collaborate on something?
- TAE
TheAnimationEmpire 2 years ago
nice
p0nhc0 2 years ago