Favourite sin *episode 1*

[ALittleBitLonger2010]

For the disease, I forget what it's called but it's the leading death in the Edgar Allen Poe poems. His mother had it and his wife had it. I just can't remember the name of it GAH...watch me remember it later though.

[demiselenafan131]

1. awesome :D

2. all XD

i said aids and 105, 000, 052$ :D lol.

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[Xxs22101xX]

1) Cool!!!

2) All of it :)

You can make Demi's mom have bronchitus

It's a lung infection and it makes you cough up blood :)

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[bbkeyme]

1)Loved it <3

2)the whole thing

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[sayekuna10]

1. Love the plot! :)

2. Everything!

MORE PLEASE!!!

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[Mysti624]

Love the plot :)

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[AllAboutJEMI]

awesomee

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[likemelikemenot97]

Nice

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[jemiluv23]

i like it..its something new

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[StoriesChannel]

for

Demi: Min, you have _____. So let's go.

I put diabetes or cancer irdk ( i really dont know )

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Yeah, I couldn't think of something

[annisagirl11]

AWESOME MOREEEEE

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[TheNicole1022]

MAKE MORE!

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[EcilaCrown]

LOVE it!!! =)

ur amazing as always... just wondering how u could think of such an awesome idea..XD (jk) =PP

btw... long time no talk? ;)

to me it seems like it..XD

Alice♥

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lol the idea just popped into my mind

[EcilaCrown]

amazing... =)

incredible..^^

♥

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[xninjaloverr]

i like it!!

its to early in the series to say that i love it

soo you should continue ;D

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[PINAYL0VE]

LOVE the story plot, cant wait for the next one :)

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[XdemiXjoeXjemi]

That was awesome! I can't wait for more!!

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[MissStoryteller13]

awesome

When are you gonna post the next eppie =)

lol. jk Post soon!!!

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[demijoe16]

1. LOVE IT!

2. Demi: You want me to marry him?

Mr Oller: Yes. If you do so, I'll pay for the treatment and your studies in college (A/N: it's summer)

Demi: That's a big decision.

Mr Oller: I know *he gave her a card* Call me when you made up your mind.

Demi took the card and Mr Oller left after saying goodbye

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[Cathy1132]

awesome more!!!!

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More later since it's almost midnight and a half here

[Cathy1132]

ok =]

[MissLeigh120058]

1: What do you think?Awesome

2: Fav part?

Mr Oller: My son, Tony, is 21. He's gonna be in charge of the compagny so he needs a wife. People don't trust bachelors in business.

Demi: You want me to marry him?

Mr Oller: Yes. If you do so, I'll pay for the treatment and your studies in college (A/N: it's summer)

Demi: That's a big decision.

Mr Oller: I know *he gave her a card* Call me when you made up your mind.

Demi took the card and Mr Oller left after saying goodbye.

Awesome make more

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