Anyhow, you still lived up to your reputation, and even though this wasn't exactly your greatest work of art, you still are a fantastic artist, and compared with other GB Artists in Youtube, you would definitely be my Number 1.
To be honest, this song didn't really work for me. I got bored around 5:09, some of the tracks are just too repetitive for my taste. (You're still my favourite Garageband Artist, be assured in that).
From 0:53 to 1:30(ish) the drum beats were way too long in my opinion. Yes, you did add the extra 'bongo-like' drums from 1:09, but it would have been better if you had started what you did at 1:35(ish) at 1:22(ish). Not that I'm criticising your taste in composing, it's just what I would have done in your position.
First things first, the name didn't exactly suit this song. A guy kicking his 'old friend' off the edge of a cliff isn't really a trance/techno style theme. If you were to base your song around the name, then something more dramatic and fiery should have taken its place.
Anyhow, you still lived up to your reputation, and even though this wasn't exactly your greatest work of art, you still are a fantastic artist, and compared with other GB Artists in Youtube, you would definitely be my Number 1.
RkdKu 1 year ago
To be honest, this song didn't really work for me. I got bored around 5:09, some of the tracks are just too repetitive for my taste. (You're still my favourite Garageband Artist, be assured in that).
RkdKu 1 year ago
From 0:53 to 1:30(ish) the drum beats were way too long in my opinion. Yes, you did add the extra 'bongo-like' drums from 1:09, but it would have been better if you had started what you did at 1:35(ish) at 1:22(ish). Not that I'm criticising your taste in composing, it's just what I would have done in your position.
RkdKu 1 year ago
First things first, the name didn't exactly suit this song. A guy kicking his 'old friend' off the edge of a cliff isn't really a trance/techno style theme. If you were to base your song around the name, then something more dramatic and fiery should have taken its place.
RkdKu 1 year ago
Your good at beats, and I also suggest getting a nice usb mic, such as the blue snowball and just digitalize your voice then put lyrics! Good Job!!!!
ipodtouchkid58 2 years ago
dude this is awesome
EnergyPigeon 2 years ago
once again.. good one
vkbl111 2 years ago
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Interesting song, it has a really unusual sound.
remedyz0802 2 years ago 2