Amazing. Singing? Just then It could be put in brit pop. If isn't already =] That really is amazing. Good Job. Add a very slow part. Just before the build up. A very slow part with the melody only. Then. Come in with all your power and emotion and the chords of course. Great. =]
This is such a delicate peice, its really amazing. Btw with the trills, i think if you added grace notes would be a bit to bluesy. Thats my opinion. This was a good peice, you should be proud :D
I like this composition alot! well done, theres alot of contrast in it liking the speed change and rubato :). Although it sounds like clocks by coldplay at one point, is that deliberate? And i would say maybe replacing some of the trills with grace notes as they can get a bit predictive further on in the piece (although thats just my opinion, its your piece and it sounds good anyway).
aww dats realli pretty. I luv da way the high piano plays the tune - is that a voice part? I love ure chord sequence, used quite alot, but sounds awesome. This could be put into a film - strings would sound nice! xx keep it going
Wonderful piece GReat
pcma1970 2 years ago
Amazing. Singing? Just then It could be put in brit pop. If isn't already =] That really is amazing. Good Job. Add a very slow part. Just before the build up. A very slow part with the melody only. Then. Come in with all your power and emotion and the chords of course. Great. =]
fryster123 2 years ago
This is such a delicate peice, its really amazing. Btw with the trills, i think if you added grace notes would be a bit to bluesy. Thats my opinion. This was a good peice, you should be proud :D
keepyouth 3 years ago
Im the same, a* comps but i got an...umm E in theory.
Btw this was an awesome peice of work 5/5!!
keepyouth 3 years ago
This is sooo good
Neciiee 3 years ago
I really like it. What grade did ya get?
anna258 3 years ago
I like this composition alot! well done, theres alot of contrast in it liking the speed change and rubato :). Although it sounds like clocks by coldplay at one point, is that deliberate? And i would say maybe replacing some of the trills with grace notes as they can get a bit predictive further on in the piece (although thats just my opinion, its your piece and it sounds good anyway).
BlueTempest91 3 years ago
Luke!!! darn your coursework is better than mine! well...anyway good song!
STRINGER 4 PROM KING!
CompressedBread 3 years ago
Wow...this is amazing!
It's so beautiful!! I think you should persue a contract, if you haven't already.
DanceSisters 3 years ago
thank u:)yeh i wrote it for part of my gcse cw
lukurs12345 3 years ago
well its really good and im sure u'll do well! also, luv it how sum1 walks by the window rite at the end!
goldluck1990 3 years ago
omg, that was soo good! did u write it urself? i wish i could compose and play as well as that!
goldluck1990 3 years ago
aww dats realli pretty. I luv da way the high piano plays the tune - is that a voice part? I love ure chord sequence, used quite alot, but sounds awesome. This could be put into a film - strings would sound nice! xx keep it going
xxluvindamusicxx 3 years ago
I totally don't know you, but I'm absolutely LOVE this song! =]
CALL ME!
Haha jk.
But I love the song. :)
BrittyDawn16 3 years ago