It needs improvement IMHO. The chorus sounded really cool, but you should have kept the original rhythm for the verses. That new riff just doesn't hook me at all, it's too big and I think the new more flamboyant and elaborate melody had the same problem. I suggest trying to keep it closer to the original or at least trying a different verse riff. Also a couple of the words are wrong but most people wouldn't notice that. It has major potential tho and you are a great player and singer.
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jessejafrnd 2 months ago
It needs improvement IMHO. The chorus sounded really cool, but you should have kept the original rhythm for the verses. That new riff just doesn't hook me at all, it's too big and I think the new more flamboyant and elaborate melody had the same problem. I suggest trying to keep it closer to the original or at least trying a different verse riff. Also a couple of the words are wrong but most people wouldn't notice that. It has major potential tho and you are a great player and singer.
MrLetsdolunch 6 months ago
I love this version.
whiddershins 11 months ago
Beautiful Leah! Really powerful interpretation.
mjgolden2000 11 months ago