Renesmee Cullen's Story Episode 1

[LindaNC1]

i dont like the fact YOU made a @ss hole

[iHeartJmBbyx]

don't listen to haters! 

[twilight777100]

sfs

[TheJenny2912]

he bella did not die get ur shit rite before publishing

[mistyplayer365]

@TheJenny2912 I am so tired of explaining. You don't have to act like a bitch. This is all fake and made up. I know she didn't die. Chill out.

[megaijsbeer100]

its jackob black ... not jackob wolf

[corneil321]

The begining was correct but the rest is all wrong.

1.Bella DIDN'T DIE!

2. Edward would suicide if bella DID die.

3.you left out the parts about how the voltri comes to destroy renesme

and how bella and edward and the rest of the family go to battle.

[mistyplayer365]

@corneil321 I realize this. I read the books. Why don't you pay attention? This is fake. You don't need to inform me with things I already know.

[teamedward1100000]

its good but edward is already scareing me cause of hie behavior! in this he is a jack ass

and look at my freakin name! that has to be somthing comeing from me!

[TheKim7007]

renesmee only shimmers but not enought to keep her inside on a sunny day

[TheKim7007]

i think if you dont like the story dont watch it and it's called a story it dont have to be all facts......make more i want to see were it goes from there.....

[xprincessa13x]

its jacob black not jacob wolfe

[EdwellaStelena4ever]

girl sorry aber i cant believe you killed bella XD

[xcheermadx]

hmmmmm this is a little different but hey ou can't make it the SAME so everyone shut up! i would like to see more of this if you still do it?

[disturbedme5]

Not really liking this version at all... and the music is a terrible choice to go with the story. The music is so annoying I wanted to put it on mute.

[mistyplayer365]

@disturbedme5 Thats because I had to audio swap it. I always mute the music when I watch this anyway. You think I LIKE this? Um, no.

[Funbunny64]

Umm u know Alice has a different picture. AND WHY(don't take this personal) DOES EDWARD HATE HER!?! poor Renesmee.. :'( Jacob and Renesmee is my ALL TIME FAVORITE COUPLE!!! THUMBS UP IF AGREE!?!?! :) :D ;) =D 8) <3

[maribella1558]

I LOVE THE SERIES DONT LISTEN TO THE HATERS BUT IM CURIOUS IS JACOB IN IT

[AwesomeTheCoolLol]

can you add emmet in it?

[alessaxgillespie]

out of character completely, Edward wouldnt hurt Renesmee even if Bella had died.

HOWEVER, I loved how Alice and Jasper were them selves. You have them perfectly. Theyre almost like her parents. If i was to watch this further id want her to live with them so she didnt have to live with your version of Edward. haha

[mistyplayer365]

@alessaxgillespie

Listen, this is how I made the story. But thanks for your comment. I know how the saga ends. I know Bella doesn't die and I know that Edward won't ever do that to Ren! But if you don't like it don't watch it.

[LittleMissPede11]

Where's Jacob and Bella didn't die

[mistyplayer365]

@LittleMissPede11

No duh. Its a story!!! I can change it!

[priscillalopez2000]

@mistyplayer365 Have you read the book? because i got a question.... does renesmee sparkle in the sun even tho she is humna but still half vampire? please answer :) thanks

[mistyplayer365]

@priscillalopez2000 Yes i have read the book. I don't actually remember f she sparkles or not but I think she does. And if she does oh well. In this story she doesn't. lol. :) 

[hannon765]

ok... not loving it!! dont c me reading anymore of it.. but i have read worse. So keep up your story.

[princess50435]

U know get your facts straight you BITCH. If she died in the 3rd book renesmee wouldn't have been born so how did she have a kid if she fell of the  cliff in the 3rd book. not so smart now huh.?? And don't tell me what to do.=) By

[mistyplayer365]

@princess50435

No you get your facts straight.

First Bella jumped off the cliff in New Moon. The SECOND book. Jacob saved her. So she didn't die. Dumbass!

[soto1111111112]

@princess50435 mistyplayer365 is right, she did jump in the 2nd book, and there is no need to be cursing her out even if she got it wrong, so why don't you just STFU and enjoy the story bitch

[coolcat2239]

@princess50435 Your stupid

[EmmettCULLENsweety]

Hey but i think that Edward CAN'T hate her!She is the last thing from Bella!I think you shouldn't do that but...OK...

When will you continue?

[mistyplayer365]

Idk, but I will soon. Promise.

[criminalminds101]

please continue I want to see the next one please

[Xio2788]

Yes! Continue please! This is way better than other fanfiction I read so far from Renesmee's story.

[princess50435]

I hated it bella never died you screwed the whole thing up bitch.

[codynero8]

its called creativity ! u should try it some time :) if u dont like it, than dont watch it! in case u didnt noe thats a freedom & nobody is forcing u! :|

[kierra19989kierra]

I HATE EDWARD, is he supposed to b like an abusive father????

[TheTwlightFan1]

Update soon!!!!

[VAMPIRE6040]

wow!

i luv it!

this storys great!!

[surgarbabe96]

i hating edward right know, he is being mean, can't wait for the next one

[moviefan176]

luin it so far

[twilightfan1495]

love the story

[Twilight6191997]

luv this story so far hate edward poor bella