Your speech is organized, but a you should work on improving body language. You need to be more assertive, look up and make more eye contact. Rehearse the speech and consider using a couple of power point slides if you can incorporate them. You did a good job, but your body language hurts your credibility and gives your audience the impression you are not confident or maybe you don't believe in what you are saying.
Your speech is organized, but a you should work on improving body language. You need to be more assertive, look up and make more eye contact. Rehearse the speech and consider using a couple of power point slides if you can incorporate them. You did a good job, but your body language hurts your credibility and gives your audience the impression you are not confident or maybe you don't believe in what you are saying.
kal104u 6 days ago
That's was meaningful presentation, but you needed to sound more assertive or convincing, that is what persuasion is about.
samshamist 3 months ago
Powerful info, needs more emotion. I can imagine how much more powerful it can be with more enlightenment in your emotion.
Thejuggler1210 4 months ago
Could you please stands still! :)
TubeMunken 1 year ago
did you write this yourself?
Badbrad416 1 year ago
That's a really great speech! :) It helped me alot
cheeseytoast97 1 year ago