LTV Fanfiction Pt 3 : Neville's Discovery

[MsWeirdgiraffe]

Ahhhhhh I love the AVPS Reference!!!!!!!!!!!!

[kyndallb1000]

Your voice- killed me!

[potterlover7]

AVPS!!!!

[manicburns]

DYING

ABSOLUTELY DYING

Alex, you are a wicked, wicked genius XD

[TheSamanthaLynn]

Alex's voice here is just... wow. lol

[Peachweave]

PAHAHAHA actually laughed OUT LOUD, here on my own :D 'first time using the potty eh?" I was not expecting that!!!! oh how i love avpm/s <3

[xTheEvilEx]

This was absolutely priceless!!!! :D

[MrsJasperHale08]

lmao XD I am in the library at school and I accidently knocked my head phones out of my computer while watching this. So uhh yeah that was awkward.

Also see you Sunday!

[luvthepuff]

I need more awkward Neville/Draco. That was hilarious.

[HalfBloodRavenclaw]

I love the Snape voice! 'Also, I was the Half-Blood Prince.' Excellent!!

[sincerelykatieee]

"Also, I was the Half-Blood Prince."

XD

[robynlynncypher]

"First time using the potty, eh?"

AVPS reference? I think so :D

[sopaltenbass]

So many classic lines. I almost couldn't stop giggling throughout the whole video and had to pause it a couple times because I was laughing so hard. LOVED IT!

[malindizoo]

faaave

[TotallyTscopeTV]

Woah... you sound like you're pretty experienced at writing fanfiction...

But lol this was totally awesome and GENIUS. I write a lot of fanfiction, but if I were you, I would have found some way to turn it into a Snape or Draco slash fic... cuz that's all I do. If I were given a random topic like Neville to write about, I would have NO idea where to start, and I probably wouldn't have any fun with it. But YOU, Alex, are amazing at this.

[xoxdanielle18]

That was freaking awesome. Alex, you are awesome

[HallowsNotHorcruxes7]

This is exactly how fanfiction should be written.

[socomeoncourage]

your story voice sounds a little like Matt Britton.

[deanacrosson]

This is the greatest fanfic EVER!!!

[TheNevilleFangirl]

this was seriously one of the funniest things i've ever seen in my life!! so many great and random references, so many jabs at fanfiction, this was genius, my friend, pure genius!!

[xxbambixxlove]

show me your patronus...and i'll show you mine ;)

[Kill4Karamel]

Fanfiction. You're doing it right.

[Abaebae77]

yes, tie in some neville/draco shipping and AVPS makes the best fanfic ever!!!!!!

[MoggyMegs]

JOSS WHEDON REFERENCE! Alex gets better and better <333

[RoseBrazeale]

I seriously thought you were about to ship Neville/Draco, which would've made me run screaming from my house, into the rain, with my fingers plugging my ears if you actually did that. *shudders* Mary-Sue Snape was hysterical, though!

[WorldOfPsych]

Hahahaha, so awesome! =D

[ExpectoKiwiland]

HahahahahahahaHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA­HAHAAHahahahahahahahahAHAHAHAH­AHAHAAHHAHAHAHA...ha.

Thank you Mr Carpenter. I needed that shit-giggles. A lot.

Best Fan fiction.

[gmcdaniel1970]

As the story continues. . . . . Weirder and weirder it gets. But of course who else started it is the strangest one yet, but very short part of the story, even Rosi's part was a tad longer that Jon's, but Alex's is the longest yet and most thought provoking, hmmmm!

[nedy17]

Mary Sue Snape! XD

[Sarawkweird]

Lol. You made it weird. Somebody had to. :)

[jedi837563]

AVPM FTW !

[bitteninparadise]

Holy crap, that was EPIC!

[gateauxQ]

oooooooooooh my God, I can't believe you went there hahahah

[LunaLupinTonks]

oh my god "Mary-Sue Snape!"

[LunaLupinTonks]

bwahaha

"joss whedon's shows!"

[stefaneko]

God, I love you Alex.

[Episkey7]

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA AVPM potty reference!!!!

[xoYoursTrulyxo]

"also I was the half blood prince." Well done Alex!

[ely9793]

"First time using the potty?" Ohmygosh I'm dying.

[carrottop12292]

That was HYSTERICAL.

[PhoenixoftheDawn]

Does anyone recognize the voice he's using? It sounds so familiar but I can't place it. It's bugging me! 

[sgrant1100]

I love the AVPM reference. Awesome. :)

[krazy4kris]

Okay, between the AVPS reference, slash, and Mary Sues, that was probably the funniest thing I've ever read.

I read regular fan-fiction just because it's so dumb.

[twinkletoes121]

Um, WOW. Fanfiction-freakin'-tastic!! I was close to falling out of my chair from laughing, siriusly. Best fanfiction I've ever heard. :)

[LadyElric617]

Alex you are out of your mind.

Love it!

[lilyblueeyes4]

Love the AVPS reference in there and Snape's voice.

[HPPirates]

Love the little "inside jokes" lol.

This week is awesome :P

[heyitsleeuhh]

lol Joss Whedon reference <3

[KimTomPW]

A lot of people just looked at me as I laughed out loud!

[MUSICVALLA]

"First time using the potty too eh?"

^^ LOL!

I've never read or wrote any fanfiction. But looks like I'm hearing one now.

[englishshaw]

FIRST TIME USING THE POTTY TOO???!!!

[flowerfades]

I don't think I'll ever read a fanfiction again.

One, because I always laugh through the serious parts, (or any part for that matter)

and two, because none will ever be quite up to par.

[SamaLovesGuess]

And btw your Snape impression was ON POINT! XD

[SamaLovesGuess]

L.M.F.A.O! I'M DYING!!! THIS IS THE BEST ONE SO FAR!!! On a side note, I can't wait till you and the Remus Lupins let us know if you can make it to the #miamiyuleball! I hope hope hope you can!!!!

[HalfbloodPrincess72]

Mary Sue Snape.

Oh yeah.

[omfed74]

Oh, boy... That. Was. Perfection. I like how John and Rosi's parts are so serious, and yours is... Well... Yours...

[PigfartsIsOnMars4]

HAHAHAHAHHA AVPM reference, strange slash, non-existent perfect relatives (lol "Mary sue"- AWESOME), references to house animal traits that make no sense, OOCness abound. Lurve it!!

[EvilPonyRiderx44]

Awesome AVPS reference there Alex!!

[KnasMuuIda]

Yeah, you're doing it right. Sooo right. The classic 'describe the character by use of mirror', the overused 'non-existent relatives of a main character' and of course, what is fanfiction without 'straight people turning gay'. You have learned well Alex.

[KatieBug1431]

Best.Fan fic.ever. Alex wins!(:

[thischicksradx]

AVPS<3

[unrenderedmedia]

This sounds kinda gay

[KAcaution]

OH MY GOD. "First time using the potty too eh?" Oh AVPS. Good times.

[SamTheWis3]

"Snake-like laugh"? O_O how does that sound like... 

[MychalWasHere]

SO GREAT.

[LunabelleLily]

A Joss shout out aand an AVPM refrence in a Potter fanfiction. Ah, thr nerdy joy. :)

"What are we doing?" Being your awsome selves, that's all--though we're not offically in dangerous territory. Can't wait to see what poor Melissa does with this :)

[dftbaful]

oh buffy reference my fav :)

[Lezhara]

I smiled quite a lot during the fanfiction itself, but it was the "It's LeakyTV-eeeee...it's fanfiction WEEEEEK!" and the "WHAT ARE WE DOING?!" at the end that almost made me spew partially chewed Subway all over my poor laptop. XD

[lookdownimthere]

So at first I thought you were just doing a voice, and I was so impressed and then I realized you had just sped it up a little bit theeeen I felt stupid.

[z0mbiearms]

Oh my goodness. Pop culture references and awkward semi-sexual encounters.  Exactly what fanfiction should be xD

[anishaaxo15]

"Eat basilisk butt!" <3

[spongeyruler]

AVPS reference FTW!!!! Lol. I laughed so hard at that.. And your voice. Lol.

[xxxNarglesxxx]

"WHAT ARE WE DOING?!"

[indibimbi]

i love you. a very potter musical and sequal referances <3 and the idea of Draco and Longbottom hooking up

[myidiosyncrasy]

Your voice in this reminds me of Andrew form Buffy. Plus he's totally the type that would write fanfic.

[karaluvsketchup]

But the Joss Whedon reference doesn't make sense! It would have been like season 2 of Buffy!

Am I nitpicking? I think I'm nitpicking.

[Ravenclaw797]

HAHA YOUR VOICE, ALEX.

[TotallyTscopeTV]

lol "I was just on my way to the Room of Requirement. Also I was the Half-Blood Prince." This was BY FAR the funniest

[silverdoe65]

"Trio, he thought. I fancy that". Ahh I see what you did there :)

[MammaMia]

HAHAHAHA AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Words cannot describe this wonderful creation!

[iaMyla]

I... Am so... Confused XD I don't even KNOW any more! I'll just go lay down a couple of minutes. Then come back and try to watch this again :P

I thought you where going for a story that follows canon. So I was like... Draco? Snapes long lost niece? XD

[KatyaBella82]

Brilliant.

[LibrarianToBe]

YESSSS STARKID REFERENCE!!

[DementedNinjaChic]

Nice Joss Whedon throw in. xD That was absolutely brilliant! Mary-Sue Snape. Fantastic! You are truly amazing Alex. Truly amazing.

[SeverusFreakingSnape]

YAY Snape got in there. :D

[treesarenotblue]

I like that Alex couldn't help but laugh at his own jokes.

[theoryoferin]

oh lord. cracking up. between the voice and the subtle & not so subtle references back to other things and then the slash. and mary sue snape. xD

oh, alex. you are definitely doing this right.

[Blechluver]

You are the last person I would expect to write slash even if it is subtle. XD and OMG AVPS refrence!!!! Best part so far.

[silverdoe65]

Oh my wizard god! I love the "First time using the potty?" part. Gosh that was funny. I love the Snape voice btw.

[comikk13]

Mary Sue Snape. XD Also loved the -something-smells look you got when you were voicing Snape.

[4evaGTB]

O. MY. GOD.

Alex..... words do not express how hilarious this is.

[RavenclawTimeLord]

eat basilisk butt? XD that was so funny :D

[javajanekool]

I just loved that you included Joss Whedon in this! AWESOME! :)

[SkiesOfYellow]

Oh my gods, that was amazing.

[feasible]

"Curious slash intrigued slash worked up."

I see what you maybe unintentionally did there.

[CelticDreams]

Listening to this made me bust out laughing in the middle of a crowded room...I got looks. But that was one of the funniest things I've ever heard. I love for writing that Alex!

[nutc11]

that was hilarious now i can't get slytherins out of my mind THANX A LOT ALEX!!! oh and great voice by the way.

[Need4Speed5000]

I LOVE it!

[marblephoenix6]

Genius

[sarahsoliloquy]

Oh my goodness. So when John was giving his predictions for how the rest of you would handle your fanfiction pieces, I thought about it myself, and realized I had no idea what to expect from you, Alex. Clearly, I should've been expecting amazing things, because that was absolutely hilariously well-done! And I will have to keep that Joss Whedon line in mind for the next time I lament about his shows.

[PinkElephantFreak]

Eat basilisk butt? Nice one! I'm so using that! XD

[LimeSprite]

How can you say that with a straight face?! I was laughing the entire time!

[dimestoremystery]

oh so disturbing. hilarious but distrubing

[Nugatti]

i want to marry this guy.

[smilenose]

that was amazing.

<3

[melissaanelli]

"What are we DOING?!!?" my thoughts exactly! :SDLJ;lakdfjsa

[781228XX]

That. Was. Beautiful.

[beckarkottke]

wow. alex. i am stunned. i have no words...except for these words i am typing now.

[gabsperrea]

"First time using the potty?!?!" =]

[drdantepereirea]

First time using the potty eh!!!!!! Lol omg I thought of Lauren Lopez rolling around on the floor.

[donjuantriumphs]

Are you suuuuuuure that you've never written fanfiction before? 

[numbersmile]

Love the avps references, nice.

[arapanasati]

So. Much. Innuendo.

[myxgiftxisxmyxsong]

This is beautiful.

"I was on my way to the Room of Requirement. Care to join me? Also, I was the Half-Blood Prince."

[sn4kp4k]

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL i love this. see you in 2 weeks at the show :D

[nlm2nd]

LOLWTf is with the voice modification ?

[AlexanderCarpenter]

@nlm2nd i thought it was funnier. cos well. it is.

[MarianneRenoirW]

hahaha great! Can't wait to hear the end of the story!

[lunafan1209]

Oh, and what exactly did Neville "discover"? That Snape was the HBP?

[lunafan1209]

And John said you wouldn't write anything =) LOVE LOVE LOVE!!!!

[lilyhp27]

LOOOOOVVVEEE ITTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!