Pit Stops To Hell

[13whakeekeespirit13]

looks amazing

[Bloodike]

fajna laska ale ten efekt krwi wszystko psuje :/

[wbworkout]

So what is this suppose to represent? I think it is another pitiful example of our cultures proclivity to violence as entertainment.

[verosashadows]

yourite!  congratulations. and i put the full in pitiful :)

[GreenRamen]

so was that was danzig or samhain at the end...what song?

[filmmack]

Red blood in a black and white "found" film. Never though I'd see the day. Seriously, what made you chose to make the only color in the movie, the cgi blood splatter in your film?

[DreamEater042]

what's the music?

[slashymckill]

Love it! Love the music. Love the style! Amazing! Great suspense buildup.

I feel bad that I never got to these sooner, I just recently got internet set up and all of that (It's been like a year since I've been on here.) I'm blown away. Looking foward to more!

[0111Daniel]

nice movie! I like the blood effects!

[imuahawaiianfilms]

This was awesome... You must really like making films.. Just like I love making parodies...

[greenwallsRcool]

hell yeah I wanna see more of this

[kadieessex]

well done. We'd definitely like to see more

[ChildofBdom]

nice girl=)

[JustinaTiana]

Liked it alot, if the man was moving more it would seem like they are having a conversation. Good filmmaking could work as a feaure it would be like Diary of the dead only scratch the zombies.

[World2008rain]

love the style... very experimental which i always like.

the heartbeat was very well done.. i wasn't a huge fan of the style of the bloodshed i felt it was a bit too "comic" and took me out of a realistic scary vibe into a comic style vibe.

i think it has potential to be a full length if it didn't sell out and kept this same style and vibe definitely.

[nailler7]

nice little short. not sure if it would work as a feature if done in the same style. but who knows it could be interesting.

keep up the good work.

[redredbull17]

hey man that was intense .. just keeps you wondering when why. brilliant .. btw the blood when he got shot was red it to me didnt look good with the black and white film but good though

[rabbeefazle]

its nice. interesting concept. try to make better composition. waiting to see next one.

[crimsonmoon92]

Are you going to make a movie?

[verosashadows]

I'm working on a script right now for a feature. I'll keep everyone updated :)

[Hippiegeo]

Interesting work

[popartproductions]

Great Vid.!!! and music! Keep us screaming! POPS

[mischivousnightshade]

Yes this would make a great feature, you have a great thing going in terms of ideas, and at this point all possible twists and turns that could relate are open. You're very creative, so if you want to take it to the next level, then hell yea go for it.

[knoxville1289]

Good :) Can't wait to see more of this..

[petreamurg]

good work!

[CatWaters]

5 stars

[conewells]

Another Blair witch/Cloverfield clone. But well done. Shoot in 24P video for your feature. Much cheaper to do.

[THEMinerva]

Good presentation! Can't wait to see more.

[rcfilmspat]

That was hilarious!

[loverboyryro15]

I love it. I would like to see more. I love the heartbeat and the music. Good job.

[jonnationfilms]

good work I think you should lean towards doing a feature. I would also try to fit in some more pratical movie FX as well blood/latex wounds/etc. All in all Great job keep doing what you do.

[jonnationfilms]

good work I think you should lean towards doing a feature. I would also try to fit in some more pratical movie FX as well blood/latex wounds/etc. All in all Great job keep doing what you do.

[poisonandygirl]

its nice!!

[alphonsedoinel]

While I find this style of 'fraud filmmaking' mostly a gimmick, it has produced some good films. With the success of Cloverfield and [Rec], it's probably going to become a fad, so I'd make this as soon as possible.

Good atmosphere though, I'd like to see more.

[DarkFairyTales88]

nic3!

[gnarly6154]

very nice!

[imperfection32]

looks pretty awsome and how did you get the blood

[verosashadows]

my first attempt at after effects.

[fleecyboy]

I suppose its well done but I just dont like gore. Thanks!

[wize11]

That was Cool.

[MessingWithMatches]

Oh! how nice... O.e'

[kingfbi]

looks good. Look forward to any news on it.

[strikexxaxxviolentxx]

That has very horror film potential. Texas Chainsaw-esq if you know what i mean. Love how it was filmed like an old time film. Good job and can't wait for the full feature ^_^

[shikishinobi]

Looks like fun. Very gore and very psycho. Depends on everyone's motives really. As long as the plot doesn't make a sudden dive for the ground.

Which Winter? Northern or Southern hemisphere?

[missheartless66]

The best thing about this vid for me is the splaater scene when they shoot him!!!cooooll!!

[coolgosh]

cool

[WarlordJerek]

Very cool, I think you should make the feature. I like how they put bags over their heads to increase the whole fear factor. Very creepy. I think it'd be interesting to see this played out in a feature. 5/5

[airbus124]

graet

[straker2]

The suspense was killing me...a little gory for me personally, but a definitely highly effective and compelling film. Well done, five stars from me!

Ade.

[cassey1228]

nice vid love it!

[JersyxGirl]

that was AWSOME

[RonanG]

5 Stars! Sets a style that's dynamic yet is rooted firmly in YouTube amateur voyeur if you get my drift. Definitely on to something here Josh.

Ronan

[kavtoM]

what the hell?!!!! O.o

[thelonefilmmaker]

with your style you can't loose... though I think the 'holiday video' style that you have adopted here is partly what makes it so great - even if you don't shoot it 8mm, I would at least aim to keep it as though you are watching the story and the relationships from the perspective of their camera... but that's just my opinion. :-)

[maximiliaan1995]

really good i think it is amasing just wondering if the wholl film will be like this or is there diologe and plot to come because this is just to people getting shot really nice job tho can you tell me what camera u used

[ridlazz921]

love it =D

but have you seen American Gangster ?

i would love if you made a movie whit the same kind of character that russell crow played. i love the way you are telling the story on ! keep on the good work, would like to see some more from you :) from your fan ridlazz921

[follarband]

awesome, that's all I can say.

[djdonchar]

muy bueno gracias x compartirlo

[myshortflims]

I definetley liked the look of it & it did get me curious ..kind of reminded me of the blair witch project. Just thought there was too much time wasted before she shoots the first guy. Second gun shot looked great.

As they say "content is king" so go with the confidence you have in your script.

All the best

[TheForgottenFlesh]

Eccellent video. Great use of Danzig. I'm curious what camera you used.

[gnarly6154]

awesome film! question, how did you get the old fashion film look? use a actual film camera? hard to come by these days and get on youtube lol

nice job anyway

[Guregru09]

were they having a conversation while the women was holding the gun to the guys head?

but anyways this was really great and hope it becomes even more awesome when its finished, it desrves 5/5

[tomasleeman]

That was sick great music nice blood against black and white. Keep up the good work.

[canaan777]

josh this one is going to be good.we visite wisconsin in like a week too.so now i get to play music at some cafe

[Saiixx]

it would be sweet to see if the full vid

[migfoto]

congratulations..... is awesome.... ;)))

[jimmyslammer]

Very cool, sick and twisted, just the way I like it. The red blood doesn't work for me though, it shoud be in black and white like the rest of it otherwise it destroys the authenticity you have going. Great work!

[liascottprice]

Very nice! Hope it becomes a feature! :-)

[MidwestMex]

i liked the camera look. and the ending blood splat at camera. what editing software did you use? After effects?

[kevNchris445]

lmao good job on the blood effects ..i guess

yea it looks like a messed up video. i would probably watch it. i love ur editing

[hairgrows]

lol looks cool i suppose, id watch it

[kelnahxo]

i really like how intense it looks. the black and white with the moving screen sort of gives it an older horror feel but then the modernness of it makes it a cool twist

[sacrificaltotem]

interesting i like the shaky cam i like the black and white it feels right for this kinda story very interesting ,

[666RoseMary666]

I agree with gorboy on this video.

;)

[gorboy]

Looks like dark and twisted fun. Stretch it out! I like the premise. If you don't do a feature out of this, I might personally have to kill ya ;)

[LemonOperations]

Yea, it really does remind me of Natural Born Killers. I'd definitely like to see where this goes... possibly some unexpected plot twists? =P

[twloharms]

Oh, well

I don't know what. . .

I didn't knew what to expect, but well, this was weird :]. Like a bad dream or something but well, nice work ofcourse, I'll give it a 5. :)

[mischivousnightshade]

Dramatic without words, and very tense with little preliminary part {giving a sense of who cares about the why, but a wow check that out.} in essence, that was really awesome!

[Dimezzdoe43]

that was really good!

[jweinrub]

That was pretty good dude!

[Saiixx]

this video was added the day my father perished.

[gorboy]

Great! Nice choice of music too. But if you make it a feature with these same visual effects, they might grow tiring.

[SerialExperimentsPro]

Nice, blood effect quite astonishing, how did u managed to get it?

[Saiixx]

maybe it was real.....

[alteredeffect]

Reminded me of Natural Born Killers as well. Why did you choose to have the blood in colour when the rest was in black and white?

[verosashadows]

Because the contrast of it looked wayyyyy better than leaving it black & white IMO. Just another part of my style I suppose :)

Plus it just looks cooler doesn't it? lol

[buddymanguystuff]

Really cool man, love the effects.

[thelonefilmmaker]

Your style makes you great. ...A scene done thousands of times in hundreds of films, and you make it fresh.

[guthriedm]

Pit Stops to hell=Oliver Stone and Natural Born Killers...